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15th March 2005, 06:48 PM
Sometimes in Life, We expect a lot from certain people, and they don't turn up to it. We expect them to love us, care for us as much as we do. But not all have the same feelings. I just had this situation in my mind whn i wrote this... Nothing Personal...just letting my creativity flow...Just trying something different..
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15th March 2005, 06:58 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
[B]Sometimes in Life, We expect a lot from certain people, and they don't turn up to it. We expect them to love us, care for us as much as we do. But not all have the same feelings. I just had this situation in my mind whn i wrote this... Nothing Personal...just letting my creativity flow...Just trying something different.. ========================================= Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... Wah kya baat hai, achha likha hai dost . khayaalat bhi no.1 aur kalaam bhi no.1 duwa hai dosti ka asar tum par ho aur sachhe dost bhi mile taaki sachi dosti par bhi kucch likho... tumhari dost |
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15th March 2005, 06:59 PM
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Sometimes in Life, We expect a lot from certain people, and they don't turn up to it. We expect them to love us, care for us as much as we do. But not all have the same feelings. I just had this situation in my mind whn i wrote this... Nothing Personal...just letting my creativity flow...Just trying something different.. Insaan jab in sab baaton par sochne lage to man chahe na chahe udas ho hi jaata hai... Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Raaz to gehra hai... Kaho to bata doon tumhara raaz sabko  Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain Tum mein to koi kami nahi mere dost... Khuda ne tumhe sab kuch hai diya... Kami to jhori mein hai jo heera na tarash paya.. Johri bhi jald milne wala hai tumhe Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain Dost se kya khata hui...jo aapke zeham mein yeh baat aayi Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... Dil se dosti... Dil se hi karte rehna... Dost wahi jo dil se dost maane Pulkit paaji bahut khoob likha hai... Yunhi likhte rahein... Dard mein bhi khoobsurti thi.. Acha hai koi dard nahi tumko... Varna mein to ispe aur bhi jyada dard bhar kar likhta... Thanks Rohin |
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15th March 2005, 07:02 PM
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pulkit, apeksha........... aaj kal shayed isi ka chrcha sare aam hai... Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain hmmmmmm........ kabhi meri bhi yahi soch thhi...... ab bhi soch hai, par yah nahi... tumhe yah pata hai?..... k tumhare chrche chalte hai to soona hai dost kahte hai....... tumne kai raaz chhupaye hai humse is tarah lajwaab likhte ho har pal .. khayal aata hai..... hunar kai arse se chhupaya tumne  di |
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15th March 2005, 07:49 PM
Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain
Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Ha ha ha.....Pulkit mere dost.....aaj tumne meri dukhti rag per haath rakh diya hai.... ( tum sochte hoNge yahaaN is icon ki kya jaroorat thi...kyoNki mai rote huve bahut bura dikhta hooN dost.)Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain kya karna hai eisi jan.nat me jaakar, JahaaN hazaaroN barosoN ki apsaraaeiN raha karti hai Dil behlaane ko Ghaalib ye khayaal bhi achchha hai... (Ghaalib ka hi sher hai shaayad theek se likh nahi paaya...per dost...sahi kaha tumne ...kami khud me hi nazar aati hai jab....koi apna khul apna sa nazar na aaye to.) Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain YahaaN ab kya kahooN dost......samajh sakta hooN bas. Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... Ab ant me mere dost...ek sher...kehte huve afsos hota hai per....keh raha hooN... Wo dil se rishte nibhaata raha.... Or chot dil pe khaata raha... Ik roj waqt ne...ye hunar bhi sikha diya usko Phir wo chehre badal-badal kar..rishte nibhata raha. Tumhaari is post ne ..dil chhu liya... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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15th March 2005, 07:57 PM
Wo dil se rishte nibhaata raha....
Or chot dil pe khaata raha... Ik roj waqt ne...ye hunar bhi sikha diya usko Phir wo chehre badal-badal kar..rishte nibhata raha. Tumhaari is post ne ..dil chhu liya... Chaand [/B][/QUOTE] mere chaand, Wo dil se rishte nibhaata raha.... Or chot dil pe khaata raha... aaine ki tarah aarpaar nazar aata raha har pal chehre badalna aaya hi nahi kabhi..... Ik roj waqt ne...ye hunar bhi sikha diya usko ab rishto se munh moadna dil ne sikh hi liya tumhari meena |
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15th March 2005, 08:56 PM
dear pulkit
ehsaas bahut bari chez hai na chahtey huye bhi aa hi jate hai!! ur words touched the hrt and soul........ Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain -------> theek kaha rohin ne, kami johri me hai dost...tum me nahi! Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya kartey ha ----- really hrt felt yaar. Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... ----------> this is my fav pulkit......hame bhi sikha se khuda, ab tak to dil se kiya kartey hai  humne choda zamana jin ke vaaste unhone choda hame zamane ke vaaste humne to une aankho me samaya tha vo ashk banke chod agye hame, in aankho ke raastey !! thanks for sharing this great peice of work with us Luv Priya  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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16th March 2005, 09:49 AM
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Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... ============================================ Bahut khoob pulkit.....kya khoob likha hai......n the best thing wht i feel is .... again u hv used a very very simple language...par pessimistic approach thi isme hai naa...but good ...its nothing personal...rite??? kuch shabd kahin se yaad aa gaye.... Iss jamane ke shabbo roz mein kuch fark nahi.. aap din mein bhi chirag ko jalaye rakhna... hosh mein aa ke kahin raaaz na afssha kardein.... apne deewano ko deewana baanye rakhna!!! Dil se dosti...dil se pyar!!! Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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16th March 2005, 10:17 AM
Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain
Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Bahut khuub pulkit... well just a learning process...main tau yahi kahuungi...zindagi, tajurba, rishte nate, dosti, pyaar bahut kuch sikha dete hain...dheere dheere... Hothon pe kuch hai, seene mein kuch aur Dhokhe hi dhokhe hazaar baar dekhe hain achha bayan karne lage ho...khushi hoti hai dekhkar... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain
Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... Bahut Khoob pulkit Tumhara ek anootha hi roop dekhne ko milaa yaha...Bahut khoobi se dil ke baat dhaal gaye lafzon mein tum... tumhare is kalaam par ek sher aur.. dil-azeez hum bhi kis par naaz rakhte hai khamoshi mein hum bekhuudi ka saaz rakhte hai likhte rahNaa -tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th March 2005, 11:35 AM
Dear Garima!
Tumhe pasand aaye ehsaas aur kalaam dono hi jaan accha laga Kaun chaahta hai in topics par likhna.. hum to dosti karne waalon me se hain.. ummeed hai agli baar jaisa tumne kaha main usi pe likhoonga.. Sacchhi Dosti pe....Saath banaye rakhna Dost Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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16th March 2005, 11:48 AM
hey gud 2 c ur post, buddy!
Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain....! very touching!.. very simple n flowing..nicely!...I like the the feeling a lot but above lines wr most impressive!..par yar raaz tumne bhi rakha hai...15th ko post ki...aur mein aj padh rahi hu..ek link bhej diya karo na!... nahi nahi.. kidding i was i'd b attentive.. nowonwards!likhte raho! tc komal |
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jaroori nahi har koi seena cheer dikhaye... aaye jab laboN pe, to sulge "saccha_pyar" dost hai wo jo na rahe to bhi yaad aaye .... to pulkit bhai ,... dosti pe vishwash rakho ... aur is haseen jahaN maiN khushiyoN ka maja loottte raho ... yuN man ko khatta karna theek nahi ... manta huN sirf khyal hai ... par nek nahi keh sakta ... dost hi to woh neymat hai jo humeN kayi aise paloN maiN sath dete hai jab koi paas aa bhi nahi sakta ... manta huN kuch log bas har taraf faida dekhte hai .. par kuch log nahi bohat sare aapke humare jaise bhi haiN ... aapne likha accha hai koi shak nahi ... roshni dalnaa chahta huN ... ki phir se rythm maiN behak gaye hai aap .. thoda us aur gaur kijiye ... umeed hai jald hi aapka rehkta .. poore shikhar pe hoga ... apna khayal rakhte hue yuN hi likhte rahiye ... aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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16th March 2005, 12:08 PM
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Hi Pulkit!!! Hmmm... tumne aahir original kalaam likhna start kar hi diya! Achha hai, ab humaare kalaam kum chori honge! LOL.. jokes aside.. site par naa sahi, lekin tumhaare kaii kalaam paRe humne.. and I must say, tumhaari soch bohat khubsoorat hai.. aur ise bayaan karne ka andaaz bhi khoob hai! Bhale hi technicalities ki kami ho kalaam me, lekin phir ye behtareen shayri hai kyunki isme shaamil jazbaat paRne waale ko zaroor mehsus honge. Dua rahegi ki tum din ba din aur bhi achha, aur bhi sachcha likhte raho! Very well done! |
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16th March 2005, 03:44 PM
aath misre .. magar itne asardaar ki kisi kahani ki tarah lag rahe haiN ..
Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... bahut achha likha hai mere bhai kahiN pe shikayat kahiN pe mohabbat kahiN pe ruswayi aur aakhir meiN ek toota hua dil kisi se apne dil ki baat kahne ki ye adaa bahut achhi lagi ki usse kuch kaha hi naa jaye aur sab kuch kah diya jaye .. bahut achhe aise hi likhte raho tareef Qabool karo apna khyaal rakho |
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16th March 2005, 05:05 PM
Dear Rohin!
Happy to see ur reply and ur Concern.. Dost Sometimes Some moments in life.. . Happy or Sad.. Leave their Prints Not all ppl can hurt... kucch hi log hote hain jo dil ke kareeb hote hain aur dil tod sakte hain....Khair This was just imagination Dont be serious...And Pulkit Praaji.. not PAaji...Aur kya Raaz Raaz karte rhte ho yaar..,,MEr amtalb hai Dost.. Acche Dost aisi baatein nahi karte LOL Saath dete rhena Dost Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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16th March 2005, 05:26 PM
Hi Pulkit Paaji (And not Praaji...lol ...samjh mein na aaye to Kunal se pooch lena...lol),
Yes things in life leve prints... but this is life...it goes on Dil ko dard kyon hota hai agar mein is par baat karoon...to shayad mujhe log insaan nahi kahenge... Aur Rahi Raaz ki baat to shimul ki kaami to hai...magar abhi ke liye mein kuch keh deta hoon...ek geet keh deta hoon... Hoton mein aise baat mein daba ke chali aaye... Khul jaaaye jo yeh raaz to duhai hai duhai.... Enjoy my friend Rohin |
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 Younhi ek gana sounadeti houn...: Haan, Jeena Hain Deen Chaar Yeaha Khush Hoke Jii Le Yaar_Karna Hain Kuch Agar Tujhe_Jii BharKe Karke Le Pyaar~Keya Tera Keya Mera_Bhula De Mere Yaar~Goro Ki Na Kaalon Ki_Duniya Hain Dil Walon Ki_Hash Ke Jiiye Hash Ke Maare_Ham Jeise Dil Walon Ki **Dil Ki Gehraaion se Chaar Phoul Phir Bhi Kuboul Karlena...lol...Your Writings are good**Dil Jo Kahe Uss Par Gaur Se Gaur Zarour Karna~The Heart Never Betray Us**Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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My Dear Rohin, Hope You are well
Ki Ho Raha Hain? Tum Bhi Baaz Nahin Aane Wale...lol...**Nice To see You enjoying**Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat... **Take Care...**God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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17th March 2005, 12:40 PM
Didi!
Sach kaha aapne, hum expectations zyada hi rakh lete hain...Magar apnon se hi to expectations rakhi jaati hain naa Did.. yeh Dost hi to hain mere, jinki vajah se likh raha hoon main... Hunar chhupaya hai LOL... Main to humesha hi Copy-Paste shayar ke role me hi khush thha... Kucch logon ne itne pyaar se kaha ke taala naa gaya!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 12:43 PM
Dear Priya!
Usaully ur words used to my heart n Soul.. happy to see it the other way round 2 Ur aapreciation is really morale boosting... Saath aise hi nibhati rehna Dost.... humne choda zamana jin ke vaaste unhone choda hame zamane ke vaaste humne to une aankho me samaya tha vo ashk banke chod agye hame, in aankho ke raastey !! Waaaaahhhh! Chhoo gaye hain tumhare yeh ashaar bhi.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 12:49 PM
My Dear Shalini,
Always good to recieve ur appreciation.. Doston ko jo pasand naa aaye, aisa likhne se kya faayda.. Right? Pessimistic Aproach... Well... Generally i try to stay optimistc.. kabhi kabhi ho jata hai!! Nothing Personal... ur right!! Iss jamane ke shabbo roz mein kuch fark nahi.. aap din mein bhi chirag ko jalaye rakhna... hosh mein aa ke kahin raaaz na afssha kardein.... apne deewano ko deewana baanye rakhna!!! WaaaaaaaaaaaH! Dost aaj lagta hai ke kucch accha likha hai, ke har banda ek sher add kar raha hai... Evry one can feel the emotions... Better than writing on False Love!! Saath deti rehaa.. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 12:51 PM
Well... Right you r Paras!!
Am going on a Learning Track.. Zindagi se bhi seekh raha hoon, aur shabdon ko bhi seekh raha hoon...Bayaan karne ki koshish kee hai.. tumhe pasand aayi jaan bahut khushi hui.... Hothon pe kuch hai, seene mein kuch aur Dhokhe hi dhokhe hazaar baar dekhe hain Waahh Waah! Aaj lagta hai ke kucch asardaar likh paya hoon... May be I feel so coz.. whenever i am too impressed by a shayri... I add a sher to it Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 06:57 PM
Anu Bhai!!
Aapki taareef paakar humesha se hi khushi mili hai... Sach me.. u've always been there to motivate...whether or not...i write myself Bhai saath aise hi banaye rakhna dil-azeez hum bhi kis par naaz rakhte hai khamoshi mein hum bekhuudi ka saaz rakhte hai Sher ka kya kahoon... Ek Sher hi sab keh gaya hia... Dil koc chhooo gaya!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 07:31 PM
Hello Pulkit bhai
Jab bhi tumhara qalam dekhtey huun bahut accha lagta hay.........Jab tumhari pehli koshish dekhey thi bahut kuch seekhney ko mila tha from all the special members of shayri family.......U take care of all the technicalities of shayri....that's the most impressive part of ur poetry. Dost kehte hain woh mujhko aur raaz rakhte hain Apni Dosti par kaise hum naaz kar sakte hain Kasoor unka nahi kami mujh me hi rahi hogi ab khud ko samajh paane ki chaah rakhte hain Dete nahi thakte thhe jis dosti ki misaal, Zikra uska ab hum kam hi kiya karte hain Sikha de ae khuda mujhe Dosti ka hunar, abhi tak hum ise dil hi se kiya karte hain... -- Pulkit Gupta Dosti ka hunar to pulkit tumhey aata hi hay see u have lots of friends here.Di ki daad kabul karnaApna khyal rakhna aur sada kush rehna |
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17th March 2005, 07:36 PM
Glad to c u here again...
Always here to appreciate my efforts...Yaar.. Simplicity has to be a part of my writings otherwise I wont be able to understand them myself... Flow... Welll trying to achieve that.. Jis din kunaal ne kaha ke Flow aa gaya bhai.. thatt day i wud accept that yes.. finally i hav achieved it.... With evry post... get to learn new things from the friends and members here.. Will try to take care of those technical lapses 2....next time Raaz.. LOL.. Nahi Re.. No Raaz.. Main to apni post oopar laata rehta hoon...Just that u were a bit busy... but still u hav made it here naaa... Saath Deti Rehna... I will keep trying.. Do TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 07:45 PM
dosti nahi hoti kabhi bina dil ko lagaye...
jaroori nahi har koi seena cheer dikhaye... aaye jab laboN pe, to sulge "saccha_pyar" dost hai wo jo na rahe to bhi yaad aaye .... Kunaal Sir, Seena Cheer Dikhaane ki baat nahi hai... Baat hoti hai apna samajhne ki...Khair... Tumhe Mil kar samjhaoonga Dosti pe vishwaas hat gya to us idn jee nahi paoonga.. Dost naa hon to jeevan berang ho jaayega....Dosti tohfa hai khuda kaa.. aur main maanta bhi hoon ise.... Bhaiya.. Mera rhythm sudhaarne ke liye tum ho naa.. Koshihs kar raha hoon ehsaason se naa chookte hue technicalities ko follow karte hue likh paooon... but abhi naya hoon is field meian.. kucch time lagega settle hone me..... Tum Saathh dete raho....Aur apana khayal bhi rakho!!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 09:04 PM
Didi!
Well Your Daad is the most VALUED daad to me... Kyunki u were always there for me... Many a times it has happened my posts just went with 1 reply.. yours... that was more than enough for me to keep me stuck to the site... Aapko dobara yahan dekha bahut khushi hoti hai!! Rahi Chori ki baat.. woh to main abhi bahi karoonga... Joote nahi khaane doston ko apni shayri sunakar Aapne itna kucch keh diya ke bass aur Phoool gaya main!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 09:11 PM
Chaand Bhai!!
Jis Daad ko paakar aaj main sabse zyada khush huaa thha.. usi ko batana bhool gaya!! Chaand bhai, Mere kucch ehsaas aapko cchho gaye, bass mera likhna safal raha!! Aur aap muskurao bass. kyunki humara chaand aise hi accha lagta hai!! kya karna hai eisi jan.nat me jaakar, JahaaN hazaaroN barosoN ki apsaraaeiN raha karti hai Dil behlaane ko Ghaalib ye khayaal bhi achchha hai... Bhai.. vakayi kitna shai kaha aapne... Bahut Khoobsurat ishaara hai!! Wo dil se rishte nibhaata raha.... Or chot dil pe khaata raha... Ik roj waqt ne...ye hunar bhi sikha diya usko Phir wo chehre badal-badal kar..rishte nibhata raha. WaaaaaaaH! Vakayi me accha lag raha is baar kucch sach likhkar.. rather than pondering over the Lov which doesnt exist right now!!! Bhai.. aapki yeh daad sabse zyada yaad rahegi!! Bahut accha lagta hai aapki daa pakar... Saath to apaka haq se mera hai!! Aur woh main saathh rakhoonga hi!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 11:35 AM
Aman Bhai
Aapko pasand ayaa jaankar dil ko khushi hui...Aage bhi aise hi satah dete rahiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 11:44 AM
Kshitij Bhai!!
Aapko ehsaas paand aaye jaankar behad khushi hui... bahut achha likha hai mere bhai Yeh shabd bahut maayne rakhte hain mere liye... Bhai jo bhi cchoti chhoti tips tumne mujhe di hain.. mujhe bahut madad karengi... Aur haan jaisa ke phel bhi kaha thha..."Tumne Pakad liya mujhe" LOLkahiN pe shikayat kahiN pe mohabbat kahiN pe ruswayi aur aakhir meiN ek toota hua dil Yahi to nushkil hai!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 03:34 PM
areeeee WAAAAAAAAAAAH .... bahut hi khoob ....dosti ke bare mein itna aacha likha hai aapne ... lagta hai dosto ko dosti ko aapni zindagi mein sab se zada ehmiyaat dete ho .... god bless u with lot of happiness and freinds like like like me and etc etc ... u know ..lolz:d.
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18th March 2005, 05:47 PM
Rohin!!
Kya kahoon..Ek sher yaad a ya.... Jo kucch karo kubool hai, inkaar kya karoon, Sharminda ab tumhe sare bazaar kya karoon... Raaz Ko Raaz Rehne Do Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 05:54 PM
Dear Shimul!!
Tumhare Jitne acche to nahi.. haan Dost to bahut hain mere yahan pe.. Infact aisa kaun hai jo mera dost naa ho Tumhare gaane par ek gaana..."Hansta gaata hoon main, muskurata hoon main, Maine hansne kaa wada kiya thha kabhi isliye ab sada muskurata hoon main!!" I kno I know... Gadbad hain lyrics itna hi yaad thhaa!! Chaar Phool... Chalo kucch to kanjoosi chhodi tumne... Aah kitni acchi khuhsbu hai... I m lovin It!!! Well.. Likh Diya jo Likhna Thha... Dosti par dil se hi karta hoon... aur Karta rahoonga... Tum jaisi Dost se bhi to is dil ne hi milvaya hai!!!Tum Apana Khayal Rakho... Am Taking Care of myself!! Aur haan.. Rohin aur meri Masti to yun hi chalti rehti hai... Our thoughts r clashing to the extent of being Dangerous Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 06:30 PM
Hi Didi!!
Aapka avataar bahut accha lag raha hai... Good One... Aapk reply dekh to auomatically smile aa jaati hai!! aur aapko pasand aaya isse zyada aur kya khushi hogi!! Didi.. technicalities ka dhyaan rakhta to hoon but fir bhi kahin galti kar raha hoon..Hope it wud not be there next time.....But haan improvement i can feel by the response of ppl... Hana dost to bahut hain mere.. And they all love me soo much Main apna khaya rakh raha hoon!! U take good care of urself Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 06:32 PM
areeeee WAAAAAAAAAAAH .... bahut hi khoob ....dosti ke bare mein itna aacha likha hai aapne ... lagta hai dosto ko dosti ko aapni zindagi mein sab se zada ehmiyaat dete ho .... god bless u with lot of happiness and freinds like like like me and etc etc ... u know ..lolz:d.
likhte raho .... aur hum padhte rahenge ....(Y) [/QUOTE] Dear Mandy! Always good to see u around... Dost hi to hain zindagi me, aur kya hai... U r sihes r so very special.. I wish the same for you 2...Apna khayal Rakhana, and DO TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th March 2005, 08:22 PM
wah ! prologue hi badhiya tha to kalam to hona hi tha na.........bahut khubsurat alfaaz hain sabki zindagi se milte jo log jyada senti hain......waise kasoor aksaar expectations ka hi hota hain na.....sabki chahat ek to nahin hoti na......very nicely wriiteen....
take care... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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19th March 2005, 02:19 PM
Hmmmmm....
Mausam... Prologue to accha thha.. but not the kind of feelings i normally associate with my frends and friendship.... Stilll.... Kucch likha.. tumhe pasand aaya... jaan khushi hui... Saath Nibhati Rehna Dost.. Do TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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