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tera ehsaas mujhsay kabhi door na ho....... - 26th June 2006, 05:40 PM

ek pyari c nazam mere humsafar....mere dil kay kareeb.....mere dosto kay naam.......umeed hai app jabaab zaroor dogay......main janta hoon mere kai dost jabaab to dena chhahtay hai.....lakin wo jantay nahi ki kaise jabaab diya jata hai.....main apko batata hoon.......jab app koi bhee poetry parhtay ho uskay neechay or upper .......post reply likha hota hai app us par click karo or apna reply send karo.....appka dost raj..........

mere baad mat dhondhna mere qadmon kay nishan,
main to ek saya hoon kali raat ka saya jiska koi wajood nahi,
janmo say main bhatak raha hoon apni talaash main,
dubba hua hoon na janay kaisee pyaas main,
zindagi say khaffa moot ki talash main,
anjaan say safar main koi sathi nahi hai mera,
ek safed sa saya jo shayad mera kafan hai,
roz mujhay dhaknay ki firaq main,
aata hai har raat mere sonay kay baad,
lakin ussay bach kay bhagnay ki koshish main,
roz thora thora sa mar raha hoon,
bass ussi kafan ka intzaar kar raha hoon,
lakin waise nahi jaise wo mujhay dhakna chhahta hai,
main jee to nahi saka apni marzi say,
lakin mera jism apni marzi say marna chhahta hai,
main moot ko jaise bulaoun wo waise hee aiye,
marnay kay baad mera dil bhee dharkta rahay,
kiyonki iss dil main tu bassi hai,
marnay kay baad meri aankhain bhee khuli rahay,
kiyonki in main tere khaab sajay hai,
marnay kay baad mere hoonth bhee larztay rahay,
kiyonki inko aaj bhee teri pyaas hai,
marnay kay baad meri sansay bhee chalti rahay,
kiyonki yeh sansay tera naam lekar chal rahi hai,
magar jab mujhay aakhri hichki aiye,
to teri goad na ho tera anchal na ho,
tere aansu meri lash ko nehlatay na ho,
tere hoonth mere bejaan jism ko chumtay na ho,
mere rastay main tujh say kiye waday na ho,
mere phir jinda ho janay kay iraday na ho,
tere saath guzray pal mujh par bojh na ho,
tera pyar mere paon ki zanjeer na banay,
meri chhita ki rakh say teri tasveer na banay,
kash yu zindagi karay bevafai to kitna acha ho,
tera surakh dupatta meri lash say lipta ho,
mera wajood chutki bhar rakh main simta ho,
or wo rakh teri mang ka sindoor na ho,
tera ehsaas mujhsay kabhi door na ho.......kabhi door na ho......kabhi door na ho.......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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replay - 26th June 2006, 06:20 PM

raj bhai sach mai bahoot khob likha hai apne
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shukria - 28th June 2006, 11:21 AM

shukria mukesh ji jo appko meri nazam achi lagi......warna hum to kisi qabil he nahi.....bass dil kay jajbaat kagaz kay seenay pay uttar kar kagaz par zulam kartay hai........


dosto ki dosti nay uttha diya mujhko,
ek zaray say aaftab bana diya mujhko....

dard kay fasanay kay siva kush bhee nahi,
phir bhee seenay main chhupa liya mujhko.....

lafaz mujhay beganay say lagtay thay kabhi,
appki daad nay shayar bana diya mujhko........

appka dost.......raj.........


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wow.......Great .......! - 10th July 2006, 03:57 PM

hello raj

appki yeh gazal maine ajj padi hai aur sach mai batta nahi sakti ki mujhe kitni acchi lagi, ek ek shabad dil mai utter gaya, shuru mai thik lagi par jaise jaise aggey padti gaye, saans rukti se gaye. kitney pyar se appni mohabatt ke liye aacchi se dua ki hai. raj bahutttttt hi acchi laggi appki yeh gazal.
great...........!
pyar ho to aisa.


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shukria - 24th July 2006, 12:17 PM

sunita ji raj tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hai...or umeed karta hai ki app yu hee meri hosla afzai karti raho gi......raj.....


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