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4th December 2014, 09:28 PM
Farzi ek lakeer se, Bharat-o-Pakistan bane
Baa-hum thae jo bhai, Hindu-o-Musalman bane Neem august ka woh toofaN sab kuch udaa ke legaya Lehlahate bagheeche shamshaan-o-qabrestan bane Royi thi woh maaN do bachchoN ko ladte dekh InsaaN ke he dushman, kab yeh insaan bane Mazhab ko jo becha hum ne zaalimoN ke haath Aman ke pujari ab toh nafrat ke ghulam bane Shams-o-qamar ne imtiyaaz kiya nahi kabhi Badal aur parindey bhi itihaad ka paigham bane Kar li hai taraqui humne har su be-shumaar Nahi magar huye hum-ahang, khatroN se anjan bane Muntizar huN 'AASHNA' ke bhar jayenge sab zakham Hasrat hai ke phir yeh purana hansta sa guldaan bane SAGAR AASHNA **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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4th December 2014, 10:32 PM
Sagar saaheb
Namaste Aik achchhi koshish aur aik achchhi soch ke liye dil se daad...aage bhi apni koshishon ke zariye bazm kii shaan badhaate rahiye... Dil se daad...khush rahiye....apnaa khayaal rakhen Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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4th December 2014, 10:41 PM
Namaste Dhaval Ji.
Bahot bahot shukriya hausla afzayi keliye. Yunhi rehbari karte rahiyega. Mujhe aap jaise rehbaroN se bahot kuchh seekhne ki tamanna hai. Ek baar phir se tahe dil se shukriya. SAGAR AASHNA **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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5th December 2014, 12:30 AM
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Kya kahun aapke is khayaal ne aankhen nam kar di...Bahut umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne aur aise hunar ko nacheez ka salaam....pur asar Yeh sach hai bhai ki do mulqon ki is ladaai mein jeeta koi bhi nahiN hai par afsoos ki baat hai ki taab-o-taaj ke shauqeen hameshaa aisi rudaad ko dar kinaar karte aaye the aur karte rahegaa.. aapka maqtaa jin din ka saveraa dekhe aisi subaah ke liye aakhen muntazir hai... Maine bhi kuch waqt pehle aise hi jazbe kalamband kiye the aapki nazar http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=56115 Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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5th December 2014, 11:51 AM
Masha Allaah saagar saahab... kya kkhoob peshkash huii hai aapki jaanib se....
dil bhar aaya meraa aur sach kahun to bbahot afsos hota hai ye sab dekh kar..... kaash ke ham sab aapas me ye nafrat bhulaakar bhaichaare se ye zindageee jiyen... sab khush rahen aabad rahen yahi duaa nikaltii hai mere dil se...... likhte rahen PS- mast bhai aapke kalaam par wahi comment dene ja raha hoon...... dil jeet liyaa aapne bhi saahab..... Shaad..... |
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5th December 2014, 12:04 PM
Bahot bahot shukriya Mast Saahab hausla afzayi keliye.
Bahot takleef hoti hai dekh kar jab insaaniyat bhool kar log khoon bahate hain. Aur chand anaasar khushgawar mahaul ko maatam mein tabdeel kar dete hain. Agar zindagi de nahi sakte to lene ka haq humein harghiz nahi hai. Bahot khoon baha hai inn sarhadoN ke naam par. Lekin mujhe ummeed he nahi, bharosa hai ke ek din insaaniyat jeetegi aur hum sab sirf insaan kehlaayenge, na ke hindu, musalmaan, sikh, issayi, yahudi ya koi aur. Agar lahoo ka rang ek hai, toh phir itna fitna kis baat par. Aur aapki rachna padh kar kya batauN kya guzri hai. Kamaal ka likha hai aapne. Mere paas ilfaaz nahi bayaan karne keliye. Ek ek misra chilla chilla kar insaaniyat ki duhaayi deta hai, aur khoon ki siyaasat karne waloN ke muh par jaise tamaacha hai. "Kaun hindu kya musalmaa' hota hai mazhab se qabl to har koi insaan hota hai"..... kya khoob kaha hai. Aise he umdaa khayalaat se rubaroo karte rahiyega. Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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5th December 2014, 12:09 PM
Shaad saahab mashkoor huN ke aapne iss nacheez ko itni daad ke qabil samjha.
Shaayad shora hazraat ke qalam ki taaqat bhi apna hunar dikhaye aur waqt musbat karwat le. Issi dua ke saath ijaazat leta huN. Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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5th December 2014, 02:00 PM
Sagar Bhai ,
Kya jazbaat aur jazba mila desh prem ka apki is ghazal meiN ... Aur ye dua tau bahut hi nayab lagi mujhe apki,,, Hasrat hai ke phir yeh purana hansta sa guldaan bane Yun hi likhte rahiye , aap ko par ke achcha laga mujhe . Sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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6th December 2014, 01:06 PM
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Behtareen gazal...aur bahut umda khyaal k liye dil se daad sagar ji... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th December 2014, 04:44 PM
Bahot bahot shukriya Hamdam Saahab aur Madhu Ji, aapki daad mere liye bahot maayine rakhti hai.
Ek baar phir se tahe dil se shukriya. Aapka khair khwah SAGAR AASHNA **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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23rd December 2016, 04:48 PM
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Bhai...bahut hi nazuk ehsaas....desh ka batwara bahut badi bad-kismati thi dono deshoN ke liye...! Neem august ka woh toofaN sab kuch udaa ke legaya Lehlahate bagheeche shamshaan-o-qabrestan bane dil ke khaas kareeb rha yeh ehsaas.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th December 2016, 09:11 AM
Sagar sahab kya khoob kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne
Taqseem-e-hind ka karb zaahir hai bar-e-sagheer ke logo ke dil mai ta-qayaamat tak rahega Bohat gehraayi se aapne alfaaz ko kalaam-band kiya hai Khaaksaar ki daad qubool farmaiye Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye Khushk pattey bhi kehte bohat kuch Shabnami phool jo keh na paaiye |
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