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26th May 2005, 01:02 AM
DostoN,
yuN hi kuch khyaal nikle, aur kagaz pe bikhar gaye ... is section ke layak lage to yahaN likh raha huN ,.... umeed hai aapko pasand aayeNge ... ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Har koi jahaN sapna hai, sooni wo galiyaN chod aaye hai… Maikada lagta apna hai, jhooti wo duniyaN chod aaye hai… Mujhe pila de kuch aisi shey, jiska nasha utarta hi nahi ho… Mohabbat maiN na lootuN ab, wo bastiyaN chod aaye hai…. Katla na kar de koi haseena waar-e-nazar se bachna yaroN… Tanhai maiN peene ke liye, wo surkhiyaN chod aaye haiN… Kaise kaise rang dikhte hai jaam hothoN se lagane par aaj… Nasheman ki bahoN se door, wo narmiyaN chod aaye hai… Na do mujhe wasta-e-saccha_pyar, nashe mai aaj rehne do… Khud ki parwaah jo karte hai, wo jindgiyaN chod aaye hai…. Na hi jahaN main sapne hai, sooni wo galiyaN chod aaye hai…. Maikade main sab apne hai, jhooti wo duniyaN chod aaye hai … ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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26th May 2005, 04:22 AM
my dear bro!
tumney bahut acha likha hai  Na do mujhe wasta-e-saccha_pyar, nashe mai aaj rehne do… Khud ki parwaah jo karte hai, wo jindgiyaN chod aaye hai…. oops aisa mat kaho yaaar..ab to bhabhi saath me hongi....so u better take care of urself and her as well Na hi jahaN main sapne hai, sooni wo galiyaN chod aaye hai…. Maikade main sab apne hai, jhooti wo duniyaN chod aaye hai … vo jhooti duniya chod aaye hai yea duniya hoti hi juthi hai....insaan ke saath hota hai....lagta bas sapna sa hi hai.....sapna tut ta tab hai jab aankhain khulti hai lolzluv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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26th May 2005, 10:19 AM
Hi Jiju,
Kya baat hai aajkal chehre ka nasha sar chad kar bol raha hai  Lage raho .... lol Bahut hi acha likha hai tumne.... superb... too good... really loved it.... Keep writing Rohin |
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26th May 2005, 12:04 PM
Hi Bhaiya,
bahut achha likha hai.. simply perfact.. Aapka Beta |
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26th May 2005, 01:53 PM
Katla na kar de koi haseena waar-e-nazar se bachna yaroN…
Tanhai maiN peene ke liye, wo surkhiyaN chod aaye haiN… wah mere Jeeje..... ab to sharaab pe bhi likhne lag gaye ho...... lage rahoo..... tumhare saale sahab..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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26th May 2005, 02:27 PM
Har koi jahaN sapna hai, sooni wo galiyaN chod aaye hai…
Maikada lagta apna hai, jhooti wo duniyaN chod aaye hai… Mujhe pila de kuch aisi shey, jiska nasha utarta hi nahi ho… Mohabbat maiN na lootuN ab, wo bastiyaN chod aaye hai…. WaaaaaaH.. bahut khoob! lekin miyaan aap mohabbat ka hi nasha karlo to accha hai... Yeh maiykade tumhaare liye nahi hain Katla na kar de koi haseena waar-e-nazar se bachna yaroN… Tanhai maiN peene ke liye, wo surkhiyaN chod aaye haiN… Kaise kaise rang dikhte hai jaam hothoN se lagane par aaj… Nasheman ki bahoN se door, wo narmiyaN chod aaye hai… WaaaaaaaaH... Classs!!! Lekin fir wohi....haseena ke waar se qatl ho jaao...Jaam nahi peene doonga tumko main  !!Na do mujhe wasta-e-saccha_pyar, nashe mai aaj rehne do… Khud ki parwaah jo karte hai, wo jindgiyaN chod aaye hai…. Na hi jahaN main sapne hai, sooni wo galiyaN chod aaye hai…. Maikade main sab apne hai, jhooti wo duniyaN chod aaye hai … Khoobsurat... bahut khoobsurat!!.... Lekin Maikade me koi apana nahi hai... Kitni baaar samjhaoon tumhe... yeh jagah tumhare liye nahi bani hai Dear Kunaal!! Yaar mere hisaab se to yeh tumhare masterpieces ki class ka hai.. one of the vey best... Kyaa zabardast flow hai! Mere to dil se bas ek hi baat nikalti hai.... Waah Ustaad Waaahh!! Lekin Dhyaan Rakho.. yeh jaam yeh maikade tumhaare liye nahi hain.. Fir mat kehna ke maine roka nahin Meri daad to humesha saathh hi hai tumhaare... bas yun jhi likhte raho....TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th May 2005, 12:05 PM
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bohat bohat shukriya .. tumne yuN sath diya .. bas yahi dua hai ki ye duniya kabhi huamre liye aisi na rahe .. tum bhi khush raho sada ... apna khayal rakhna tumhara bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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27th May 2005, 12:07 PM
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tumhe to maloom hi hai ki humare sir koun sa jadoo chada hua hai .... aur usi rang maiN range hum sabko range nazar aa rahe hai ... tumne yahan aake dil khush kar diya... yuN hi sath dete rehna tumhara apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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27th May 2005, 12:08 PM
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shukriya tum yahaN bhi apne bhai ke sath ho ... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: wo JINDGIYAN chod aaye hai......... |
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Re: wo JINDGIYAN chod aaye hai......... -
27th May 2005, 04:48 PM
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aaj kyo aisa lagta hai tumhein padh kar jaise tumhari nazam kuch aur hi beyaan kar rahi ho. i read one before too. aaj kyo tumhein padh kar kuch aur hi sochne par majhboor hai maan. itni gehrai hai tumhari har nazam mein ki dil ko cheerti hai dost. peena hai to roop ki ankhon mein madhosh ho, yeh maikade tumhare liye nahi hai. waise as words its awesome. u wrote so well. infact i wud say tht ur flow of thoughts in each field is marvelous. loved reading it. khush raho. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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28th May 2005, 02:49 PM
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sab aapki saubat ka hi asar hai apka jeeja Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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28th May 2005, 02:53 PM
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Mere khayal se aapko kuch jyada hi bhaya hai ye kalaam... shukriya ise itni unchai dikhane ke liye ... aur ye kya hai ... ki ruk jao bad maiN na kehna maine roka nahi .... arre aapko to maloom hai maiN daru nahi peeta huN .... aapki daad sir ankhoN par ... huzzooor!! aapka bhai Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Re: wo JINDGIYAN chod aaye hai......... -
30th May 2005, 06:14 PM
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tumhari sabhi baoN ka ek hi jawab hai mere pass ki kuch bateN humare bas ke bahar rehti hai aur kuch batoN ke bas ke bahar huM hote hai ... tumhara shukragujar huN tum yahaN aayi aur yuN saraha mujhe .... tumhara apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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31st May 2005, 02:26 PM
Bahot hi khub likha he , Thanx 4 Sharing
 I like U , Utna ; U like me jitna; I like U , tabse,U like me jabse; I like U , tab tak,U like me jab tak; 'U'like me Jane kab tak; But I like u MARTE DUM TAK |
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31st May 2005, 03:52 PM
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aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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31st May 2005, 05:28 PM
ahcha likha hai janab.kuch dino ke baad padh raha hoon aapko par ahcha laga padh kar.
aapka LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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31st May 2005, 10:31 PM
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kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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HI -
26th June 2005, 04:06 PM
KYAA SACH HAI YE SABB KI AAP WO DUNIYAA CHOOD AAYE
PYAAR KI DUNIYAA CHODD KABHI KOOI KAHA JI PAAYA HAI NAYI CHAAHE PURAANI DUNIYAA KAHA KOOI BHULL PAAYA HAI KAASH KI SABKE PAAS DO DILL HOTA EK TUTE TOH DUJA KAAM AATA .............HAHAHA ...PAR YE NAHI HO SAKTA JO TUTNE KE LIYE BANA HO WO KABB TAK JUDA REH PAAYEGA JO JUDA REH JAAYE TOH KHUDAA KA HIN AASHIRWAAD HOGA.............. BUT AAPNE HUMMAINE KHUSH KIYA APNE SOCH BADAL KE ............. BYE TC  . Bada hua to kya hua jaisay paid khajoor, Panthi ko chhaya nahin, phal laagen ati door. Nahaye dhoye kya bhala jo man ka mail na jaay Meen sada jal mein rahe par tan ki baas na jaay Akath Kahani Prem Ki, Kutch Kahi Na Jaye Goonge Keri Sarkara, Baithe Muskae .................................bye and tc .................. |
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30th June 2005, 01:37 PM
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maiN aapki har baat se agree hun .... aapko pasand aaye aashar mujhe khushi hai .. aise hi apna khayal rakhna aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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