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Kash! ki tum hote to kehte.........!!! - 20th February 2011, 12:20 PM

Jab Jab Neend khuli raato me
Jab Jab aansu bhare aankhon me
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ye moti vyarth lutaao Na....!!!


Jab Jab sath na tera paaya
kuch bhi dil ko samjh na aaya
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash! ki tum hote to kehte
jaana mere sang aao na.....!!!


Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!


Jab Jab geet banaya koi
Har lafz me uske mai thi khoi
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ek baar to gaao Na........!!!


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20th February 2011, 12:39 PM

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Jab Jab Neend khuli raato me
Jab Jab aansu bhare aankhon me
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ye moti vyarth lutaao Na....!!!


Jab Jab sath na tera paaya
kuch bhi dil ko samjh na aaya
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash! ki tum hote to kehte
jaana mere sang aao na.....!!!


Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!


Jab Jab geet banaya koi
Har lafz me uske mai thi khoi
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ek baar to gaao Na........!!!



Waah waah shayira saahiba... aapki is kaavish me itni muhabbat itna dard itni tadap hai ki jitni tareef karna chahun kam hi lagega... Aapki kalam me jo jaadu hai uski tareef kar paana mujh haqeer ke bas ke baahar ki baat hai.. bas duaa rahegi ki jis khush-kismat ki nazar ise likha gaya hai un tak ye ehsaas pahuchen.... likhte rahiye, khush rahiye...


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20th February 2011, 12:42 PM

Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!


Simple & Sweet ..... Very Touching .... Kavita Ji !




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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20th February 2011, 03:49 PM

Brilliantly written and such a pleasure in reading...! I admire your beautiful poem very much,Kavita Ji...!

Keep coming with such creations...!

Take good care of yourself, ok...?

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Smile Shukriya......!!! - 21st February 2011, 12:13 PM

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Waah waah shayira saahiba... aapki is kaavish me itni muhabbat itna dard itni tadap hai ki jitni tareef karna chahun kam hi lagega... Aapki kalam me jo jaadu hai uski tareef kar paana mujh haqeer ke bas ke baahar ki baat hai.. bas duaa rahegi ki jis khush-kismat ki nazar ise likha gaya hai un tak ye ehsaas pahuchen.... likhte rahiye, khush rahiye...


shaad...
Shaad jee,
Aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad yahan aane ke liye aur meri koshish ko sarhaane ke liye......!!!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega....!!! Khush rahiyee....!!!


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21st February 2011, 12:48 PM

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Jab Jab Neend khuli raato me
Jab Jab aansu bhare aankhon me
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ye moti vyarth lutaao Na....!!!


Jab Jab sath na tera paaya
kuch bhi dil ko samjh na aaya
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash! ki tum hote to kehte
jaana mere sang aao na.....!!!


Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!


Jab Jab geet banaya koi
Har lafz me uske mai thi khoi
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ek baar to gaao Na........!!!

ji nice one........................



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kavita ji namaskar, bhut hi khubsurat izehar hai.....bhut pyare ehsaas hain, magar kahin kahin lafzon ka her fer agar ho jaye to iska flow or behtar ban sakta hai, neeche ek udharan de raha hoon....

Jab Jab Neend khuli raato me
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Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ye moti vyarth lutaao(Gawaon) Na....!!!

ye meri niji rai hai...may be im wrong...Take care.....Raj......


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Jab Jab Neend khuli raato me
Jab Jab aansu bhare aankhon me
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ye moti vyarth lutaao Na....!!!


Jab Jab sath na tera paaya
kuch bhi dil ko samjh na aaya
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash! ki tum hote to kehte
jaana mere sang aao na.....!!!


Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!


Jab Jab geet banaya koi
Har lafz me uske mai thi khoi
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ek baar to gaao Na........!!!
Such a sweet write .....
tumhara naam sach mai kavitaa hi ho saktaa tha, aur hai bhi ........ u r very natural poet ... take a step ahead now ........ seriously .........
u have very long way to go..................

sabko sahi se padho.... achy poet ko padho... u must be more serious abt it ...
my well wishes is with u ........... u r next best SDC poet ..........
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Jab Jab Neend khuli raato me
Jab Jab aansu bhare aankhon me
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ye moti vyarth lutaao Na....!!!


Jab Jab sath na tera paaya
kuch bhi dil ko samjh na aaya
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash! ki tum hote to kehte
jaana mere sang aao na.....!!!


Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!



Jab Jab geet banaya koi
Har lafz me uske mai thi khoi
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Ek baar to gaao Na........!!!


hmmmm....Quite romantic......


Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!...this one is cute...........







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Jab Jab dard mitana chaha
Ghum ko apne bhulana chaha
Tab tab yaad tumhari aai
Kash ! ki tum hote to kehte
Shona mujhe batlaao na....!!!

Simple & Sweet ..... Very Touching .... Kavita Ji !
Thanx alot Naresh Jee..........!!!


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Brilliantly written and such a pleasure in reading...! I admire your beautiful poem very much,Kavita Ji...!

Keep coming with such creations...!

Take good care of yourself, ok...?

With blessings

Thank you very much Danny Jee for being always supportive....!!! All of Your love and understanding are the source of my strength.....!!! Cya......!!!

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ji nice one........................
Shukriya Radhika jee...................


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