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dard bhara nagma hoon mujhay na gungunana tum,........ - 23rd June 2006, 07:35 PM

dard bhara nagma hoon mujhay na gungunana tum,
tuta hua khaab hoon main mujhay bhool jana tum...


dard ki manind mujhay dil main chhupa lena tum,
aansuon ki tarha mujhay aankh say na bahana tum......


yeh zakham mere paas tere pyar ki nishani hai,
bhool kar bhee in par na marham lagana tum......


jab kabhi tum tanha ho or meri yaad stati ho,
bevaffa hoon main yahi apnay dil ko samjhana tum...


mera kaya hai ik roz jaha say ruksat ho jaounga,
mere baad na aankho say moti bahana tum.......


tere bina jinda laash hoon mujhay koi ehsaas nahi,
chhukar mere jism ko koi nayi aas na jagana tum........


jo khushi sapnay or umeedain dee thee tum nay ,
kasam tumhay unki unko bhee saath lejana tum......


tere ghar kay deepak main jal raha hai mera wajood,
bhool kay bhee na samjhna mujhay begana tum.....


'veer'ek kanto bharay gulaab kay siva kush bhee nahi,
ussay bhool kar bhee seenay say na lagana tum......



app reply zaroor karna.......appka .......raj..........


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Re: dard bhara nagma hoon mujhay na gungunana tum,........ - 30th June 2006, 06:33 PM

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dard bhara nagma hoon mujhay na gungunana tum,
tuta hua khaab hoon main mujhay bhool jana tum...


dard ki manind mujhay dil main chhupa lena tum,
aansuon ki tarha mujhay aankh say na bahana tum......


yeh zakham mere paas tere pyar ki nishani hai,
bhool kar bhee in par na marham lagana tum......


jab kabhi tum tanha ho or meri yaad stati ho,
bevaffa hoon main yahi apnay dil ko samjhana tum...


mera kaya hai ik roz jaha say ruksat ho jaounga,
mere baad na aankho say moti bahana tum.......


tere bina jinda laash hoon mujhay koi ehsaas nahi,
chhukar mere jism ko koi nayi aas na jagana tum........


jo khushi sapnay or umeedain dee thee tum nay ,
kasam tumhay unki unko bhee saath lejana tum......


tere ghar kay deepak main jal raha hai mera wajood,
bhool kay bhee na samjhna mujhay begana tum.....


'veer'ek kanto bharay gulaab kay siva kush bhee nahi,
ussay bhool kar bhee seenay say na lagana tum......



app reply zaroor karna.......appka .......raj..........


Raj Ji

etne acchi shayri, kaya baat hai.
appke tareef ke liye koi shabad nahi mil raha.

mubarak ho hazoor.


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shukria - 30th June 2006, 07:04 PM

sunita ji ijjat afzai kay liye shukria....lakin is main meri koi khubi nahi......agar app jaise qadardaan ho to koi bhee gazal keh sakta hai......meri kaya ookaat hai........agar yu hee appki daad milti rahi to raj koshish zarri rakhayga........raj........


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raj bhai aap har hamar dil ko chu jate ho
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shukria - 14th July 2006, 01:23 PM

mukesh ji appko meri gazal pasand i app meri post par aiye dil ko bhut masarat huie......app ki hosla afzai kay liye shukria.......raj........


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Bht behtareen - 15th July 2006, 02:38 AM

Veer ji,
Qasam se aaj to aapki is ghazal ne mere dil ko jhanjhod diya aur meri aankhon main aansoo bhi aagaye hain aaj to.....ab is se zyada aur kya asar dekhna chahenge aap apni shayri ka........Bht bht achhe.

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shukria - 17th July 2006, 02:55 PM

rafat ji app to bina wajha meri tareef karti rehti ho......bass yu hee dil ka dard kagaz kay seenay pay utaar deta hoon.....agar mera dard app mehsoos karti ho to main tahe dil say appka shukarguzaar hoon........raj........


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sh - 19th July 2006, 03:12 PM

roop ji app bhut dino baad i ho app bussy ho studies main mujay iska ilam hai lakin phir bhee apne apna masrufiay baha waqt mere liye nakala main appka shukar guzaar hoon .......raj....


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