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Bheed logon ki hata do, ki mein zinda hoon abhi -
11th August 2008, 03:30 PM
Kissi ranjish ko hava do, ki meiN zinda hooN abhi mujhko ehsaas dila do, ki meiN zinda hooN abhi mere rukne se meri saanseiN bhi ruk jaayeingi faasle aur bada do, ki meiN zinda hooN abhi zeher peene ki aadat thi zamaane waaloN ab koi aur dava do, ki meiN zinda hooN abhi chalthi raahoN meiN yooNhi aankh lagi haiN 'Dil' bheed logoN ki hata do, ki meiN zinda hooN abhi... Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
MujH ko yaad aane waale tu hi koi raasta bata de. |
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11th August 2008, 05:46 PM
Zakhmi dil Sahab aapne jo gazal post ki hai isko janaabSudarshan "Fakir" sahan ne likha hai aur bahut umda gazal baantne ke liye shukriya par ek baat jo gazal aapki na ho us par poet ka naam ya not maine likh diya kare...........TC
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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12th August 2008, 12:01 PM
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Its really a nice one.... Bahut achha laga aapki is nazm ko padhkar. Umeed hai aage bhi achha padhne ko milega. Khuda aapki kalam ko aur taaqat bakhshe. Khush rahiye........ Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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