chalo maikhane me

henna · **chalo maikhane me -** 4th January 2002, 07:54 PM

phir is dil me aag hai
door door thak aaj dhooan hoga
chal is aag ko bujhaye
maikhana tho khula hoga

najane kaisa aaj yeh raat hoga
har jaam me aaina hai
lag tha hai khud se mulaqat hoga

ek qayamat aaj hogi
apne jaam se na koyi judaa hoga
har ek ka sar jhuka hai
sakhi tere mehfil me khuda hoga

plz let me know what you guyz think of it

786fahim · 15th March 2002, 09:02 PM

that was fantastic shayer
net ko aur mahkaane ke liye sher likhti rahiye

let me try one
tu jab bhi aati hai shayri mai bahar aa jaati hai
peeke mehboob ke badan ki sharaab
jindgi jhoom jhoom jaati hai

henna · 8th October 2002, 07:56 PM

hEY THANKS FOR YOUR REPLY.
iTS BEEN AGES SINCE I LOGGED ON SO SORRY I DIDNT REPLY ANY SOONER
tHATS A VERY NICE VERSE YOU WROTE THERE- kEEP IT UP!

DHUAN DHUAN HOGAYA THA SAMA JAB BARSAAT ME MAINE PIYA THA
AAG THA YA ANSSOO THA, JANE KYA MAINE PIYA THA
TOOTA HUWA DIL LEKE MAIKANE ME JEE RAHA HOON MAIN
ABH SOOCH THA HOON KYA KABHI MAIN JIYA THA

786fahim · 11th November 2002, 08:10 PM

hi!
good one!

keep it up like this only.
here one from my side,not on mahkhana

HUSN KO CHAND JAVANI KO KAMAL KAHTE HAIN
TERI SURAT NAZAR AAYE TAU USE GAZAL KAHTE HAIN
SANGEMARMER SE TARASA HUA TERA YE BADAN
LOG DEKH KAR ISE TAZMAAHAL KAHTE HAIN

BYE
FAHIM

karamjaan · 21st February 2008, 08:27 PM

Ab To Aisa Lagta Hai Ishq Mout Se Badi Saza Hai,
Kya Kare Kisi Se Shikayat Jab Mukaddar Hi Bewafa Hai.

karamjaan · 21st February 2008, 08:28 PM

Zindagi Ne Itna Ghum Diya Kisi Ka Ghum Yaad Na Raha,
Jab Baithe Maikhane Mein To Kya Desi Kya Rum Yaad Na Raha....

karamjaan · 21st February 2008, 08:30 PM

Hame Apno Ne Luta Gairo Mein Kaha Dum Tha,
Mar To Us Din Gaye Jab Maikhane Mein Sharab Kam Tha,

vineet_singh201 · **reply -** 22nd February 2008, 09:50 AM

Hi

a great shayri .

sahil_ludhiana · 22nd February 2008, 03:29 PM

ma mar jana si ajj lOKO
OHDE KAHAN UTE JEUN LAGA
MA LIKDA NAHI SI SHARE PHALA
OHDE JAD'CHO SHARE BANAUN LAGA

sahil_ludhiana · 22nd February 2008, 03:37 PM

Ham Ko Pather Aur Kudh Ko Pull Kahkar Muskaraea Karte Hai
Unhe Kya Pata Pather To Pather Rahte Hai Pull Hi Murjaea Karte Hai

alone anum · 4th March 2008, 03:22 PM

nice poetry janab henna
kya kehti hai ye nazrein
kya ye dhadkano ki aawaz ko sunti hain
kya ye us andekhe anjaane dhundhle chehre ko dekh paati hain
kya ye yaadon ki kitab mein uski tasweer dhundh paati hain
kya ye haya ki rangat se bani muskaan pe uska aks dhundh paati hain
kya ye khamoshi ki chadar ode shabdo se us ajnabee ka naam puchh pati hain
kya ye un uth ti palko se aur un jhukti palko se uska pata jaan paati hain
kya ye un ehsaaso ko mehsus kar paati hain jo hamesha hamein us ajnabee ki yaad dilati hain
kya kahu
gehri hain par inmein khwabo ki rangat hain
khamosh hain par ankahe shabdo ka inmein sagar hain
kaali gehri hain par inmein haya ka noor hain
jo kuch na kehkar bhi bahot kuch keh jaati hain
har kisi ko sirf apna deewana bana jaati hain
ye nazrein

alone anum · 4th March 2008, 03:23 PM

Kachi Deewar Hoon Thokar Na Lagana Mujh ko
Apni Nazron Mai Basa Ker Na Giraana Mujh ko

Tum ko Aankho Mai Tasawwoor Ki Tarah Rakhte Hoon
Dil Mai Dharkan ki Tarah Tum bhi Basana Mujh ko

Baat Karnay Main jo Mushkil ho Tumhein Mehfil May
Main Samajh Jaaonge Nazron Se Bataana Mujh ko

Waada Utna Hi Karo Jitna Nibha Saktay Ho
Khuwab Pura jo na ho wo na Dikhana Mujh ko

Apne Rishtey ki Nazaakat ka Bharam Rakh Lena
Main to Aashiq Hoon Deewane na Banana Mujh ko

Kachi Deewar Hoon Thokar Na Lagana Mujh ko
Apni Nazron Mai Basa Ker Na Giraana Mujh ko

mohammed zahed · 5th March 2008, 09:10 AM

Tumhain Maloom Hai Ham Ne
Kisi K Hijar Main Ye Zindagi Kaise Guzari Hai

Har Ik Khusboo Ki Aahat Per
Guman Us Ka Guzarta Hai
Har Ek Saat Pe Dil Aankhon Main Aaker Beth Jata Hai
Kai Pehlo Badalti Khuwahishain Hathon Ko Phelaie
Duain Mangti Aur Hanpti
Dil Se Guzarti Hain

Magar Jo Hijar Lahaq Hai
Wo Jism-O-Jan Ki Deewarain Girata Hai
Umeedo Beem Ki Aankhon Se
Beenai K Sab Manzaroon Ko Khak Karta Aur Mitata Hai

So Ham Bhi Khak Hain
Aur Khak Ki Qismat Main Likha Gia Hai

alone anum · 5th March 2008, 11:53 AM

banke ehsas meri dhadkan ke paas rahte ho
tasveer banke meri aankhon me rahte ho
aaj puchna hai ek sawal aapse..
door hoke kya aap bhi udas rahte ho.. ?

Aansuo ke girne ki aahat nahi hoti,
Dil ke tootne ki awaaz nahi hoti,
Agar hota khuda ko ehsaas dard ka,
to use dard dene ki Aadat nahi hoti

Har dhadkan me ek raaz hota hai ,,
Baat ko bata ne ka ek andaaz hota hai..
Jab tak Thokar na lage kisi Bewafa ka…
Har kisi ko apne Pyaar par naaz hota hai …
but meri suno bewafa koi nahi hota sab Waqt aur Haalaat ki wajah se bewafa banna padta hai

Har dhadkan me ek raaz hota hai ,,
Baat ko bata ne ka ek andaaz hota hai..
Jab tak Thokar na lage kisi Bewafa ka…
Har kisi ko apne Pyaar par naaz hota hai …

only anum · 6th March 2008, 06:27 PM

JAB DIL TUTTA HAI TO SHARAB SATH DETI HAI

JAB KOI YAAD AATA HAI TO SHARAB SATH DETI HAI.....

JAB ANKHO ME AA JATE HAI AANSU TO SHARAB SATH DETI HAI....

YE SHARAB BHI AJIB HOTI HAI YAARO ...

JISKE SINE ME DARD HO USIKA YE SATH DETI HAI....MY.HEART

$@#!L · 12th March 2008, 01:16 PM

Ek hasrat thi sachha pyar pane ki,
Magar na jane kyun chal padi aandhiya zamane ki,
Mera gamkoi na samajh paya,
kyunki meri aadat thi sabko hasane ki. {$}

Love Neha · 24th March 2008, 11:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by henna

phir is dil me aag hai
door door thak aaj dhooan hoga
chal is aag ko bujhaye
maikhana tho khula hoga

najane kaisa aaj yeh raat hoga
har jaam me aaina hai
lag tha hai khud se mulaqat hoga

ek qayamat aaj hogi
apne jaam se na koyi judaa hoga
har ek ka sar jhuka hai
sakhi tere mehfil me khuda hoga

plz let me know what you guyz think of it

acha hai khas kae "pehla band"

sabeen mahar · 11th February 2010, 11:45 AM

Pyaar Se Pyaar Karo Pyaar Ko Ruswa Na Karo,

Meri Toh Aadat Hai Tum Khud Ko Afsurda Na Karo,

Meri Bahon mein Chalay Aao Dartay Kyun Ho,

Gehrai Hai Buhat Dil Mein Yun Jhanka Na Karo,

Main Toh Aashiq-e-Deedar Hon Koi Rehzan Toh Nahi,

Betho Mere Paas Yun Mujhse Parda Na Karo,

Kon Chalta Hai Taman Umer Hi Sath,

Laikin waqt Se Pehl...e Toh Khud Se Juda Na Karo,

Badalon Ki Bhi Tum Ko Nazar Lag Saqti Hai,

Tang Qaba Ho Toh Barish Mein Nahaya Na Karo,

Bijliyan Girti Hain Kitnay sada Dilon par,

Aise Pe Parda Sehan Mein Aya Na Karo,

Tum Kya Jano Yeh Dil Ki Lagi Kya HOti Hai,

Kissi Masoom Se Yun Khaila Na Karo,

Dekho Nazuk Tumhari Ungliyan Buhat,

Inse Pholon Ko Yun Masla Na Karo,

Sham Dhalay Woh Pirota Hai Gham Apnay,

Tabassum Har Roz Usay Yun Mila Na karo.....!!!!

sabeen mahar · 11th February 2010, 11:46 AM

assallam-o-alekum kia halhain sahilmain new user hon plz mujhe batao kese posting hoti hai na he mujhe seprofile ban rahi hai agar aap repkr dane tu thz...

sabeen
ALLAH HAFIZ