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Phool Bhi Sookhey HaiN Aaj KitaaboN MeiN.....!! |
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Phool Bhi Sookhey HaiN Aaj KitaaboN MeiN.....!! -
19th September 2014, 03:55 PM
na rahi shaguftagi hamaari baatoN meN
phool bhi sookhey haiN aaj kitaaboN meN shaguftagi : freshness vasl ki aas liye shab-e-hijraaN meN taraptay kon kisi ke liye jaagta hai suhaani raatoN meN! vasl : meeting shab-e-hijraaN : night of separation pattoN ko roond’tay guzar gaye sabhi raah-geer! kis ne sun’na hai soz in ka, jo hai aahoN meN hur sawaal meN dhoondha karo ge humeN! jinheN paaya tha kabhi aap ne jawaaboN meN khaali kaaghaz pe alfaazoN ka phir kia kaam! jab un kaa zikr hi na ho ga kalaamoN meN hum ne iss taur se chaha hai aap ko jaana! ‘parStaar’ mile ga zaroor lekin khwaaboN meN… tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th September 2014, 05:25 PM
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wahhhh..........kya kehne aapke...bahut khoob likha hai, dard kuch jayada ho gya bhai, aap romantic shayri hi likha kijiye  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th September 2014, 05:59 PM
Itna dard hsn ji.... uffffff... har sher bas dil me udaasi bhar gaya... aapko dard me pehle bhi padha h pr is bar kuch chubhta sa mehsooa hua dil me... bhttttt hi kamaalll ki gazal kahi h aapne... God bless dear..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai.. |
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19th September 2014, 08:21 PM
very nice hassan saahab..... kamaal ka andaaze bayaan raha aapka.....
aapka dard aapke alfaazon me nazar aa raha hai .... Allah kare ke ye dard ki shiddat me kamii aaye aur zore qalam badhtaa jaae.... bahot shukriyaa Shaad..... |
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19th September 2014, 09:53 PM
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andaaz...har alfaaz dard me dooba hua... Bahut achcha laga apka ye qalaam... Yoon hi likhte rahein . Khush rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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22nd September 2014, 10:13 AM
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Bahut bahut umdaah......kya andaaz hai.......dhero mubaarakbaad hassan ji...is kalaam ke liye......humne bhi aapka kalaam jine ki koshish kar li.....gustaakhi maaf kariyega.... Hamaare aks se gumraah wo na honge ab ..... Ke wo aabaad hain kisi aur ki panahon meN.. Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab') |
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22nd September 2014, 10:44 AM
Hassanbhai,
waaaaaaaaaahh hi waaaaaaaaaaaahhh nikaltii hai iis kaavish per.... har ek aashaar khubsurat haiN............. dheroN daad......... Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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20th October 2014, 12:12 AM
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Naaz... Thanks a lot ... For always being there! Be like this... I want your support ahead. Take care, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Awesome......parStaar you've achieved a new level....har ek sher me dil ko chuu lene waala dard hai.....aapke rumaanii andaaz ke to qaayal the lekin is ghazal ke baad to hats off to you sir...you hv risen above all critism and MashaAllah u r shining dear |
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20th October 2014, 12:39 AM
Hasan Sahaab Aadaab ... ! Waah janab kyaa baat hai ... aapki kalam kii dhar aur aNdaaz e bayaaN behad kamyaab ho gaya hai ... Behad khoob lafzoN meiN umda khayaal piroye hai Bhai ... Bahut khoob ... is khoobsurat kalaam par meri hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye... Likhte rahiye ... Shaad O aabaad rahiye ... Khuda Hafez ... 
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20th October 2014, 10:38 AM
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Shuru se milta hua aap ka saath bohat khaas hai mere liye! aur aagay se koshish karooN ga baaji, khush rehne kii.... aur dard zara kam bayaan karne kii...  Apna khayaal rakhiye ga, Regards, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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27th February 2015, 11:02 AM
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khaak alfaazoN kii pasandeedgi ke liye bohat bohat shukriyaa ! stay in touch ... tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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28th February 2015, 12:27 PM
WAh JAnaab HASSAN,,, Shayri ek aesi cheez hae jisme dard bhi buayankarenge to aah k e badla wah wah milti hae,,
Bahoot khoob likha aapne,, |
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4th March 2015, 08:55 PM
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azeez o mohtarum baradarum.... milte rahiye ga.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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4th March 2015, 11:02 PM
Hassan ji
Bohut bohut badhiya. Maine isey pehle bhi do baar padaa aur laga Ki is khubsoorat nagine ke liye badhayee de chuki hun. Magar aaj dekha to Jana Ki yeh reh Gaya. Maafi chahungi. Sarika |
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5th March 2015, 08:39 AM
hum ne iss taur se chaha hai aap ko jaana! ‘parStaar’ mile ga zaroor lekin khwaaboN meN… bahut khub bahut khub Hasaan bhai.. dil ko chi gayi ye gazal.. Yuhi likhte rahe.. apki is peshkash pe dil de daad qabul kare.. mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm |
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