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yaadein.. - 15th November 2015, 10:57 PM
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Is ghazal ka matla aur ek sher madhu ji ka diya hua hai aur maine diye matle ko aage badhane ki gustakhi ki hai. Umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegi

Madhu ji behad shukriya aapki wajah se ek haseen ghazal ko anjaam milaa.

Bas gaya ankhon me fir chehra suhana apka
Yaad aaya aaj fir vo muskurana apka...

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Sath ab dete nahi mera suno alfaaz bhi.
Aur uspar pyaar se batein banana apka

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shukriya... - 16th November 2015, 01:06 PM
waah!!mast ji..matle par bahut khoob ashaar kahe hain aapne aur ek muqammal ghazal me tabdeel kar diya... dil se mubarakbaad aur daad qubool kijiyega...

ek baar fir se zarra nawazi ka behad shukriya...

meri khushkismati hai ki aap jaise doston ka sath hai...

khush rahein...
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bahut khoob mast bhai kya baat hai daad hi daad.......................

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17th November 2015, 10:01 AM
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Doston,

Is ghazal ka matla aur ek sher madhu ji ka diya hua hai aur maine diye matle ko aage badhane ki gustakhi ki hai. Umeed karta hoon aapko pasand aayegi

Madhu ji behad shukriya aapki wajah se ek haseen ghazal ko anjaam milaa.

Bas gaya ankhon me fir chehra suhana apka
Yaad aaya aaj fir vo muskurana apka...

dekhiye aakhir kisi ki jaan pe ban aayi hai.
kya kahun phir is ada se dil lubhaana aapka

kya likhun kagaz pe ab main daastaan ye pyaar ki
bin kahe hi ban gaya ab har fasaana aapka

Sath ab dete nahi mera suno alfaaz bhi.
Aur uspar pyaar se batein banana apka

Is gali mein ab talak vo chaand bhi maayus hai
raat bhar mehfil mein hota shayarana aapka

Mast bhai....bahut khoob likha hai aapne...Gulam Ali ji ki gaaye gazal yaad aa gye aapki yeh gazal padkar...

chupke chupke raat din aansu bahan yaad hai,
hamko ab tak ashiqi ka wo zamana yaad hai

duaoN ke saath

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17th November 2015, 12:18 PM
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waah!!mast ji..matle par bahut khoob ashaar kahe hain aapne aur ek muqammal ghazal me tabdeel kar diya... dil se mubarakbaad aur daad qubool kijiyega...

ek baar fir se zarra nawazi ka behad shukriya...

meri khushkismati hai ki aap jaise doston ka sath hai...

khush rahein...
likhte rahein....
are aap to modest ho rahi hai yeh ghazal na ho paati agar matla itna asardaar na hota...saath ka shukriyaa


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Mast bhai....bahut khoob likha hai aapne...Gulam Ali ji ki gaaye gazal yaad aa gye aapki yeh gazal padkar...

chupke chupke raat din aansu bahan yaad hai,
hamko ab tak ashiqi ka wo zamana yaad hai

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Didi aapne to nacheez ko itni badi hasti se compare kar diya ki kya kahun...Maulana Hasrat Mohani ji ki yeh ghazal mere bhi dil ke behad kareeb hai...aapke saath ka behad shukriyaa


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