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~bewafai ka ye gam aisa chaaya~ - 24th October 2015, 12:45 PM
mera saya bhi na unhe ab raas aaya
bewafai ka ye gam aisa chaaya
tha jinhe naaj meri rooh ki chaanw pe
uske saaye se bhi wo ab hai katraya
ishq ne ye sitam mujh per kar diya
mere hi humdam ko mujhse judaa kar diya
ye dard na hai ab saha jata
uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
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24th October 2015, 01:22 PM
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mera saya bhi na unhe ab raas aaya
bewafai ka ye gam aisa chaaya
tha jinhe naaj meri rooh ki chaanw pe
uske saaye se bhi wo ab hai katraya
ishq ne ye sitam mujh per kar diya
mere hi humdam ko mujhse judaa kar diya
ye dard na hai ab saha jata
uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
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27th October 2015, 07:51 AM
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mera saya bhi na unhe ab raas aaya
bewafai ka ye gam aisa chaaya
tha jinhe naaj meri rooh ki chaanw pe
uske saaye se bhi wo ab hai katraya
ishq ne ye sitam mujh per kar diya
mere hi humdam ko mujhse judaa kar diya
ye dard na hai ab saha jata
uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
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27th October 2015, 11:34 PM
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mera saya bhi na unhe ab raas aaya
bewafai ka ye gam aisa chaaya
tha jinhe naaj meri rooh ki chaanw pe
uske saaye se bhi wo ab hai katraya
ishq ne ye sitam mujh per kar diya
mere hi humdam ko mujhse judaa kar diya
ye dard na hai ab saha jata
uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
Uske bin to ab hai na raha jata..
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