 |
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
tamana bhi nahin |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
Registered User
 
Offline
Posts: 204
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 20
|
tamana bhi nahin -
10th May 2005, 02:25 PM
Chahti ho jise..unhe shayad parwah tak nahin
Aur unke begair is dil se nikli koi aah bhi nahin Naam ek unka hi hai is dil par har dam Mil na sake..aur kehne me woh bewafa bhi nahin Sun ne ko karta hai dil unki awaz bar-bar Par meri woh awaz jo unke dil tak pohunche..aisi koi rah bhi nahin Chuhtey hain hath hathoun se kuch aise mere.. Aab kisi ka hath hum thamey..aisi koi tamana bhi nahin "To meet and part is the way of life, But to part and meet is the HOPE of life" ~Lovesnows~ |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
kuch baatein kuch yaadein
Offline
Posts: 1,748
Join Date: May 2003
Rep Power: 22
|
10th May 2005, 06:57 PM
snowy
aap likha sidhe dil mein utar gaya behad khoob sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 204
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 20
|
10th May 2005, 08:10 PM
shukriya...
"To meet and part is the way of life, But to part and meet is the HOPE of life" ~Lovesnows~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 232
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: dehli
Rep Power: 20
|
10th May 2005, 10:00 PM
nice work dear
g8 likha hai aapne dear Yaad aane lagi jaan jaane lagi Mere dil mein sanam tu samaane lagi Dheere dheere sanam dil mein aate gaye Dharkanon mein sanam hum samaate gaye Dharkanon mein sanam hum samaate gaye |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 204
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 20
|
11th May 2005, 12:43 AM
shukriya...
"To meet and part is the way of life, But to part and meet is the HOPE of life" ~Lovesnows~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 292
Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: indore
Rep Power: 21
|
11th May 2005, 02:37 PM
wah wah wah kya khub likha hai.
sidhe dil me sama gaya...... keep on writing such a great so called shayri.... suyog |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 204
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 20
|
11th May 2005, 05:19 PM
shukriya...
"To meet and part is the way of life, But to part and meet is the HOPE of life" ~Lovesnows~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
Registered User
 
Offline
Posts: 1,089
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Toronto,Canada
Rep Power: 31
|
12th May 2005, 12:38 AM
hi
aapne bahut hi aacha likha hai ... kise ne saach hi kaha hai ki tamana dil mein reh jaati hai ... ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Re: tamana bhi nahin |
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
Tanha
Offline
Posts: 528
Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Uttaranchal
Rep Power: 20
|
Re: tamana bhi nahin -
12th May 2005, 11:15 AM
appke ehsaas padte hue bhaut acche lage......keep it up!!
shalini Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 204
Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 20
|
12th May 2005, 05:41 PM
shalini ji aur mann_chand ji... shukriya...
"To meet and part is the way of life, But to part and meet is the HOPE of life" ~Lovesnows~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
|
Similar Threads
|
||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Ek Sathi Ki Tamana | dilkibaat | Shayri-e-Dard | 1 | 13th February 2007 10:34 PM |
| Barso Ki Tamana | SIMMI SACHDEVA | Shayri-e-Dard | 2 | 27th April 2006 05:44 PM |
| milne ki tamana hi................. | faiq | Shayri-e-Dard | 0 | 14th June 2005 05:35 PM |
| Ek Tamana..... | nice_off_me | Shayri-e-Ishq | 0 | 9th March 2005 12:22 PM |
| dil ki tamana | sengar_rajs | Shayri-e-Ishq | 2 | 1st March 2004 02:02 AM |
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
