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Ishq ka tarana - 16th October 2014, 11:39 PM

Ishq kabhi lafzon ka mohtaaj nahi hota ,
Ye vo nagma hai jisme koi awaz nahi hota.

Dil se nikalti hai taranNge lehroN ki tarah,
Ye tarana kisi bhi saaz ka mohtaz nahi hota.

Neend ho jaati hai ankh se kosoN door,
Chaino sakoon lut jane ka vishwas nahi hota.

Tadapta dil milne ki chahat ko hardam,
Bicherne pe kyun badwahas nahi hota.

khoya rehta hun sapno meiN shamo sehar ,
Per khud ko dewaangi ka ehsaas nahi hota.



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.

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16th October 2014, 11:48 PM

Sanjay saaheb

Namaste

Ishq ko ba khuubi lafzon mein bayaan kiyaa hai aapne..dil se daad

Khush rahen..apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

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17th October 2014, 12:42 AM

Sanjay jee Aadaab ...

Waah janab kyaa kahne ... lagta hai ishq meiN Phd kar lee hai aapne ...
Bahut khoob janab behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne ...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad Kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... kalaamoN se rubaru hone ka mouqa dete rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...


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Thumbs up bahut pyare ehsaas - 17th October 2014, 10:51 AM

Namaskaar Sanjay ji....bahut pyare ehsaas likhe hai aapne, muje lga rha yeh poetry aapne kahiN collage time meiN to nahi likhi thi yeh pyar bhare ehsaas hamesha aise hi rhe


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17th October 2014, 11:18 AM

waah sanjay jee...bahut khoob .....ek behtareen kalaam.....



एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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Ishq kabhi lafzon ka mohtaaj nahi hota ,
Ye vo nagma hai jisme koi awaz nahi hota.

Dil se nikalti hai taranNge lehroN ki tarah,
Ye tarana kisi bhi saaz ka mohtaz nahi hota.

Neend ho jaati hai ankh se kosoN door,
Chaino sakoon lut jane ka vishwas nahi hota.

Tadapta dil milne ki chahat ko hardam,
Bicherne pe kyun badwahas nahi hota.

khoya rehta hun sapno meiN shamo sehar ,
Per khud ko dewaangi ka ehsaas nahi hota.
Bahut sahi kaha aapne sanjay ji...ishq kabhi lafzon ka mohtaz nahi hota..bahut khoobsurat kalaam....



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Question 17th October 2014, 09:06 PM

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Namaskaar Sanjay ji....bahut pyare ehsaas likhe hai aapne, muje lga rha yeh poetry aapne kahiN collage time meiN to nahi likhi thi yeh pyar bhare ehsaas hamesha aise hi rhe
Ji nahi sunita ji ..College mein tau milk teeth ...doodh ke daant hi the ,
Aur wisdom teeth ..akal daar aate aate budapa aa gaya ..kambhakht Ishq
ki samajh tab ayee jab der ho chuki.thi..

Ab tau dil behlane ke liye shayri kar leta hun , warna vo kavat hum pe laagoo
hoti hai ab ...YEH MOONH AUR MASOOR KI DAAL..

Yeh bilkul oven fresh poetry hai meri written just now



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17th October 2014, 09:11 PM

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Sanjay jee Aadaab ...

Waah janab kyaa kahne ... lagta hai ishq meiN Phd kar lee hai aapne ...
Bahut khoob janab behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal bayaaN kiye hai aapne ...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad Kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... kalaamoN se rubaru hone ka mouqa dete rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...
Shukriya itna samman dene ke liye sahib ..


PHD in Ishq by Dr Hamdam ....
Shayad aap kuch aisa farma rahe the bhai ...Mere bhai mujhe tau
ABC nahi aati Ishq ki ... Pata nahin Shayri ka bhoot kaise mere sar pe char
ke bolta hai ..



khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
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Sanjay jee Aadaab ... !

Bhai aapne sahiN samjha ... par aap apne ish Q ki PHD digree se piche nahi hat skate ... kyuN ke mera maananaa hai ke khayaal tabtak nahi aata jabtak khud pe guzarti nahi ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khudaa Hafez ...


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18th October 2014, 09:53 AM

Sanjay saahab..... bahot khoob peshkas hai aapki...

mujhe bahot changes nazar aaye hain aapki is kavita me..... bahot sudhaar aa raha hai aaap me.....

likhte rahiye

Shaad....


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18th October 2014, 11:44 AM

Sahi baat kahi aap ne Hamdam ji......

Ishq kabhi lafzon ka mohtaaj nahi hota

Achchi peshkash hai aap ki.
Mubarak ho.

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