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15th September 2003, 04:50 AM
yeh pyaar kab kise kahan ho jaye...
dil phir kisi ki yaad mein kho jaye raat bhar teri tasweer ko taktey rahin din dhale phir sawera hoo jaye tujh sey wafa key bharam ki umeed mujhey kash mousamey khizaan bahaar hoo jaye tera khyal saja hai barhaa dil mein kyun na ek roz roop ye singhaar hoo jaye mila tha yehein mujh ko woh shakhs ek din fiza meri her saans jiss pey nisaar hoo jaye fiza mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N |
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Re: yeh pyaar kab kise kahan ho jaye... -
17th September 2003, 08:37 PM
WAH FIZA JI......kya kehne.....behad pyara likha hai aapne....mano kai phool khila gaya yeh kalaam ...bahot pyara khayal hai...likhte rahiye...
-MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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20th September 2003, 07:07 AM
Salam Manoj ji,
aapki itne pyaar bhare pazirayee ke hum tehe dil se mumnoon hein. phool khila dena bahut bari baat hey aur aapne to yeh izzat humein bakshi hey....kaheen jyada nahi lagta aapko  Lekin aapki houslafzayee ka bahut bahut shukriya...! khush rahein sada duago fiza mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N |
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21st September 2003, 04:43 AM
Wah, achha laga aapki yeh ahsaash. Aise hi likhte rahiyega.
Thanks. Take care. God bless. Shimul. Khuda Kare sab Pyaar karne waleko uska Pyaar miljaye. Ameen. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Shukriya! |
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Shukriya! -
21st September 2003, 11:50 AM
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Shimul ji...
aapne hamara housla barhaya humein bahut khushi hui duago fiza mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N |
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25th September 2003, 05:40 PM
Kya baat hei fizaa jee,
Ishara kidhar hei. Waise bahut shayrana andaj hei mohtarma ka. Maan gaye bhai. इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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Shukriya! -
27th September 2003, 04:42 AM
Dard ji,
waise to humne ishara nahi kiya lekin kehate hain ke...samajdhar ko ishara kaafi hota hey and seems like aapko koi ishara nazar aaya is mein hmm?  kher...janab kyaa maan gaye hmmm? hum bhi to jaane... shukriya waqt nikalne ka duago fiza mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N |
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27th September 2003, 04:22 PM
Well said..
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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zarranawazi -
27th September 2003, 10:40 PM
Salaam Manish ji,
mashallah!!! kyaa baat hey bari acchi nazm ke sath aapne humare nazm ko chaar chand laga diya... khush rahein sada duago fiza mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N |
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27th September 2003, 11:08 PM
Manish Jee, wah bohot khub. Haar ek baat achha laga lekin yeh keya?
Chalo phir se kahin dil laga lain Kahi aur dil lagane ki baate kyu? Aap bohot achha likhte hein. Khusi kafhi nazar ayi. Sukriya. Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless. Kuch khushi ke maoke par kuch likhdeti hu, Ashao ke sawan meh umango ki bahar meh tum mujhko dhundho meh kho jau Pyaar meh. Ashao ke .................................! Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Salaam! |
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Salaam! -
28th September 2003, 08:40 PM
Manish ji....
hum to bas dil ki kuch khwaishaton ko alfazon ki lariyon mein pesh karne ke koshish hee karte hein aapne...humein itna bari shayara bana diya...janab aapke liye poori nazm lekar aayein hein hum yeh hamari nahi hey....... hasarat hai tujhe saamane baiThe kabhii dekhuu.N mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N [muKhaatib honaa = to address someone] dil me.n hai mulaaqaat kii Khvaahish kii dabii aag mehandii lage haatho.n ko chhupaa kar kahaa.N rakhuu.N [Khvaahish = desire] jis naam se tuune mujhe bachapan se pukaaraa ik umr guzarane pe bhii vo naam na bhuluu.N tuu ashk hii ban ke merii aa.Nkho.n me.n samaa jaa mai.n aa_iinaa dekhuu.N to teraa aks bhii dekhuu.N [aks = reflection] puuchhuu.N kabhii Guncho.n se sitaaro.n se havaa se tujh se hii magar aa ke teraa naam na puuchhuu.N [Gunchaa = flower bud] ai merii tamannaa ke sitaare tuu kahaa.N hai tuu aaye to ye jism shab-e-Gam ko na sau.npuu.N [sau.npanaa = to entrust] Poet: Kishwar Naheed HUmein bhi bahut acchi lagi yeh....aap bhi iska anand oothaiye duago fiza mai.n tujh se muKhaatib huu.N teraa haal bhii puuchhuu.N |
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