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Ghamgeen ehsaas - 19th July 2006, 05:01 PM

mehfil ko adaab.
Khaaksaar ek adna si ghazal ke saath pesh huaa hai.Aap logon ka saath darkaar hai.

''Ye kya maqaam hai zindgi ka
ghamgeen ehsaas hai har khushi ka

main kis tarah jiyun azaadi se
uska huqm hai sabab zindgi ka

aam log khaas hote hain ise paakar
koi khaas cheez naheen ye zikr hai ameeri ka

jaan lene ka uska dhang hai anokha
kabhi qatl karta hai kabhi maamla khudkushi ka

kissi ka ghar saamne kissi ka dar saamne
hota hai roz ehsaas muflisi ka

akeli raat,tanhaa main,goonjta weeraana
peeta hoon roz main lahoo roshni ka

sau baar jalaa hoon chitaaon mein magar
reh jaata hai har baar daagh zindgi ka

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ghamgeen ehsaas - 19th July 2006, 06:12 PM

sau baar jalaa hoon chitaaon mein magar
reh jaata hai har baar daagh zindgi ka

very nice ...........keep it up


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19th July 2006, 06:45 PM

shukriya Mukesh ji.Aapko shai'r pasand aayaa,to humen bhi itminaan huaa.Aage bhi aapse aur baaki membraan se yahee ummeed hai.

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20th July 2006, 07:29 AM

pankj ji apaki ye gazl bhaut pasand aayi

aise hi apa likhte rahe aur hume padhne ka avsar den


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20th July 2006, 11:03 AM

Shukriya................ Shraddha ji.
Aapko ghazal pasand aayee,to mujhe bhi khushi huyee.Aap logon ka saath milta rahaa to aage bhi likhte rahenge.

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20th July 2006, 12:49 PM

pankaj ji appki yeh rachna pasand aaye, umeed hai appki nayi rachna jaldi aayegi.


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20th July 2006, 12:56 PM

Sunita ji .............pasandeedgi ke liye bohat shukriya.
Aap logon ka saath milta rahaa to likhna bhi jaari rahega.

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