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Kabhi door tumse na jaya karenge -
5th August 2014, 05:19 PM
kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge
pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge
hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge
hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge
sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge
tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge
kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge
hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge
muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge
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5th August 2014, 07:31 PM
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6th August 2014, 11:27 PM
Waah bahaut khoob Mujeeb sahab ! Barjastagi zinda bayaan !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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7th August 2014, 04:46 PM
mujeebsaab,
bahot hi khub ghazal hai..
dheroN daad
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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10th August 2014, 08:13 PM
Masha Allah bohat khoob mujib sahab
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PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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17th August 2014, 08:49 PM
Thank you very much all.
I shall continue posting my poems for your kind perusal and appreciations.
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18th August 2014, 01:00 AM
wahhhhhhhhhh!!
Bohat khoob Mujeeb saheb!
reps added.
Aise hi meHfil roshan karte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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18th August 2014, 11:10 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurat gazal mujeeb ji dheron daad
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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23rd August 2014, 11:41 AM
Aadab Madhu ji
Bohut bohut shukriya aap ka.
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23rd August 2014, 05:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mujib66
kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge
pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge
hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge
hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge
sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge
tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge
kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge
hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge
muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge
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Waaahh.........
Bohut Sundar . pyaar se saraabore is ghazal ko humare sath share karne ke liye Shukriya.
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24th August 2014, 01:37 PM
waah waah mujib jee ...bahut sundar....daad..
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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25th August 2014, 01:09 PM
Aap ka bohut bohut shukriya mastiji ke aap ne waqt nikala aur mujh ko padha.
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25th August 2014, 01:18 PM
Adaab Aruji
Daad ke liye teh dil se shukriya ada kar raha hun
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4th September 2014, 01:57 PM
Sorry for late reply....Nazneen ji
Zarranawazi ke kiye shukriya.
Yun hi saath dete rahiye.
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30th October 2014, 10:50 PM
waaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Mujeeb saheb.
Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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31st October 2014, 01:51 PM
Bohut bohut shukriya Iftakhar Sb.
Yun hi saath dete rahiye.
Daon ke saathg.
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
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7th November 2014, 03:22 PM
मुजीब साहेब
उम्दा ग़ज़ल कही आपने .. मज़ा आ गया पढ़ के
हर शेर मुक़म्मल और एक दास्ताँ लिए हुए
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बाकी एक बेहद खूबसूरत ग़ज़ल पर दाद क़ुबूल फरमाएं
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7th November 2014, 03:37 PM
Quote:
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kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge
pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge
hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge
hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge
sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge
tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge
kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge
hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge
muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge
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Mujib ji.........bahut pyari rachna padne ka mokka diya hai aapne, aik aik lafz meiN pyar chalak rha hai...duaa karte hai aapki zindgi meiN hamesha yu hi pyar ka mausam rhe.
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7th November 2014, 04:43 PM
Bohut bohut shukriya Sunita ji.
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Duaon ke saath
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25th December 2014, 12:09 PM
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kabhi door tum se na jaya karenge
eh wada hamesha nibhaya karenge
pada gar kabhi door jana bhi humko
bohut jald ghar laut aya karenge
hamen kam se kam apni tasweer dedo
isi se gham-e-dil bhulaya karenge
hansi khushbu, rukh chand, madmast aankhen
kisi aur men hum na paya karenge
sada saath chalne ki rah-e-wafa men
jo bhi shart chaho lagaya karenge
tere saath waqt-e-khushi ho ke gham ho
bade pyar se hum bitaya karenge
kabhi dono aag-e-judai pe chal kar
nahin ek duje ko jalaya karenge
hain apas men lipti hui do kaliyan
oh lab jab khulenge hansaya karenge
muhabbat se jo pesh aya karenge
oh sab ki nigahon me chaya karenge
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Mujeeb bhai.......kya muhobbat hai....kya ehsaas hain aur kya alfaaz hain waaaaaaaaah
Behtareen gazal pesh ki hai aapne........dil se dheeron daad....
Aapka apna
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29th December 2014, 04:21 PM
bohut shukriya Bhushan Sb.
Duaon ke saath
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14th April 2015, 07:31 PM
Mujeeb bhai
Namaste
Aapki kpshisb ko padh ke achchha lagaa... dil se daad
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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Bohut bohut shukriya Dhaval Sb.
Duaon ke saath
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15th April 2015, 11:46 AM
khoobsurat peshkash mujeeb bhai...... once again i liked it alot...
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