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Exclamation *~*BaS kHuD sE kHaFa HoOn MaIn*~* - 11th August 2006, 05:49 PM

Ek baar fir se bazm ko is nacheez ghayal ka aadaabb.ek baar fir se pesh hun aapki bazm me mehfil sajane ko.bas haalaat humse bahut khafa hain.aur zindagi humse naaraazz fir v majbur tha kalam chalane ko.so aa gaya ek aur ghayal klaam ke saath.isi umeed me ki aapko pasand aayega.aaj zindagi ke sabse bade dorahe pe khada hun main,kuch samajh nahi paa raha.sab dhudhla hai sab door hote nazar aa rahe hain.aaj zindagi me pehli baar apne hi jazbaat itna kachot rahe hain.bas likh diya hai.kuch khaash nahi hai.na shayri na alfaaz aur na hi jazbaat.pata hai kuch logon ki umeedon pe khada nahi utrunga.un sabse maafi ka talabdaar hun.



Zindagi ki bachi koi tamanna nahi hai,,tere bin ab aur hume jeena nahi hai,,aaj ilm ho gaya hai hume sach ka,,ki humare liye koi bana nahi hai,,maut se baddtar jo ab zindagi ho gayi hai,,par kambakht rooh hoti fanaa nahi hai………..

Haan sach rooh hoti fanaa nahi hai……………………………





To pesh hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam……………



shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
nahi maanta ye dil ki aaj tujhse juda hoon main.

wafayen ki,jafaayen ki,maine sirf khataayen ki,
mohabbat ki tauheen,bas ek bewafa hoon main.

bewafai ki saza pa raha hun,khudse dur ja raha hun,
jo jahaan me aa hi na saki wo tamanna hoon main.

tere labon ko choona hai,tere bin nahi jeena hai,
bas dil tootne ka ek haseen kaayeda hoon main.

kisi ke liye jee raha hun,gum-e-jist* jo pee raha hun,
"ghayal" ke bikhre hue dil me bachi wafa hoon main.

*zindagi ka gum

khud ko aaj dard diya hai,dard-e-zigar chupa liya hai,
koi to bataye aakhir mujh begane ko kyaa hoon main.



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13th August 2006, 03:35 PM

ghayal ji,
acha likha aapne.yeh sher acha laga,

shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
nahi maanta ye dil ki aaj tujhse juda hoon main.

likhte rahiye


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ghayal ji,
acha likha aapne.yeh sher acha laga,

shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
nahi maanta ye dil ki aaj tujhse juda hoon main.

likhte rahiye

shukriya aapka.ki aapne ise padha aur pasand kiya ye humare liye bahut badi baat hai.bas umeed yahi karte hain ki aap aage v hume yunhi padhti rahengi.



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Ghayal ji,

Aapne to dil pe aisa chot kiya hai ki muddat lagegi wapas dil ko manane me.

Wah! Wah!

Aise hi lkhte rahiye.


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janaab maafi chahunga aapka sahi naam nahi pata hai mere ko.par khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko humara kalaam pasand aaya.aur dukh v hua ki aap ghayal ho gaye.hum nahi chahte ki koi v aur ghayal ho is jahaan me.umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yunhi padhte rahen ge humko.



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janab ghayal sahab aadaab,ummeed karta hoon aap khush honge,aaj bahot dino ke baad aana hua aur aapko padha padh kar aisa laga ki ek muddat ke baad aaj fir se dard rawan ho gaya hai.behad hi pyari nazm hai,jo dil ki gahraai tak utar gai.yoon hi likhte rahen ye meri apse dili khwahish hai........
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Lucky Bhai...!

Acha likha hai tumne...! Dard se bharpur kalaam...!

shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
nahi maanta ye dil ki aaj tujhse juda hoon main.


Waah, kya baat hai...!

Younhi likhte rehna aur thik se apna khayaal rakhna, ok ?



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shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
nahi maanta ye dil ki aaj tujhse juda hoon main.

wafayen ki,jafaayen ki,maine sirf khataayen ki,
mohabbat ki tauheen,bas ek bewafa hoon main.

Waahhhh....khoobsurat aashaar...

Lucky,

Kaise ho? ummeed hai acche se honge...

Mujhe tumhare oopar waale do sher bahut pasand aaye... sil se waha nikli thhi inhe padhkar magar baad me jaakar kahin flow toot sa gaya... Last sher again is nice....

Ek continuity ki kami lagi isme... otheriwse expresion was good.... likhte raho aise hi... apna khayal rakhna...

Ek coinicidence... tumhaari current total posts ka number mera house number hai ..2655....


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bas khud se khafa hoon mian - 17th August 2006, 01:45 PM

Ek Baar Jo Kisi Ko Dil Me Basa Lo To Use Dil Se Nikalne Ke Liye Dil Ka Tootna Jaroori Ho Jata Hai, Kyunki Dil Se Nikalne Ka Aur Koi Raasta Nahi Hota.... Aur Agar Koi Us Toote Hue Dil Ko Jodne Ki Kosish Bhi Kare To Us Dil Me Naam To Usi KA Ubhar Kar Aata Hai..................
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~lucky bhai sach kaha hai apne kabhi kabhi hume kisi ka dil tootna padta hai na chahte hue bhi uski nazroo mai bewafa banna padta hai


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Lucky Bhai...!

Acha likha hai tumne...! Dard se bharpur kalaam...!

shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
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Waah, kya baat hai...!

Younhi likhte rehna aur thik se apna khayaal rakhna, ok ?


thanks mushkil bhai.ye humari khuskismati ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya.bas yahi guzarish hai aaps eki aap aage v hume yunhi padhte rahiye.



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shikwa nahi kisi se,bas khud se khafa hoon main,
nahi maanta ye dil ki aaj tujhse juda hoon main.

wafayen ki,jafaayen ki,maine sirf khataayen ki,
mohabbat ki tauheen,bas ek bewafa hoon main.

Waahhhh....khoobsurat aashaar...

Lucky,

Kaise ho? ummeed hai acche se honge...

Mujhe tumhare oopar waale do sher bahut pasand aaye... sil se waha nikli thhi inhe padhkar magar baad me jaakar kahin flow toot sa gaya... Last sher again is nice....

Ek continuity ki kami lagi isme... otheriwse expresion was good.... likhte raho aise hi... apna khayal rakhna...

Ek coinicidence... tumhaari current total posts ka number mera house number hai ..2655....
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Ek Baar Jo Kisi Ko Dil Me Basa Lo To Use Dil Se Nikalne Ke Liye Dil Ka Tootna Jaroori Ho Jata Hai, Kyunki Dil Se Nikalne Ka Aur Koi Raasta Nahi Hota.... Aur Agar Koi Us Toote Hue Dil Ko Jodne Ki Kosish Bhi Kare To Us Dil Me Naam To Usi KA Ubhar Kar Aata Hai..................
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~lucky bhai sach kaha hai apne kabhi kabhi hume kisi ka dil tootna padta hai na chahte hue bhi uski nazroo mai bewafa banna padta hai

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