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Dil ko tere pyaar ke kaabil... - 14th July 2015, 07:34 AM

Dil ko tere pyaar ke kaabil banaana hai
Ghazlon kaa hunar abhi isko sikhaana hai

Karte hain jaana tumse mohabbat hum bepanaah
Syaahi se apne dil ki likhkar dikhaana hai

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दिल को तेरे प्यार के काबिल बनाना है
गज़लों का हुनर अभी इसको सिखाना है

करते हैं जाना तुमसे मुहब्बत हम बेपनाह,
स्याही से अपने दिल की लिखकर दिखाना है


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14th July 2015, 09:43 AM

Waah! Waaah! Bahot khoob ehsaas pulkit ji.....
Daad kubool kijiyega..



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14th July 2015, 09:49 AM

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Dil ko tere pyaar ke kaabil banaana hai
Ghazlon kaa hunar abhi isko sikhaana hai

Karte hain jaana tumse mohabbat hum bepanaah
Syaahi se apne dil ki likhkar dikhaana hai

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दिल को तेरे प्यार के काबिल बनाना है
गज़लों का हुनर अभी इसको सिखाना है

करते हैं जाना तुमसे मुहब्बत हम बेपनाह,
स्याही से अपने दिल की लिखकर दिखाना है


Wahhhhhhhhhh Pulkit miyaa....kya rang nikhar ke saamne aa rha hai aapki shayri ka..........keep it up


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14th July 2015, 10:18 AM

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14th July 2015, 10:34 AM

kya a baat hai pulkit bhai,................... bhaut aashiqaanaa khayaal hai bahut roomaani...

likhte rahiye


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14th July 2015, 07:00 PM

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Dil ko tere pyaar ke kaabil banaana hai
Ghazlon kaa hunar abhi isko sikhaana hai

Karte hain jaana tumse mohabbat hum bepanaah
Syaahi se apne dil ki likhkar dikhaana hai

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दिल को तेरे प्यार के काबिल बनाना है
गज़लों का हुनर अभी इसको सिखाना है

करते हैं जाना तुमसे मुहब्बत हम बेपनाह,
स्याही से अपने दिल की लिखकर दिखाना है

Wah wah wah !
Bohot khuub jenab.
isko aage baDhaayeiN, aur bhi shaandaar kalaam banega.
Likhte raheiN.


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Wah bahut khoob Pulkit jee........................


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Shukriya aap sabhi doston ka haunsla badhaane ke liye. Saath banaaye rakhiye.


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Pulkit ji...bahaut khoob likha aapne...dil ko chu gaye ashaar.


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Dil ko tere pyaar ke kaabil banaana hai
Ghazlon kaa hunar abhi isko sikhaana hai

Karte hain jaana tumse mohabbat hum bepanaah
Syaahi se apne dil ki likhkar dikhaana hai

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दिल को तेरे प्यार के काबिल बनाना है
गज़लों का हुनर अभी इसको सिखाना है

करते हैं जाना तुमसे मुहब्बत हम बेपनाह,
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Umdaa khayaal huye hai bhai dono hi sher qaatilaana hai main chahta hoon aap ise aage badhao aur poori ghazal ka roop do.



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Pulkit ji...bahaut khoob likha aapne...dil ko chu gaye ashaar.
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