Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
Sapno ki mazaar !!
Old
  (#1)
talkingeyes
Registered User
talkingeyes is just really nicetalkingeyes is just really nicetalkingeyes is just really nicetalkingeyes is just really nice
 
talkingeyes's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 325
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: New delhi
Rep Power: 23
Post Sapno ki mazaar !! - 9th December 2004, 05:15 PM

aaj phir apne sapno ki mazar per bethi hu
aaj phir ek phool khilega shayad
kuch dhundlapan hai aaj mausam mein
ya shayad in aankhon ka ujala kuch kam hua hai

panchiyon ki udaan nazar nahi aati ab
shayad unko bhi naya basera mil gaya
ya phir kisi saayiad ne kaat diye pankh unke bhi

ashko mein phir ek saya nazar aaya hai
qatl kiya meine us ko
ya is duniya ne kehar dhaya hai

saanj ko ab deepak nahi jalta
aangan ki tulsi bhi udhaas hai
koi to bhujaye us ki pyaas ko
chandrma ki chaandni ki yahi fariyaad hai !!!


Journey to Heart
  Send a message via Yahoo to talkingeyes  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#2)
meena chheda
Registered User
meena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to beholdmeena chheda is a splendid one to behold
 
meena chheda's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 32
9th December 2004, 05:47 PM

meri nanuuuuu,
.....................
diidiiii
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
Pulkit_gupta
Humanity
Pulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant futurePulkit_gupta has a brilliant future
 
Offline
Posts: 6,226
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 40
9th December 2004, 06:05 PM

ashko mein phir ek saya nazar aaya hai
qatl kiya meine us ko
ya is duniya ne kehar dhaya hai


Hi!

Saw ur post after a long time... How r u? Hope u r doing well

Beatiful words really... Mujhe bahut acchai lagi aapki yeh post... plz do keep up the good work.. keep writing

aaj phir apne sapno ki mazar per bethi hu
aaj phir ek phool khilega shayad
kuch dhundlapan hai aaj mausam mein
ya shayad in aankhon ka ujala kuch kam hua hai


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
  Send a message via Yahoo to Pulkit_gupta  
Reply With Quote
i like ur poem
Old
  (#4)
mitul_loveble
Registered User
mitul_loveble is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 40
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: baroda
Rep Power: 0
Wink i like ur poem - 18th December 2004, 11:43 AM

good dear ; i like u plzzzzz contact me on my mail i will defenetly provide u a good friendship as i like u; u r good girl; and i born on 15th of april 1981; so we will become good mate right baby? yes.
by dear ur dearest freind " mitul"
   
Reply With Quote
just come back...
Old
  (#5)
praveengupta
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
just come back... - 26th December 2004, 08:04 AM

Hi...Shalu...

its more than 10 month since i visited Shayri.com....i m back again in my normal life ...with lots of changes....specialy at career end...any way...we will talk that later...

ur latest ..."...sapno ki mazar....."....hhmm...touchy....well done...whts new.....

mail me...

praveen
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
Chaand
Registered User
Chaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud ofChaand has much to be proud of
 
Chaand's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 2,628
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: New Delhi
Rep Power: 32
27th December 2004, 02:21 PM

Waqt phir karwat lega ey dil
Tu udaas kyoN hota hai,
Dekh tera muskuraata sa hausla
PhooloN ko bhi khila deta hai
Paagat...sweekar kar in gamoN ko bhi
In gamoN ke peechhe bhi
Muskuraahat ka koi kaaran chhupa hota hai.

Chaand

Shalini...bas yahi kahooNga..ke him.mat rakho....or muskurakar apni raah per aage barhti raho...

tumhaara waqt bhi aaega...us waqt ka intzaar karo.

meine kaha tha na wo song....

thode gam haiN
Thodi khushiyaaN
yahi hai...yahi hai...
Yahi hai ChhaaNv dhoop.

Ye jeewan hai.

Dua rahegi...hamesha khush raho.

Chaand


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

- Chaand
   
Reply With Quote
Bahut Khub...
Old
  (#7)
Rahat Banarasi
Registered User
Rahat Banarasi is on a distinguished road
 
Rahat Banarasi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 12
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 0
Bahut Khub... - 4th August 2006, 04:45 PM

ashko mein phir ek saya nazar aaya hai
qatl kiya meine us ko
ya is duniya ne kehar dhaya hai

Bahut Khub Shalini, Bahut hi achha likha hai par ye likha nahi gaya hai balki ye aapke antaraatma ki goonj hai aur ye main yunhi nahi kah raha .....mahsoos kiya hai har shabdo ko gehrai se.....

Shalini ji Panchi kitni dur bhi udta chala jaye,laut ke apne aashiyan me vapas aata hi hai.....aap bhi apne aashiyan ko bakhubi pehchanye aur ......

Take care.......



   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
anish_ekshayar
Registered User
anish_ekshayar is a jewel in the roughanish_ekshayar is a jewel in the roughanish_ekshayar is a jewel in the roughanish_ekshayar is a jewel in the rough
 
anish_ekshayar's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 399
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Alwar (Rajasthan)
Rep Power: 22
4th August 2006, 06:15 PM

hi shalini
bahut khubsurat likha hai aisa laga jaise ahsaas bhar diyen hain kitna sada kitna sakun dene wala wow main nahi kah sakta koi lafj aapki tareef main sach kah raha hun mujhe behad achha laga dil se kah raha hun bahut udasi hai bahut hee gahrai fir bhi bilkul sadgi hai is rachana main likhte rahiye


anish

tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko !
meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !!


:) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:)
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Naadaan Ki Mazaar Hai naadaan Shayri-e-Ishq 4 19th September 2009 12:37 PM
Naadaan Ki Mazaar Hai naadaan Aapki Shayri 2 30th August 2009 02:37 PM
Hammare mazaar par ek roz FRISHTA4U Shayri-e-Dard 5 29th October 2007 02:17 AM
Mere Mazaar ahsan Shayri-e-Dard 0 28th July 2006 03:33 AM
woh mazaar dhundhti hun... farhana Shayri-e-Dard 13 9th April 2006 11:36 AM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com