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20th August 2007, 04:12 PM
MEHFIL KO IS NACHEEZ KA AADAAB..
aaj ka din kuch khaas hai mere liye,isi per kuch likha hai..gaur kijiyega..
HAI YEH DIN AISA,
MAI KABHIE BHOOL NA PAAU,
SANG TERE MANAANE YEH JANAMDIN,
MAI DAUDI CHALI AAU.
HAI TU WAHAN AUR MAI YAHAN,
AUR BEECH MAI HAIN YEH DOORIYAN,
DIL CHAHE MERA BAS..
MAI UD KE CHALI AAU.
TUJHE CHOOMUN,TUJHE CHAHUN,
TERA PAL PAL MEHKAAUN,
KHUSH KARNE KO TUJHE,
MAI HADD SE GUZAR JAAUN.
HAI YEHI BAS ARMAAN MERA,
KE SANG TERE MAI RAHUN SADAA,
KYA HOGI POORI YEH TAMANNA MERI??
MAI BAS SOCHTI REH JAAU..
apni aara se zaroor nawaaziyega..
akelijaan..
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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20th August 2007, 06:12 PM
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Originally Posted by akelijaan
MEHFIL KO IS NACHEEZ KA AADAAB..
aaj ka din kuch khaas hai mere liye,isi per kuch likha hai..gaur kijiyega..
HAI YEH DIN AISA,
MAI KABHIE BHOOL NA PAAU,
SANG TERE MANAANE YEH JANAMDIN,
MAI DAUDI CHALI AAU.
HAI TU WAHAN AUR MAI YAHAN,
AUR BEECH MAI HAIN YEH DOORIYAN,
DIL CHAHE MERA BAS..
MAI UD KE CHALI AAU.
TUJHE CHOOMUN,TUJHE CHAHUN,
TERA PAL PAL MEHKAAUN,
KHUSH KARNE KO TUJHE,
MAI HADD SE GUZAR JAAUN.
HAI YEHI BAS ARMAAN MERA,
KE SANG TERE MAI RAHUN SADAA,
KYA HOGI POORI YEH TAMANNA MERI??
MAI BAS SOCHTI REH JAAU..
apni aara se zaroor nawaaziyega..
akelijaan..
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Itni saadgi se kitna achha aur mitha likha hai aap ne...
Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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21st August 2007, 12:40 AM
Bahoot hi dilkash dost.....aage bhi pad chuka hooN ise kahiN...bahoot hi oomda likha hai...
harash
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21st August 2007, 03:47 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by akelijaan
MEHFIL KO IS NACHEEZ KA AADAAB..
aaj ka din kuch khaas hai mere liye,isi per kuch likha hai..gaur kijiyega..
HAI YEH DIN AISA,
MAI KABHIE BHOOL NA PAAU,
SANG TERE MANAANE YEH JANAMDIN,
MAI DAUDI CHALI AAU.
HAI TU WAHAN AUR MAI YAHAN,
AUR BEECH MAI HAIN YEH DOORIYAN,
DIL CHAHE MERA BAS..
MAI UD KE CHALI AAU.
TUJHE CHOOMUN,TUJHE CHAHUN,
TERA PAL PAL MEHKAAUN,
KHUSH KARNE KO TUJHE,
MAI HADD SE GUZAR JAAUN.
HAI YEHI BAS ARMAAN MERA,
KE SANG TERE MAI RAHUN SADAA,
KYA HOGI POORI YEH TAMANNA MERI??
MAI BAS SOCHTI REH JAAU..
apni aara se zaroor nawaaziyega..
akelijaan..
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sara ji ko raj ka adaab......kyaa baat hai bhut khub bhut pyare ehsaas hain ek tadap nazar aa rahi hai aapki nazam mein kisi se milne ki kisi ke paas hone kii.......daad pesh hai kabool kare.......raj.....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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25th August 2007, 09:28 PM
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Itni saadgi se kitna achha aur mitha likha hai aap ne...
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bahut bhaut shukriya ek dharkan ji..meri post per aane ka aur mujhe pasand karne ke liye shkurguzaar hun aapki.umeed karti hun aapka saath aahe bhi isis tarah milta rahega
aate rahiyega
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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25th August 2007, 09:32 PM
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Bahoot hi dilkash dost.....aage bhi pad chuka hooN ise kahiN...bahoot hi oomda likha hai...
harash
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bahut bhuat shukriya harash ji,aapko apni post per dekh bahut khushi hui...jaisa bhi likha hai per aapse to kamtar hi hai..
yunhin saath dete rahiyega..
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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27th August 2007, 05:10 PM
Saaraa jee adaab-o-taSleemat:
bahot hi achchii kavviSh aapki taraf sey paRhne ko milii.. KhuShii hu;ii aapko paRh ke,, bas guzaariSh yahi hay kii aap aage bhee YUuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheN..
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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4th September 2007, 04:59 PM
hello raj ji..bahut acha laga aapko yahan dekh..kitni khoobi se aap jazbaat samjh lete hain..aapko mera likha pasand aaya.meri khusnaseebi.yunhin saath dete rahiyega
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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7th September 2007, 09:05 PM
hii,
bahot pyari lines hei...laga jaise ..hamare dil ki hasrato ko aapne shabdo mei bayan kar diya.
Warm Regards,
Tarun
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8th September 2007, 12:15 AM
Good one Keep it up
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13th September 2007, 04:08 PM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
Saaraa jee adaab-o-taSleemat:
bahot hi achchii kavviSh aapki taraf sey paRhne ko milii.. KhuShii hu;ii aapko paRh ke,, bas guzaariSh yahi hay kii aap aage bhee YUuNhi bazm ko sajaate raheN..
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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hello dhaval ji,aap ko to apni har post per paaya hai maine.bahut acha lagta hai jab bhi aapka revw dekhti hun.
bas aap isi gtarah saath dete rahiyega aur mai isi tarah likhti rahungi..
thnx so much..aate rahiyega,khush rahen
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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13th September 2007, 04:27 PM
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hii,
bahot pyari lines hei...laga jaise ..hamare dil ki hasrato ko aapne shabdo mei bayan kar diya.
Warm Regards,
Tarun
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helo tarun ji,
bahut khushi hui aapko apni post per dekh,aapko is nacheez ka likha pasand aya yeh khushnasebi meri.
umeed hai yeh saath yunhi berqaraar rahega
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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18th September 2007, 08:57 PM
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MEHFIL KO IS NACHEEZ KA AADAAB..
aaj ka din kuch khaas hai mere liye,isi per kuch likha hai..gaur kijiyega..
HAI YEH DIN AISA,
MAI KABHIE BHOOL NA PAAU,
SANG TERE MANAANE YEH JANAMDIN,
MAI DAUDI CHALI AAU.
HAI TU WAHAN AUR MAI YAHAN,
AUR BEECH MAI HAIN YEH DOORIYAN,
DIL CHAHE MERA BAS..
MAI UD KE CHALI AAU.
TUJHE CHOOMUN,TUJHE CHAHUN,
TERA PAL PAL MEHKAAUN,
KHUSH KARNE KO TUJHE,
MAI HADD SE GUZAR JAAUN.
HAI YEHI BAS ARMAAN MERA,
KE SANG TERE MAI RAHUN SADAA,
KYA HOGI POORI YEH TAMANNA MERI??
MAI BAS SOCHTI REH JAAU..
apni aara se zaroor nawaaziyega..
akelijaan..
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Aadab sara ji,
kaise hain aap?
wah _ WAH bohot hi khubsurti se aapne apni dili kefiyat ko bayan kiya hain,
jis kisi ke liye bhi aapne is nazam ko likha hain,unhe b hamari taraf se janam din mubarak keh dijiyega.
bohot hi pyari nazam hai,
daad kabul kijiyega,
khush rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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10th November 2007, 06:19 PM
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Good one Keep it up
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thnx a lot princi.
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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10th November 2007, 06:21 PM
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Aadab sara ji,
kaise hain aap?
wah _ WAH bohot hi khubsurti se aapne apni dili kefiyat ko bayan kiya hain,
jis kisi ke liye bhi aapne is nazam ko likha hain,unhe b hamari taraf se janam din mubarak keh dijiyega.
bohot hi pyari nazam hai,
daad kabul kijiyega,
khush rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye,
ALLAH HAFIZ
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soni ji bahut bhaut shukriya mere likhe ko apna keemti waqt dene ka aur pasand karne ka,yunhin saath deti rahiyega
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
--akelijaan--
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17th November 2007, 11:27 AM
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Originally Posted by akelijaan
MEHFIL KO IS NACHEEZ KA AADAAB..
aaj ka din kuch khaas hai mere liye,isi per kuch likha hai..gaur kijiyega..
HAI YEH DIN AISA,
MAI KABHIE BHOOL NA PAAU,
SANG TERE MANAANE YEH JANAMDIN,
MAI DAUDI CHALI AAU.
HAI TU WAHAN AUR MAI YAHAN,
AUR BEECH MAI HAIN YEH DOORIYAN,
DIL CHAHE MERA BAS..
MAI UD KE CHALI AAU.
TUJHE CHOOMUN,TUJHE CHAHUN,
TERA PAL PAL MEHKAAUN,
KHUSH KARNE KO TUJHE,
MAI HADD SE GUZAR JAAUN.
HAI YEHI BAS ARMAAN MERA,
KE SANG TERE MAI RAHUN SADAA,
KYA HOGI POORI YEH TAMANNA MERI??
MAI BAS SOCHTI REH JAAU..
apni aara se zaroor nawaaziyega..
akelijaan..
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Bahut khubsurat ahsaas hai aapke likhne ka.
aage bhi aise hi likhte rahe duaaon ke saath ijazat
Allah Hafiz
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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3rd April 2008, 11:42 PM
Thnx Shaan ..aapki Duayen Saath Hain To Zaroor Aage Bhi Mai Likhti Rahungi..
Duaon Ki Talabgaar,
yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??
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