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27th June 2006, 01:59 PM
dosto ek nai or taza gazal appkay naam.....
tum say jab khafa honay ko dil karta hai, dil ka dard hai jo thora aur barta hai....... jab kabhi tujh say tanhai chhahta hoon, aur toot kay pyar karnay ko dil karta hai...... door nikal janay kay iraday roz karta hoon, laut kay phir tumsay lipat janay ko dil karta hai..... darta hoon teri chhahat ki shiddat say aksar, phir tujh main he sama janay ko dil karta hai...... tum khuda to nahi ho yeh janta hoon main, phir bhee tujhay sajda karnay ko dil karta hai...... tere intzaar main aksar tanha rehta hoon main, tanhai main tera intzaar karnay ko dil karta hai........ teri ibadat hai 'veer' ki zindagi ka sabab, na janay kiyon tum par mit janay ko dil karta hai...... dosto umeed karta hoon appko pasand aiyegi......appkay jabaab ka muntzir..........appka...........raj........ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: tum say jab khafa honay ko dil karta hai,......... -
27th June 2006, 04:44 PM
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bahut khoob, appki shayri to pyar se nikhri hue lagti hai, ek ek shabad kuad mahsoos kiya lagta hai. mubarak ho es pyari shayri ke liye. yu likhtey rahna   .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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shukria -
27th June 2006, 05:23 PM
sunita ji appko meri poetry achi laggi yeh appki oonchi soach ka kamaal hai.....warna hum to bass yu hee dil kay jajbaat kagaz kay seenay par uttar detay hai......appka dost raj.........
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hi -
3rd July 2006, 12:15 AM
HI veer
how are you? hamesha ki tarha ise bare bhi bhaote hi aacha likha hia kya likhoo tume hari tarife maie abe to jaise labzo ki kami hoti jati hia. lakine you know how i feel when i read something written by you i feel ke base aise hi hum padte rahi hamesha. nice work keep it up. mushkan |
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8th July 2006, 08:02 PM
sonia ji is zaranawazi kay liye main tahay dil say appka shukar guzaar hoon....umeed karta hoon app yu hee is nacheez ki hosla afzai karti raho gi.....appka dost........raj.......
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4th July 2010, 07:40 PM
Bohat khoob Rajveer Bhai.........
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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5th July 2010, 11:41 AM
bhot hi behtrin lazwaab adhbudh har lafz ko mehsus kar sakte hai beshkimati alfaz hai aapke dil ko sukun mil gaya
ab itni achi shyari padhi hai to ek sher to bolna hi padega to pesh-e-kidhmat hai bekhyali main tumhari ungliyaan jal jayegi dabi hui rakh ko kureda na karo pawan(shayari) |
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5th July 2010, 11:20 PM
bekhyali main tumhari ungliyaan jal jayegi
dabi hui rakh ko kureda na karo Bohat khoob Pawan saheb.....zabardast raha yeh sher. Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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