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Wo jaate jaate mujhe shayar bana gai..... - 25th June 2009, 12:21 PM

Doston ..phir ek nayi koshish ...ek nayi ummeed ke saath....Do reply..





Wo jaate jaate mujhe shayar bana gai,
Dil me chhupe us dard ke ehsaas ko phir jaga gai.

Dekha tha ek haseen khwaab us se mulaqaat ke baad,
Aankhon mein base us khwaab ko dekho phir jalaa gai.
Wo jaate jaate mujhe…….

Mai ye samjha tha ke taqdeer hai wo meri ,
Un kismat ki lakiron ko lo aaj phir wo mita gai.
Wo jaate jaate mujhe…….

Koi saugaat to us se kabhi na mili thi mujhe ,
Bas ek tasveer thi dil me uski,wo bhi chura gai.
Wo jaate jaate mujhe…….

Ubhara tha mai kitni muddatton mein jahan se,
Us gam ke samandar me mujhe phir se dooba gai
Wo jaate jaate mujhe…….


Jee raha tha mai khwaabon ke us jahaan mein,
Mujhe haqeeqat ka ye manjar lo phir dikha gai.
Wo jaate jaate mujhe…….


Toda tha dum kisi shayar ne kabhi uski shayari karte karte ,
Uski laash ko kitni muddatton baad kambakht aaj wo dafna gai.
Wo jaate jaate mujhe…….


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Zindagi itni aasaan hoti .....to jee gaye hote.

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25th June 2009, 12:28 PM

Very nice dear, bahut acche jasbaat hain. Yun hee likhte rahiye. Daad kubool kijiyega.



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25th June 2009, 02:27 PM

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Very nice dear, bahut acche jasbaat hain. Yun hee likhte rahiye. Daad kubool kijiyega.
Arvind ji....thanx a lot...daad ke liye bahot bahot shukriya aapka..


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