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1st April 2009, 04:19 PM
Hi Everyone..
Chhoti hai kyunki thoda busy tha isliye isse paal pos ke bada nahin kar paaya.. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayenge ye "Ehsaas"
Sukoon-e-Jannat tera aanchal, gham mein ashnaayi mein,
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Maikhane mein teri aanko.n si nasheeli, bakhudaa, koi sharaab nahin
Teri "Chandni" Chand se zyada roshan, tera koi jawaab nahin
Teri saansein mehekti hain seene mein mere, tujhse judaai mein..
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Tere hothon ki nirmal haya, teri khamoshi sa kahin geet naheen
Nazrein jhukakar, palkon se izhaar-e-mohabbat, waisa sangeet naheen
Teri muskurahat sunaayi deti hai mujhe, saaz-e-shehnayi mein
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Aapki Rai zaroor dijiyega (Chhote Bachhan Ji agar padh rahe hain toh Aishwarya Rai na de dijiyega)....
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beautiful moment.........
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1st April 2009, 06:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Widhani
Hi Everyone..
Chhoti hai kyunki thoda busy tha isliye isse paal pos ke bada nahin kar paaya.. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayenge ye "Ehsaas"
Sukoon-e-Jannat tera aanchal, gham mein ashnaayi mein,
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Maikhane mein teri aanko.n si nasheeli, bakhudaa, koi sharaab nahin
Teri "Chandni" Chand se zyada roshan, tera koi jawaab nahin
Teri saansein mehekti hain seene mein mere, tujhse judaai mein..
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Tere hothon ki nirmal haya, teri khamoshi sa kahin geet naheen
Nazrein jhukakar, palkon se izhaar-e-mohabbat, waisa sangeet naheen
Teri muskurahat sunaayi deti hai mujhe, saaz-e-shehnayi mein
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Aapki Rai zaroor dijiyega (Chhote Bachhan Ji agar padh rahe hain toh Aishwarya Rai na de dijiyega)....
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oye hoye... mai mar java..........kya baat hai AMIT.....bahut khoob...bahut pyaare ehsaas hai....tumhe finally 'dard' se nikal kar 'ishq' pe ye khubsoorat ehsaas likhte dekh achcha laga...yu hi ALLAH tumhe hamesha khush rakhe ....keep writing dear....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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Chaagaye Amit Ji........ -
2nd April 2009, 03:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Widhani
Hi Everyone..
Chhoti hai kyunki thoda busy tha isliye isse paal pos ke bada nahin kar paaya.. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayenge ye "Ehsaas"
Sukoon-e-Jannat tera aanchal, gham mein ashnaayi mein,
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Maikhane mein teri aanko.n si nasheeli, bakhudaa, koi sharaab nahin
Teri "Chandni" Chand se zyada roshan, tera koi jawaab nahin
Teri saansein mehekti hain seene mein mere, tujhse judaai mein..
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Tere hothon ki nirmal haya, teri khamoshi sa kahin geet naheen
Nazrein jhukakar, palkon se izhaar-e-mohabbat, waisa sangeet naheen
Teri muskurahat sunaayi deti hai mujhe, saaz-e-shehnayi mein
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Aapki Rai zaroor dijiyega (Chhote Bachhan Ji agar padh rahe hain toh Aishwarya Rai na de dijiyega)....
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OYE HOYE ........CHAAGAYE TUSSI ..........AMIT JI .....................IT'S REALY A VERY GOOD RACHNA..........................
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3rd April 2009, 02:42 PM
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Originally Posted by Widhani
Hi Everyone..
Chhoti hai kyunki thoda busy tha isliye isse paal pos ke bada nahin kar paaya.. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayenge ye "Ehsaas"
Sukoon-e-Jannat tera aanchal, gham mein ashnaayi mein,
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Maikhane mein teri aanko.n si nasheeli, bakhudaa, koi sharaab nahin
Teri "Chandni" Chand se zyada roshan, tera koi jawaab nahin
Teri saansein mehekti hain seene mein mere, tujhse judaai mein..
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Tere hothon ki nirmal haya, teri khamoshi sa kahin geet naheen
Nazrein jhukakar, palkon se izhaar-e-mohabbat, waisa sangeet naheen
Teri muskurahat sunaayi deti hai mujhe, saaz-e-shehnayi mein
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Aapki Rai zaroor dijiyega (Chhote Bachhan Ji agar padh rahe hain toh Aishwarya Rai na de dijiyega)....
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Hi Amit...........Is baar tumhare 'Ehsaas' mein 'Chandni' hai.........mujhe bht achcha laga ye dekhkar ki tum bht khush ho.......i think all credit goes to 'Chandni'........tumhare likhe har 'Ehsaas' mein sirf 'Chandni' nazar arahi hai.........ek request hai samjho ek dost ki tarafse, thoda waqt nikaal kar sahyri-e-ishq mein koi aisi ghazal post karo jise tum apni 'Chandni' ko dedicate karo.........i hope u dnt mind
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3rd April 2009, 03:16 PM
wowww............. such a lovely poem brother.......................!
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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6th April 2009, 02:27 PM
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6th April 2009, 02:32 PM
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Originally Posted by Widhani
Hi Everyone..
Chhoti hai kyunki thoda busy tha isliye isse paal pos ke bada nahin kar paaya.. Umeed hai aap sabko pasand aayenge ye "Ehsaas"
Sukoon-e-Jannat tera aanchal, gham mein ashnaayi mein,
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Maikhane mein teri aanko.n si nasheeli, bakhudaa, koi sharaab nahin
Teri "Chandni" Chand se zyada roshan, tera koi jawaab nahin
Teri saansein mehekti hain seene mein mere, tujhse judaai mein..
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Tere hothon ki nirmal haya, teri khamoshi sa kahin geet naheen
Nazrein jhukakar, palkon se izhaar-e-mohabbat, waisa sangeet naheen
Teri muskurahat sunaayi deti hai mujhe, saaz-e-shehnayi mein
Bas tera, ik tera khayaal rehta hai, anjuman mein tanhaayi mein..
Aapki Rai zaroor dijiyega (Chhote Bachhan Ji agar padh rahe hain toh Aishwarya Rai na de dijiyega)....
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Oye hoye...
Tussi to bade badal gaye ho.....Kya baat hai????
Hummmm kuch kuch samaj sakti hoon..... yeh kiska asar hai.....
Amit, ehesaas bahot hee achhe lage...
aise hee likhte raho
khush raho
Tumhari Di
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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6th April 2009, 02:48 PM
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Thank U vadde bhai..... Waise nice reply....
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6th April 2009, 02:52 PM
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Hi Amit...........Is baar tumhare 'Ehsaas' mein 'Chandni' hai.........mujhe bht achcha laga ye dekhkar ki tum bht khush ho.......i think all credit goes to 'Chandni'........tumhare likhe har 'Ehsaas' mein sirf 'Chandni' nazar arahi hai.........ek request hai samjho ek dost ki tarafse, thoda waqt nikaal kar sahyri-e-ishq mein koi aisi ghazal post karo jise tum apni 'Chandni' ko dedicate karo.........i hope u dnt mind
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Hey Naaz.....
Is baar hi nahin, ab toh Ehsaas hi Chandni ka hai.... Haan alll credit goes to Chand ki main bahut khush hu..
Ji aapke kehne par Chandni ke liye kuch likh toh chuka hu. jaldi hi likhunga vaada hai mera.. Bas climax likhna baaki hai.....
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13th April 2009, 08:54 PM
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wowww............. such a lovely poem brother.......................!
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Thank U dude.. Many more to come....
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13th April 2009, 08:55 PM
Haan Ji Badal Toh gaya hu...
Ji Insaan ban gaya hai ye Pathhar Bhi
Sab uski mohabbat hai... Ab toh zindagi mein bas Chandni hi Chandni hai....
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14th April 2009, 08:01 AM
Hi Amit..
Wow...!!!!!!!!!!! its nice to see here..hmmmmm
This one is awesome..beautiful..
... haan yu hi likhte rahe ... aur khush rahe .. take care
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14th April 2009, 04:06 PM
Amit it's also a super Ahsas by Ahsas amazing, Such hai
mohobbat ka ahsas hi ajab hota hai,
Gume dhup bhi chaun nazar aati hai
Dil ko dard nahi dilber nazar aati hai
Keep posting we are waiting................
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5th June 2009, 01:32 PM
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Originally Posted by mann_chand
Hi Amit..
Wow...!!!!!!!!!!! its nice to see here..hmmmmm
This one is awesome..beautiful..
... haan yu hi likhte rahe ... aur khush rahe .. take care
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Hi Manu. Thanks a lot once again for appreciating my feelings....
Ur Friend,
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5th June 2009, 01:33 PM
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Amit it's also a super Ahsas by Ahsas amazing, Such hai
mohobbat ka ahsas hi ajab hota hai,
Gume dhup bhi chaun nazar aati hai
Dil ko dard nahi dilber nazar aati hai
Keep posting we are waiting................
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Baat toh sahi kahi hai bhai aapne aur kya khoob kahi hai....
mohobbat ka ahsas hi ajab hota hai,
Gume dhup bhi chaun nazar aati hai
Dil ko dard nahi dilber nazar aati hai
Waah.. Dil se daad.......
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