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भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर, - 9th October 2010, 01:19 AM

भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर



भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर,

शहर की देखो हालत पूअर.

हर सडक पे हर चौक पे
लगता पशू मेला है,
इन्सानों की जान का जोखिम
कैसा अज़ब झमेला है.

भौं भौं की, रम्भाने की
मिमयाने की आवाज़ों को,
असप्ताल मे बीमारों ने
ज़ाने कैसे झेला है.

शहर के एम सी बहुत बिज़ी हैं
फ़ंसे हुए बेगारों मे,
कोई ना कोई किसी ना किसी
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आज ट्रैफ़िक चेक करने का
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Love 9th October 2010, 11:07 AM

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भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर



भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर,

शहर की देखो हालत पूअर.

हर सडक पे हर चौक पे
लगता पशू मेला है,
इन्सानों की जान का जोखिम
कैसा अज़ब झमेला है.

भौं भौं की, रम्भाने की
मिमयाने की आवाज़ों को,
असप्ताल मे बीमारों ने
ज़ाने कैसे झेला है.

शहर के एम सी बहुत बिज़ी हैं
फ़ंसे हुए बेगारों मे,
कोई ना कोई किसी ना किसी
मंत्री जी का चेला है.

आज ट्रैफ़िक चेक करने का
ज़िम्मा लिआ है सान्डों ने,
लगता है इस नगर का यारो
थानेदार अकेला है.
komal bhai
radhe radhe

aapne shahar ki tasveer to sahi kheenchi hai par ek galti kar gaye kyonki awaara bhains nahi milegi kabhi bhi
jis desh me gaaon ko pooja jaata hai usi desh me sirf gaay hi awaara milengi kitne sharm ki baat hai
ise theek karen vaise aapki rachna bahut khoob hai
likhte rahen kalam ka haq adaa karte rahen
duaon ke saath



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9th October 2010, 11:20 AM

भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर,
शहर की देखो हालत पूअर.


hahahaha... jabardast hai bhai jabardast ...


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भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर,
शहर की देखो हालत पूअर.


hahahaha... jabardast hai bhai jabardast ...


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भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर,
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hahahaha... jabardast hai bhai jabardast ...
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भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर



भैंस सांड कुत्ता और सूअर,
शहर की देखो हालत पूअर.

हर सडक पे हर चौक पे
लगता पशू मेला है,
इन्सानों की जान का जोखिम
कैसा अज़ब झमेला है.

भौं भौं की, रम्भाने की
मिमयाने की आवाज़ों को,
असप्ताल मे बीमारों ने
ज़ाने कैसे झेला है.

शहर के एम सी बहुत बिज़ी हैं
फ़ंसे हुए बेगारों मे,
कोई ना कोई किसी ना किसी
मंत्री जी का चेला है.

आज ट्रैफ़िक चेक करने का
ज़िम्मा लिआ है सान्डों ने,
लगता है इस नगर का यारो
थानेदार अकेला है.

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main aapkois rachnaa pe daad dete huye fakhr mahsoos kartaa hun
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namaste!

bahot hi Khoob! dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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bahot hi Khoob! dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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