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Ek Wo Ke Faqat Rooth Ke Jane Ke Liye Tha...................... - 28th August 2008, 01:57 PM
APP SAB KO RIZI KA SALAM KYSE HEIN SAB AP KI KHIDMAT MAIN KUCH PAISH KER RAHA HON YAKEEN KERTA HON APP KO PASSAND AYE GI........


Ek Wo Ke Faqat Rooth Ke Jane Ke Liye Tha !!
Or Mein Ke Usey Roz Manane Ke Liye Tha !!

Hum Jis Ki Tamana Mein Hue Taaraq_e_Duniya !!
Wo Shakhs Kisi Or Zamane Ke Liye Tha !!

Ghairon Ke Liye Tum Ne Jise Tor Diya Tha !!
Wo Ehad_e_Rafaqat Tu Nibhane Ke Liye Tha !!

Har Baar Wo Dhone Se Numaya Hi Hua Hai !!
Ek Dagh Jo Us Dil Se Mitane Ke Liye Tha !!

Us Ko Tu Kabhi Mujh Se Mohabbat Hi nahi Thi !!
Ye Khel Tu Duniya Ko Dikhane Ke Liye Tha !!

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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28th August 2008, 02:03 PM
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APP SAB KO RIZI KA SALAM KYSE HEIN SAB AP KI KHIDMAT MAIN KUCH PAISH KER RAHA HON YAKEEN KERTA HON APP KO PASSAND AYE GI........


Ek Wo Ke Faqat Rooth Ke Jane Ke Liye Tha !!
Or Mein Ke Usey Roz Manane Ke Liye Tha !!

Hum Jis Ki Tamana Mein Hue Taaraq_e_Duniya !!
Wo Shakhs Kisi Or Zamane Ke Liye Tha !!

Ghairon Ke Liye Tum Ne Jise Tor Diya Tha !!
Wo Ehad_e_Rafaqat Tu Nibhane Ke Liye Tha !!

Har Baar Wo Dhone Se Numaya Hi Hua Hai !!
Ek Dagh Jo Us Dil Se Mitane Ke Liye Tha !!

Us Ko Tu Kabhi Mujh Se Mohabbat Hi nahi Thi !!
Ye Khel Tu Duniya Ko Dikhane Ke Liye Tha !!
wah Rizi ji bahat khoob....kuchh khas hote hain aap ke har nagme .....daad kabool kijiye ..........

Hume to koi manane hi nehin aate ..
isliye roothne ki andaaz hum bhool gaye


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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28th August 2008, 02:15 PM
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vaise to main aapka naya dost ban sakta hun agar aap chahe to.....aapne bahut accha likha hai......main bhi bas koshish kar raha hun


Bahut pucha hanskar lekin jawab rone se mila
bahut pucha jaagkar lekin jawab rone se mila
paane ki chah me jati rahi zindagi apni
agar kuch mila to bas khone ko mila....


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28th August 2008, 02:19 PM
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wah Rizi ji bahat khoob....kuchh khas hote hain aap ke har nagme .....daad kabool kijiye ..........

Hume to koi manane hi nehin aate ..
isliye roothne ki andaaz hum bhool gaye

BOHAT BOHAT SHUKRIA JANAB APP KI DAAD HUMNE KABOOL KER LOI HAI KHUSH RAHEN OR APNA KHAYAL RAKHNA....

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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vaise to main aapka naya dost ban sakta hun agar aap chahe to.....aapne bahut accha likha hai......main bhi bas koshish kar raha hun


Bahut pucha hanskar lekin jawab rone se mila
bahut pucha jaagkar lekin jawab rone se mila
paane ki chah me jati rahi zindagi apni
agar kuch mila to bas khone ko mila....


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bohat bohat shukria saagar ji .app humare dost ban sakte hein app ko pura haq hai...or hum app ki koshish main app k saath hein hamehsa apna khayal rakhna ...


app ne bohat khoob likha hai khush rahen...

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Hello freind
vaise to main aapka naya dost ban sakta hun agar aap chahe to.....aapne bahut accha likha hai......main bhi bas koshish kar raha hun


Bahut pucha hanskar lekin jawab rone se mila
bahut pucha jaagkar lekin jawab rone se mila
paane ki chah me jati rahi zindagi apni
agar kuch mila to bas khone ko mila....


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saagar ji kya khub kaha aapne .........

duniyan main sabse garib wohi hai
jiska kuchh khoya nehin ab tak


Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai

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APP SAB KO RIZI KA SALAM KYSE HEIN SAB AP KI KHIDMAT MAIN KUCH PAISH KER RAHA HON YAKEEN KERTA HON APP KO PASSAND AYE GI........


Ek Wo Ke Faqat Rooth Ke Jane Ke Liye Tha !!
Or Mein Ke Usey Roz Manane Ke Liye Tha !!

Hum Jis Ki Tamana Mein Hue Taaraq_e_Duniya !!
Wo Shakhs Kisi Or Zamane Ke Liye Tha !!

Ghairon Ke Liye Tum Ne Jise Tor Diya Tha !!
Wo Ehad_e_Rafaqat Tu Nibhane Ke Liye Tha !!

Har Baar Wo Dhone Se Numaya Hi Hua Hai !!
Ek Dagh Jo Us Dil Se Mitane Ke Liye Tha !!

Us Ko Tu Kabhi Mujh Se Mohabbat Hi nahi Thi !!
Ye Khel Tu Duniya Ko Dikhane Ke Liye Tha !!
bahut achchi he janab aapki gajal
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bahut achchi he janab aapki gajal


bohat bohat shukria janab app ki dua hai k hum itna likh lete hein bas app dua humare liye dua ker diya karo hum ayse he achi achi post kerty rahen gy.apna khayal rakhna....

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ji kyun nahi janab hum bi app k liye dua kiya karen gy.app be humen apni duaon main yaad rakhna wayse app ne shair bohat acha likha hai khush raha karen ayse sad shair kyun khair hai na....

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bohut acha likha hai apne ...... rizi


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bohut acha likha hai apne ...... rizi


ASSALAMOALYKUM...
janab bohat bohat shukria app ki daad ka.app ko acha laga humari mehnat puriho gai khush rahen or ati jati rahen.kal pakistan main roza hai app ko advanced main RAMDHAN MUBARAKH...apna khayal rakhna.or humare liye dua kerna....

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thanxxx rizi zaroor app sab k liye dua go rahay gai.......


New friends are like POEMS..
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APP SAB KO RIZI KA SALAM KYSE HEIN SAB AP KI KHIDMAT MAIN KUCH PAISH KER RAHA HON YAKEEN KERTA HON APP KO PASSAND AYE GI........


Ek Wo Ke Faqat Rooth Ke Jane Ke Liye Tha !!
Or Mein Ke Usey Roz Manane Ke Liye Tha !!

Hum Jis Ki Tamana Mein Hue Taaraq_e_Duniya !!
Wo Shakhs Kisi Or Zamane Ke Liye Tha !!

Ghairon Ke Liye Tum Ne Jise Tor Diya Tha !!
Wo Ehad_e_Rafaqat Tu Nibhane Ke Liye Tha !!

Har Baar Wo Dhone Se Numaya Hi Hua Hai !!
Ek Dagh Jo Us Dil Se Mitane Ke Liye Tha !!

Us Ko Tu Kabhi Mujh Se Mohabbat Hi nahi Thi !!
Ye Khel Tu Duniya Ko Dikhane Ke Liye Tha !!

Waaahhh rizi sahab...bahut khoob..

Us Ko Tu Kabhi Mujh Se Mohabbat Hi nahi Thi !!
Ye Khel Tu Duniya Ko Dikhane Ke Liye Tha !!

kya sahi kaha hai zanaab....intzaar rahega aapki shayrion ka...
   
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thanxxx rizi zaroor app sab k liye dua go rahay gai.......

bohat shukria sana ji hum be app ko duaon main yaad rakhen gy. apna khayal rakhna...

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Waaahhh rizi sahab...bahut khoob..

Us Ko Tu Kabhi Mujh Se Mohabbat Hi nahi Thi !!
Ye Khel Tu Duniya Ko Dikhane Ke Liye Tha !!

kya sahi kaha hai zanaab....intzaar rahega aapki shayrion ka...


bohat shukria raj ji app ne daad di bohat khushi hui es baat se wayse to hum app se kum he hein app to PHR app ho..
zarur hum ap k liye achi achi shayri post karen gy apna khayal rakhna....

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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Rizi ji namaskaar..........aapki shayri har baar dil ko pasand aaye hai...es baar bhi bahut acche ahsaas pesh kiye haiN , har sher pasand aaya....yoon hi likhtey rahiye

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Rizi ji namaskaar..........aapki shayri har baar dil ko pasand aaye hai...es baar bhi bahut acche ahsaas pesh kiye haiN , har sher pasand aaya....yoon hi likhtey rahiye

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ji inshallah dua me jarur yaad rakhege
Neend aankhon main nahin, khwaab kho gaye
Tanha hi the, kuch aur tere bin hum ho gaye
Dil kuch tadap utha, zuban bhi ladkhadai
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Tanha hi the, kuch aur tere bin hum ho gaye
Dil kuch tadap utha, zuban bhi ladkhadai
Teri yaad main do aansu chupke se beh gaye !

ji kyun nahi irfan bhai kyun nahi hum app ko zarur duaon main yaad rakhen gy..app be humen apni duaon main yaad rakhiye ga....apne bohat acha shair likha hai thx for this apna khayal rakhiye ga....

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Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazl hai... padhkar bahut accha laga... Aage bhi aise hi share karte rahiye... but please give proper credits with the posts not written by you... Keep sharing..


bohat bohat shukria pulkit gupta ji bohat shukria k app ne apna keemti waqt nikal k meri post parhi or usko riply kia thx again.....apna khayal rakhna...

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