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kaise banoo us Tasuwur ki Tasveer - 5th August 2008, 01:25 PM
Kuch Dhundhli si Parchaii thi woh
phir kaise banoo us Tasuwur ki Tasveer

Har subha Dhuan ki tarah ud jati hai sarii yandeen
Phir kaise sunaoon unke Khawaboon ki Tabeer

Ye Lakireen bhi mit-ti jarahi hai
Phir kaise batoon apne Hatoon ki Takdeer

Mouzzam har baat to puri hokar bhi hai adhuri
Phir kaise Uthon unke Labzoon ki Takreer

Har rooz jalte hai phir bujh jate hai
Phir kaise dikhaoon apne Asbaboon ki Atish-Ae-Seer

Kabhi woh humare lagte hai aggle hi pal lagte hai ajnabi
Phir kaise kahdoon ki woh humare hai Rajbeer

Markaz si lagti hai har baat najane kyoon
Phir kaise samjhaoon unko har kisiki Nash-o-Naseer
phir kaise banoo us tasuwur ki tasveer
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8th September 2008, 11:53 PM
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aap ki selction bhut nice hai.
bhut bhut shukriya zaranavazi ke liye

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11th September 2008, 06:58 PM
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Kuch Dhundhli si Parchaii thi woh
phir kaise banoo us Tasuwur ki Tasveer

Har subha Dhuan ki tarah ud jati hai sarii yandeen
Phir kaise sunaoon unke Khawaboon ki Tabeer

Ye Lakireen bhi mit-ti jarahi hai
Phir kaise batoon apne Hatoon ki Takdeer

Mouzzam har baat to puri hokar bhi hai adhuri
Phir kaise Uthon unke Labzoon ki Takreer

Har rooz jalte hai phir bujh jate hai
Phir kaise dikhaoon apne Asbaboon ki Atish-Ae-Seer

Kabhi woh humare lagte hai aggle hi pal lagte hai ajnabi
Phir kaise kahdoon ki woh humare hai Rajbeer

Markaz si lagti hai har baat najane kyoon
Phir kaise samjhaoon unko har kisiki Nash-o-Naseer
phir kaise banoo us tasuwur ki tasveer

Bahot achha likhe ho janab padh ke maza aagaya ........dil se daad kabool kijiye ....khus rahiye likhte rahiye ........


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12th December 2010, 01:52 PM
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Kuch Dhundhli si Parchaii thi woh
phir kaise banoo us Tasuwur ki Tasveer

Har subha Dhuan ki tarah ud jati hai sarii yandeen
Phir kaise sunaoon unke Khawaboon ki Tabeer

Ye Lakireen bhi mit-ti jarahi hai
Phir kaise batoon apne Hatoon ki Takdeer

Mouzzam har baat to puri hokar bhi hai adhuri
Phir kaise Uthon unke Labzoon ki Takreer

Har rooz jalte hai phir bujh jate hai
Phir kaise dikhaoon apne Asbaboon ki Atish-Ae-Seer

Kabhi woh humare lagte hai aggle hi pal lagte hai ajnabi
Phir kaise kahdoon ki woh humare hai Rajbeer

Markaz si lagti hai har baat najane kyoon
Phir kaise samjhaoon unko har kisiki Nash-o-Naseer
phir kaise banoo us tasuwur ki tasveer
bahut hi bhadiya likha hai dil se daad kubool kijiye
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Kabhi woh humare lagte hai aggle hi pal lagte hai ajnabi
Phir kaise kahdoon ki woh humare hai Rajbeer

Markaz si lagti hai har baat najane kyoon
Phir kaise samjhaoon unko har kisiki Nash-o-Naseer

Bohat khoob yasir sahab...



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Yasir mere bhai yeh kalam purana zaroor hai........par meri ek baat yaad rakhna........aap me bohat kabiliyat hai.........par yeh aap ke hatho me hai ke aap kitni mehnat karte hai........agar yuhi likhtey rahe aur seekhne ki koshish nahi ki to yeh hunar zaya ho jayega.

Aap urdu adab ki bareekiya seekhiya.......choti choti bato par gaur kijiye apne kalam achche shayro ko padhwate rahe unki islah lete rahe.

Insha_allah Allah ne chaha to ek din aayega jab hum hum aapse shayri seekhege.

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Yasir mere bhai yeh kalam purana zaroor hai........par meri ek baat yaad rakhna........aap me bohat kabiliyat hai.........par yeh aap ke hatho me hai ke aap kitni mehnat karte hai........agar yuhi likhtey rahe aur seekhne ki koshish nahi ki to yeh hunar zaya ho jayega.

Aap urdu adab ki bareekiya seekhiya.......choti choti bato par gaur kijiye apne kalam achche shayro ko padhwate rahe unki islah lete rahe.

Insha_allah Allah ne chaha to ek din aayega jab hum hum aapse shayri seekhege.

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