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Kuch na bacha Akhiri Mulakaat ke baad - 27th September 2010, 03:25 PM

Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad


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27th September 2010, 03:50 PM

you are a natural talent...kavitaji...
maine pichli baar bhi gaur kiya tha....is baar bhi kahunga ki kaafi rawaaN koshish hai.....

agar pahle band me first 2 lines me 'rah gaya' as radeef nahi hota...to baaki mostly wazn me hoti.. ( kuch takhtaa kam jyada hi sahi)...hai to gana hi ...kaunsi ghazal hai jo itni bandish o nakhre uThaaye !!

class work hai.....

alfaaz bhi badi khoobi se seedhe barte gaye hai.....musalsal khyaal befazool bharti me tooTa nahi hai...excelleny work kaviyaji...

'kavita' hi kavita hai aur kavita hi 'kavita'

aap din dugni raat das guni tarakki ke raste par hain...

very impressive indeed..


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27th September 2010, 07:27 PM

[QUOTE=zidd;411338]you are a natural talent...kavitaji...
maine pichli baar bhi gaur kiya tha....is baar bhi kahunga ki kaafi rawaaN koshish hai.....

Bahut bahut shukriya Zidd ji,,,

agar pahle band me first 2 lines me 'rah gaya' as radeef nahi hota...to baaki mostly wazn me hoti.. ( kuch takhtaa kam jyada hi sahi)...hai to gana hi ...kaunsi ghazal hai jo itni bandish o nakhre uThaaye !!

waise sach kahu to radeef , takhtaa, matla...etc meri samjh se bahar hai....chah kar bhi samjh nahi paati ....!!! bas jis waqt jo dil me chal raha hota hai...wo kaagaz par hota hai....!!! Bina kuch jayada soche samjhe usse post kar deti hu...!!! itna keh sakti hu ki yahan aakar mujhe thoda samjh aaya hai ki aur behtar likha ja sakta tha.......!!!
class work hai.....

Thanx a lot Zidd ji,,,,

alfaaz bhi badi khoobi se seedhe barte gaye hai.....musalsal khyaal befazool bharti me tooTa nahi hai...excelleny work kaviyaji...

Shukriya Aapka....!!!

'kavita' hi kavita hai aur kavita hi 'kavita'

Kavita ki kavita hai aur kavita ki hi kavita hai.........

aap din dugni raat das guni tarakki ke raste par hain...

Shukriyaa.... Aap jaise dosto ka sath rahega to jarur behtar likh paaungi.....!!!!


very impressive indeed..

Thanx a lot....!!!


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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad

Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad

Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad

Kavita,

bahut khoob.... ehsaas aur andaaz-e-bayaan bahut khoob raha... dil se daad hazir hai... very impressive.... likhti raho... khush raho....


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kavita ji, mai comment bahut pahle karna chahta tha(zid bhayee se bhi pahle) par mere boss aa gaye .....

aapne kamaal likha hai .........

har stanze mai kahi bhi khayaal aur kisi bhi misre mai rabt nahi gaya hai .....
pata nahi par aisa laga jaise .... ye sab huaa ho likhne wale ke saath aur usne jasie ka taisa utaar diya ho, kahi bhi milabat nahi hai ........ ek dam pure ....

sabse kamaal baat ki hasr stanze ke pahle misre se aakhiri, kafiye wali line mai jo aapne uska saath nibhayee hai kabil-e-tareef hai ..
ek woqt tha jab mai sochta nahi tha, khyaal yun hi bahte they ...
aisa hi kuch aapke saath laga .........

mai itni tareef isliye kar raha hun, taaki aap ..... yahi se ek sahi disha le leN ... likhne ke liye ......
plzz kahi se bhi seekheN ...... kahin se kya aap zid bhayee se seekh sakti hai, maine seekhne ki shuraat karne ke liye ... 10 saal laga diye... halanki mujhe pata hi nahi tha 2 saal pahle tak .. jab laga pata to aise logo ne bataya ... ki maine an seekhen ka hi man bana liyaa fir ..... jab zid bhayee se milaa to sach mai man kiyaa . lekin itni der tak bahut der ho gayee thi.... maine jane kitne khayal yun hi .... "zazbaato ka byaan "..... ke naam par shaheed kar diye..

bas yahi iltijaa hai plzz. aap aisa na hone deN .........

raste mai dhere chalna tej chalna mayne nahi rakhta .... sahi raste mai chalna mayne rakhta hai.... plzz do so

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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad
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28th September 2010, 02:03 AM

Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya


Well mujhe lagta hai "REH GAYA" ki jagah "REH GAYE" hota to zyda behtar hota........other than that bohat khoobsurat rahi peshkash.


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Kavita Ji .. aap ki rachanaa ke ehsaas bahot khoob rahe .. bayaani bhi bahot saaf rahi ...shabdo ko ek saath bahot achchhe se joda hai aap ne ...

aur sab se jyaada humaare dil ko chhoo gayi ..wo hai aap ki rachanaa ke shabdo ki maasumiyat ...simple and sweet ..very nice.. yunhi likhati rahiye ...

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28th September 2010, 08:10 AM

Very Nice Poetry Indeed .........Kavita Ji ! Very Touching .... !

Impressive Creation Ko dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath....




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28th September 2010, 02:16 PM

[QUOTE=janumanu;411370]kavita ji, mai comment bahut pahle karna chahta tha(zid bhayee se bhi pahle) par mere boss aa gaye .....

Vikas ji,
Koi baat nahi....Aap yahan aaye aur mujhe padha ye hi kaafi hai....!!! Wo kehte hai na der aaye durast aaye.... (fir chahe boss aaye ya koi aaye ) just kidding

aapne kamaal likha hai .........

Shukriya.....!!!
har stanze mai kahi bhi khayaal aur kisi bhi misre mai rabt nahi gaya hai .....
pata nahi par aisa laga jaise .... ye sab huaa ho likhne wale ke saath aur usne jasie ka taisa utaar diya ho, kahi bhi milabat nahi hai ........ ek dam pure ....

Hmm... Shukriya,,,,,

sabse kamaal baat ki hasr stanze ke pahle misre se aakhiri, kafiye wali line mai jo aapne uska saath nibhayee hai kabil-e-tareef hai ..

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka....!!!

ek woqt tha jab mai sochta nahi tha, khyaal yun hi bahte they ...
aisa hi kuch aapke saath laga .........

Bilkul sahi kaha aapne...!!

mai itni tareef isliye kar raha hun, taaki aap ..... yahi se ek sahi disha le leN ... likhne ke liye ......

Aapka shukriya jo itna dhyaan diya aapne... Bilkul sahi keh rahe hai aap likhne ke liye sahi disha leni chaiye ab .......!!!

plzz kahi se bhi seekheN ...... kahin se kya aap zid bhayee se seekh sakti hai, maine seekhne ki shuraat karne ke liye ... 10 saal laga diye... halanki mujhe pata hi nahi tha 2 saal pahle tak .. jab laga pata to aise logo ne bataya ... ki maine an seekhen ka hi man bana liyaa fir ..... jab zid bhayee se milaa to sach mai man kiyaa . lekin itni der tak bahut der ho gayee thi.... maine jane kitne khayal yun hi .... "zazbaato ka byaan "..... ke naam par shaheed kar diye..

Ji, Bilkul Koshish rahegi aur behtar likhne ki... seekhne ki....!!!

bas yahi iltijaa hai plzz. aap aisa na hone deN .........

Hmm... ji, Jarur gaur karungi aapki baato par.....!!!

raste mai dhere chalna tej chalna mayne nahi rakhta .... sahi raste mai chalna mayne rakhta hai.... plzz do so

Bilkul sahi kaha aapne....

repss for uuuuuuuuuuu

Thanx a lot Vikas ji, Bahut acha lga ki aapne itne ache se padha mujhe aur behtar likhne aur seekhne ke liye prerit kiya.....!!!
Aage bhi aise hi sath dete rahiyega......!!!


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bahut sundar ehsaas aur utni hi sundabayaani ke saath pesh kiye hain aapne dil se daad kubul karen
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Ishq ji,

Radhe Radhe.....!!!

Bahut bahut dhanyawaad aapka.... Aapki daad dil se qubool hai....!!! Aise hi sath dete rahiye....!!! Khush rahiyee...!!!


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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad
Kavita ji..namaskaar...der se aane ke liye kshama chahooNga....aapki rachna bahoot hi steek our saaf suthri rahi....lafzoN ki rawanagi bhi khoob rahi...merii jaanib se dhairoN daad aapke liye....

Khush rahiyega


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Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
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Well mujhe lagta hai "REH GAYA" ki jagah "REH GAYE" hota to zyda behtar hota........other than that bohat khoobsurat rahi peshkash.

Sajid Ji,

Hmm, ,,,aapne bilkul sahi kaha,, agar reh gaya ki jagah reh gaye hota to zyada behtar hota.....!!! Aage se dhyaan rakhungi koi bhi post karne se pehle, ki use aur behtar kaise likha jaaye.......!!! aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne apna keemti waqt diya....!!!! Aage bhi aise hi sath dete rahiyega...!!! Khush rahiyee....!!!


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bahut khoob.... ehsaas aur andaaz-e-bayaan bahut khoob raha... dil se daad hazir hai... very impressive.... likhti raho... khush raho....
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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad
wah kavita ji...dil khush ho gaya padh kar...
aap bahut jald seedhiyaaN chadh rahiN haiN aur mujhe khushi hoti hai ye dekh kar...mujhe aapka flow bahut natural lagaa...bas maza aa gaya padh kar...
yuNhi likhti rahiyega....aur mujhe ummeed hai ki aane wale waqt meiN aapki kalam se ye aalam zuroor raushan hoga....

Keep it up...

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Kavita Ji .. aap ki rachanaa ke ehsaas bahot khoob rahe .. bayaani bhi bahot saaf rahi ...shabdo ko ek saath bahot achchhe se joda hai aap ne ...

aur sab se jyaada humaare dil ko chhoo gayi ..wo hai aap ki rachanaa ke shabdo ki maasumiyat ...simple and sweet ..very nice.. yunhi likhati rahiye ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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Jay Ambe.......

Aapko yaha dekh kar bahut khushi huii....!!! Aur meri ye choti si koshish aapke dil ko chhoo gayi.... iske liye teh dil se dhanyawad.....!!! Padhne wala yadi mann se padh raha ho to uss se likhne wale ke jazbaat chhup nahi sakte....!!! Aur aapne dil se mujhe padha aur saraaha iske liye bahut bahut shukriya...Mata Rani aapko hamesha khush rakhee...!!! Yuhi sath dete rahiyegaa.....!!!


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Very Nice Poetry Indeed .........Kavita Ji ! Very Touching .... !

Impressive Creation Ko dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath....
Thanx a lot Naresh Ji,,,

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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad


Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad
kavi....kya kahuN.....hmmmm................................... .................
isse jayada aur kya kahuN

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wah kavita ji...dil khush ho gaya padh kar...
aap bahut jald seedhiyaaN chadh rahiN haiN aur mujhe khushi hoti hai ye dekh kar...mujhe aapka flow bahut natural lagaa...bas maza aa gaya padh kar...
yuNhi likhti rahiyega....aur mujhe ummeed hai ki aane wale waqt meiN aapki kalam se ye aalam zuroor raushan hoga....

Keep it up...

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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
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maiN kya kahuN tumhe .. kavita tumhare matle ne muhe kahiN khone pe majboor kar diya ... badi hi dilfareb baat kahi hai tumne bade sareekhe andaaz mai ... matla padhte hi jo lafz nahi rukta .. waah ..! apne aap zubaan pe aa jata hai ..

Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad


aur ye anjaam .. chup sa kar gaya ... ye aise teer hai jo kab aa ke gad gaye pata nahi ...

tumne behad acchi koshish ko anjaam diya hai .. mere paas to lafz hi nahi hai .. kyunki jitna kahunga kam rahega ... so wahi baat kehta hun.. jo kahin kanhin hi likhata hun main ...

Seedha saaf saccha aur accha ...

Khush raho

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Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad

Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

Kuch yaadein kuch waqt uske sath reh gaya
Mit gaii lakeere khali ye haath reh gaya
Kaha nahi kuch uski baat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

Zindagi har pal ek saja ho gai
Yadein uski jeene ki wjah ho gai
Ruth gya saawan bhi us barsaat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

Teri yaadon ke chirago ko jalaya har shaam
Teri baato ko bethkar dhoraaya har shaam
Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad

Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad
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[QUOTE=KunaaL;412364]Neend nahi aati ab uss raat ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakat ke baad

maiN kya kahuN tumhe .. kavita tumhare matle ne muhe kahiN khone pe majboor kar diya ... badi hi dilfareb baat kahi hai tumne bade sareekhe andaaz mai ... matla padhte hi jo lafz nahi rukta .. waah ..! apne aap zubaan pe aa jata hai ..

Kunaal tumhara bahut bahut shukriya jo tum yahan aaye aur meri koshish ko apna keemti waqt diya.....!!!


Na thama kisi ka haath tere hath ke baad
Kuch na bacha Akhiri mulakaat ke baad

aur ye anjaam .. chup sa kar gaya ... ye aise teer hai jo kab aa ke gad gaye pata nahi ...

tumne behad acchi koshish ko anjaam diya hai .. mere paas to lafz hi nahi hai .. kyunki jitna kahunga kam rahega ... so wahi baat kehta hun.. jo kahin kanhin hi likhata hun main ...

Teh dil se shukriya.............!!!!

Seedha saaf saccha aur accha ...


Seedha saaf saccha aur accha shukriya shukriya shukriya...........!!!

Khush raho

Tum Bhi khush raho...........!!!

Tumhara apna

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kaisy hain aap?
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