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aaj phir tumhari kami hai -
3rd March 2006, 05:20 PM
Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai
teri chahat mein aaj phir bhool gaye hum jahan
Jahan tu nahi hai wahin teri kami hai
Jahan tu nahi hai wahi teri kami hai
Tere saath gujre woh din , woh pal-chin
teri yaad dilate wahi raat din
Woh suraj, woh taare woh thandi hawa ke jhonke
kya kahun ki aaj phir dene lage hain dhoke
Tere aane ki rraah dekhein galiyan saari
Sookhi sab nadiyan, phool, kaliyaan saari
Aa jao ke ab nahi hota intezaar
Nazarein bicha ke raah mein roti huun zaar-zaar
roti huun zaar-zaar
roti huun zaar-zaar
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3rd March 2006, 05:41 PM
apko kafi time baad padaa.. pehli baar padd rahi hoon...
bahut acchi creation hai aapki...
"Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai"
apka yeh sher bahut pasand aaya mujhe.. yu hin likhti rahiye
take care
bye
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
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duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
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3rd March 2006, 05:42 PM
Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai
teri chahat mein aaj phir bhool gaye hum jahan
Jahan tu nahi hai wahin teri kami hai
hmmmmmm....!
Jahan tu nahi hai wahi teri kami hai
Tere saath gujre woh din , woh pal-chin
teri yaad dilate wahi raat din
Woh suraj, woh taare woh thandi hawa ke jhonke
kya kahun ki aaj phir dene lage hain dhoke
beautifull...!
Tere aane ki raah dekhein galiyan saari
Sookhi sab nadiyan, phool, kaliyaan saari
Aa jao ke ab nahi hota intezaar
Nazarein bicha ke raah mein roti huun zaar-zaar
hmmmmmmm....!
Hiii,
Kaisi hain? I hope you are doing good and everything is going good too... Its nice to see u here after so long... accha likha hai aapne... saadgi se apne ehsaas bayaan kiya hain ... Can feel ur pain in these words .... maanaa woh door hain, magar jaldi hi aa jaayenge... aapke bina woh kaunsa reh paate hain....
Dont feel sad... ab humaara bhi to kucch rishta hai naa... to humaari khaatir hi muskuraa dijiye....
Do take good care of urself...keep smiling
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Hi masti -
3rd March 2006, 05:47 PM
hey masti gooooood work yar
Thanx 4 sharing here
Take care
Ur Manu
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Re: aaj phir tumhari kami hai -
3rd March 2006, 05:48 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by masti
Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai
teri chahat mein aaj phir bhool gaye hum jahan
Jahan tu nahi hai wahin teri kami hai
Jahan tu nahi hai wahi teri kami hai
Tere saath gujre woh din , woh pal-chin
teri yaad dilate wahi raat din
Woh suraj, woh taare woh thandi hawa ke jhonke
kya kahun ki aaj phir dene lage hain dhoke
Tere aane ki rraah dekhein galiyan saari
Sookhi sab nadiyan, phool, kaliyaan saari
Aa jao ke ab nahi hota intezaar
Nazarein bicha ke raah mein roti huun zaar-zaar
roti huun zaar-zaar
roti huun zaar-zaar
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soomder ahesaas .
khush raho.
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4th March 2006, 11:51 AM
Masti ji,
Divine simplicity...!!
Apna khayal rakhna
Rohin
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10th March 2006, 09:25 AM
Vasl-e-yaar ki hasrat dil aur honthon par Yeh taraane hai...maniye na maaniye hum bhi kuch aise hi dewaane hai
Dekh aasmaan ke taare hai kehte
Ki bas ek mere liye tu bani hai
kyun bhar aayi is tarah teri aankhon
inhi palkhon mein apni hasratein kuch buni hai
yeh kaliyan chaman ki mehakti bahaarein
kare kya tere bin yeh chanda sitarein
zindagi hi nahiN jo yaha tu nahi hai
meri dhadhkano mein kuch teri kami hai
kuch teri kami hai
kuch teri kami hai
aapke umda ehsaas ke aage to Yeh nacheez lafz kuch nahi par dil-e-hasrat bayaan kiye jaa raha hoon...
Yunhi likhti rahiYeGaa taaki yeh mast masti mein rahe..
Pulkit bhai sahi pakda hai!!
Qasid
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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10th March 2006, 07:16 PM
Ikhraar to humsay kiya,
phir pyaar ussay kiya,
dil to mera liya,
magar apni wafa usko diya,
oh jaaneman!Hum nay tumsay pyaar kar kay aisa kya bada gunaah kiya,
kee tunay huma humari apni zindagi say duur kar diya.
Is dil ko tadpaakay tumnay kaun saa bada kaam karliya
malo mali digde na hanju tenu yaad karke.........
kyo tun tur gyi aa menu barbad karke.........
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11th March 2006, 01:42 AM
masti ji bahut accha laga aapko padha
maine pehli baar aapki koi rachna padhi hai
padhkar accha laga
keep posting
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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22nd July 2015, 06:39 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by kuhulika
apko kafi time baad padaa.. pehli baar padd rahi hoon...
bahut acchi creation hai aapki...
"Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai"
apka yeh sher bahut pasand aaya mujhe.. yu hin likhti rahiye
take care
bye
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai
teri chahat mein aaj phir bhool gaye hum jahan
Jahan tu nahi hai wahin teri kami hai
hmmmmmm....!
Jahan tu nahi hai wahi teri kami hai
Tere saath gujre woh din , woh pal-chin
teri yaad dilate wahi raat din
Woh suraj, woh taare woh thandi hawa ke jhonke
kya kahun ki aaj phir dene lage hain dhoke
beautifull...!
Tere aane ki raah dekhein galiyan saari
Sookhi sab nadiyan, phool, kaliyaan saari
Aa jao ke ab nahi hota intezaar
Nazarein bicha ke raah mein roti huun zaar-zaar
hmmmmmmm....!
Hiii,
Kaisi hain? I hope you are doing good and everything is going good too... Its nice to see u here after so long... accha likha hai aapne... saadgi se apne ehsaas bayaan kiya hain ... Can feel ur pain in these words .... maanaa woh door hain, magar jaldi hi aa jaayenge... aapke bina woh kaunsa reh paate hain....
Dont feel sad... ab humaara bhi to kucch rishta hai naa... to humaari khaatir hi muskuraa dijiye....
Do take good care of urself...keep smiling
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Quote:
Originally Posted by acharya_mj
hey masti gooooood work yar
Thanx 4 sharing here
Take care
Ur Manu
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Quote:
Originally Posted by meena chheda
soomder ahesaas .
khush raho.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Rohin
Masti ji,
Divine simplicity...!!
Apna khayal rakhna
Rohin
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Quote:
Originally Posted by mast
Vasl-e-yaar ki hasrat dil aur honthon par Yeh taraane hai...maniye na maaniye hum bhi kuch aise hi dewaane hai
Dekh aasmaan ke taare hai kehte
Ki bas ek mere liye tu bani hai
kyun bhar aayi is tarah teri aankhon
inhi palkhon mein apni hasratein kuch buni hai
yeh kaliyan chaman ki mehakti bahaarein
kare kya tere bin yeh chanda sitarein
zindagi hi nahiN jo yaha tu nahi hai
meri dhadhkano mein kuch teri kami hai
kuch teri kami hai
kuch teri kami hai
aapke umda ehsaas ke aage to Yeh nacheez lafz kuch nahi par dil-e-hasrat bayaan kiye jaa raha hoon...
Yunhi likhti rahiYeGaa taaki yeh mast masti mein rahe..
Pulkit bhai sahi pakda hai!!
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Quote:
Originally Posted by punjabivirsa
Ikhraar to humsay kiya,
phir pyaar ussay kiya,
dil to mera liya,
magar apni wafa usko diya,
oh jaaneman!Hum nay tumsay pyaar kar kay aisa kya bada gunaah kiya,
kee tunay huma humari apni zindagi say duur kar diya.
Is dil ko tadpaakay tumnay kaun saa bada kaam karliya
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Quote:
Originally Posted by cute_ashu
masti ji bahut accha laga aapko padha
maine pehli baar aapki koi rachna padhi hai
padhkar accha laga
keep posting
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Shukriya aap sab ka isey pasand karne ke liye. muafi chahungi pehle main yahan aati thi aur post kar ke chali jaati thi.
aaj achaanak is par nazar padi to socha nahi karne se der se reply karna acha. aur kya pata aap mein se koi isey dekh paaye aur phir se SDC ki taraf rukh kare?
Aap sab ke intezaar mein.
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22nd July 2015, 06:57 PM
sarika jee bahut khoobsoorat lagi aapki rachna
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
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22nd July 2015, 07:57 PM
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sarika jee bahut khoobsoorat lagi aapki rachna
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
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ye kaafi puraani hai kareeb 9 saal puraani aaj aise hi iss par nazar pad gayi.
apko yahan dekh kar bohut acha laga.
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22nd July 2015, 10:56 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by masti
Kya kahoon ke aaj phir tumhari kami hai
Hasraton ki aankh mein aaj phir nami hai
teri chahat mein aaj phir bhool gaye hum jahan
Jahan tu nahi hai wahin teri kami hai
Jahan tu nahi hai wahi teri kami hai
Tere saath gujre woh din , woh pal-chin
teri yaad dilate wahi raat din
Woh suraj, woh taare woh thandi hawa ke jhonke
kya kahun ki aaj phir dene lage hain dhoke
Tere aane ki rraah dekhein galiyan saari
Sookhi sab nadiyan, phool, kaliyaan saari
Aa jao ke ab nahi hota intezaar
Nazarein bicha ke raah mein roti huun zaar-zaar
roti huun zaar-zaar
roti huun zaar-zaar
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Quote:
Originally Posted by mast
Vasl-e-yaar ki hasrat dil aur honthon par Yeh taraane hai...maniye na maaniye hum bhi kuch aise hi dewaane hai
Dekh aasmaan ke taare hai kehte
Ki bas ek mere liye tu bani hai
kyun bhar aayi is tarah teri aankhon
inhi palkhon mein apni hasratein kuch buni hai
yeh kaliyan chaman ki mehakti bahaarein
kare kya tere bin yeh chanda sitarein
zindagi hi nahiN jo yaha tu nahi hai
meri dhadhkano mein kuch teri kami hai
kuch teri kami hai
kuch teri kami hai
aapke umda ehsaas ke aage to Yeh nacheez lafz kuch nahi par dil-e-hasrat bayaan kiye jaa raha hoon...
Yunhi likhti rahiYeGaa taaki yeh mast masti mein rahe..
Pulkit bhai sahi pakda hai!!
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Waaaah....kya baat hai ji....kya ehsaas hain..bahut nazuk bahut pyare....
Bahut achcha laga aap dono ko ek sath padhna....
stay blessed....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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