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9th July 2014, 04:06 PM
Dosto ye meri pehli nazam hai
Sdc me main aaj hi join hua hu Maine ab tak apni koi nazam Nahi likhi kabhi kabhi kuch lafz aate hai Hontho pe jinhe akele me gungunara hu Par kabhi qalam me nahi utara ye nazm Kisi ne mere liye likhi thi ye ehsaas hai uska jo Ab bhi mujhme zinda hai aur hamesha rahega Soch raha tha yaha pehla post Kya karu is se behtar kuch samajh me Nahi aaya ummeed hai aap logo ko Pasand aaye  main hon patang tu hai meri dor tu hai meri dor marzi teri tu mujhe le chal jis oor marzi teri tu mujhe le chal jis oor..... sukh dukh jo bhi hon gawaara kar lu tere liye duniya se kinara kar lu phoolon ki saijh nahi chaaiye mujhe tu jo kahe to kaaton pe guzaara kar Lu kaise rahe door bhala chaand se chakoor main hu patang to h meri dor marzi teri tu mujhe le chal jis oor dil kahe phoolon ki qataaron me chalu shooqhi bhari maand se bhaaron me chalu chaaand ke jazeere main banau ek ghar saath liye tujh ko sitaaron me chalu jhoom jhoom gaaye yahi man ka mere mor main hu patang tu hai meri dor marzi teri to mujhe le chal jis oor...... piya tere haaton me hai meri taqdeer tu hi mere khaabon ki hai haseen taabeer palkon pe jalte hai ummeedon ke charaagh man ke dareechne main hai teri tasweer mujh se na chupa meri chit chor main hon patang to hai meri dor marzi teri tu mujhe le chal jis oor...... titli hu pholon ki panahono me rahu pyaar ki mahekti hui raahon me rahu tere her saasnson me sama jaao main or main hi teri nighaahon me rahon choo na sake tujhe gam ki ghataaye ghun ghor main hu patang to h meri dor marzi teri to mujhe le chal jis oor...... Hote hai shayad sirf nafrat me hi pakke rishte Warna ab to tan se libaas utarne ko mohhabat kehte hai log My smile is fake Ham aaj bhi apne hunar me dam rakhte hai Hosh Ud jaate hai logo k jab ham mehfile qadam rakhte hai........ |
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9th July 2014, 08:06 PM
Wlcm To SDC furqann Bro........n Aapki Pheli Poem Very Nice Hai..............Keep Writing............!!!
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9th July 2014, 08:35 PM
bahot khoob furqan saahab... shaayron ki maahfil me aapka ham istaqbaall karte hain...
likhte rahiye aur apne jazbaat baantet rahiye Shukriyaa Shaad... |
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9th July 2014, 11:54 PM
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Welcome to shayri.com furqan sahab Masha Allah bohat khoob surat nazm post ki hai aapne.. dil se dheron daad qubool kijiye signature sher bhi fit hai.. Yuhi likhte rahiye. . Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th July 2014, 01:40 AM
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shukriya bro aapke bina ye mushkil tha aap help na karte to shayad main ab bhi pareshan rehta k post Kaha se hota hai thank u so much ye nazam meri zarur hai lekin ise lafzo k moti Maine nahi nahi diye ye nazam kisi ka ehsaas hai jo mere liye lafzo me nazam ban k panno pe utre mujhe nahi Aata lafzo se khelna bs shoq hai shayri ka lafzo se khelne me abhi kache haa hum........ safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake....... 
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10th July 2014, 01:47 AM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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10th July 2014, 01:54 AM
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shukriya Zainy bhai aap sabka teh dil se shukar guzaar hu aise hi hosla afzai dete rahe aap sab Insha Allah kafi door tak saath saath chalna hai ummeed hai aap sab ka saath aise hi bane rahega safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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10th July 2014, 09:01 AM
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 safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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10th July 2014, 09:03 AM
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 Zainy bhai nahi, bahen hai yaar..... wese aggar dekhaa jaae to site ki bhai (don) zarur hai , khayaa rakhiyega apnaa.... hahaha lol   |
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10th July 2014, 11:49 AM
lol
 Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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10th July 2014, 12:36 PM
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hahhaha shukriya sameer shaad ji is liye taafi maang liya abhi abhi Sdc pe aaya hu don se saamna ho gaya maafi me bhalai hai safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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10th July 2014, 09:58 PM
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AsSalamAlaikm Furqaann bhaee!! KhushAamDeed! MashaAllah buhat aala tehreer kay saath entry kee haye aapnay! Welcome to the family ..bhaee! Buhat mutaasir huay aapkay kalaam say! Ommeed haye aap ka safar bayhad khushgawaar rahayga... Duago Ahmad and haan Shaad bhaee ki advice ko bilkul serious layna re Zainy Bhaai!!  Ahmad |
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10th July 2014, 11:34 PM
khushaamadeed furqann ji. is bazm meiN aap ka khair maqdam hai.
aap ko pehli nazm mubaarak. aur WWWWWWAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH !!!! kya haseen nazm kahi hai. ek madhur geet ho jaise. aap ko dheron dheron daad !!! duaoN ke saath ... zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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11th July 2014, 10:27 PM
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shaad bhai ki baat se pehle hi dara hua hu ab aap phir se bata k aur dara rahe ho safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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11th July 2014, 10:34 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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12th July 2014, 05:20 PM
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shukriya mohtarma nazneen saahiba safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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13th July 2014, 11:28 AM
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chaliye koi nahi ye bahaana bhi acccha hai kisi ki naraazgee se bachne ka....well u writes well, keep writing... Shaad.... |
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13th July 2014, 02:36 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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13th July 2014, 03:57 PM
Furqaan sahib....jaise ki aapne farmaya..ye nazm aapki khud ki nahi hai...kisi ne aapke liye
Iikhi hai ....bahut akhoobsurat hota hai ye ehsaas ...jab koi aapke liye apne ehsaas ko kaaghz par utaarta hai.........take care |
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14th July 2014, 12:52 PM
Furqannbhai,
Jiss ne bhii yeh nazm likhii hai... behad hi khubsurat aur dilse niklii baat jaise qalam ke zariye utaarii hai share karne ke liye aapka bahot bahot shukriya aur iis nazm pe dhero.n daad ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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14th July 2014, 03:14 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 03:22 PM
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aap sabka teh dil se shukriya kehta hu aap sab yaha aaye aur itni hosla afzai ki main is se pehle is namaz ko bs khud me gum rakha tha jab main ise yaha likh raha tha to socha nahi tha aap sabko itni pasand aaygi thank u so much all of u ummeed hai aap sab aise hosla afzai se saath dete rahege safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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14th July 2014, 10:41 PM
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ROFL..................... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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14th July 2014, 10:51 PM
hahahaha Hassan sahab ye kya hai???
safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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8th August 2014, 01:05 PM
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Waaahhhh................... ........ Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the Jab tak tum hum mile na the *pari* |
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8th August 2014, 11:20 PM
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safar yun hi Kat jaye khushyon bhara sa dua hai rahe saath yun hi hamara ye mehfil hamesha sab yun hi sajana ham na ho jahaa'n me to yaad rakhe zamana I like 2 wlk in rain bez its hide my tears bcz My smile is fake.......
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