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haseen pal - 31st August 2004, 02:00 AM

khamosh honth tham si zubaan
phirse sunaaye woh daastaan
kadam do kadam ke faasle
nazuk labon ki duriyaan

taaron si sard raat mein
*aatish se dil ka jhujhnaa
*taakiid hai dil mein aaj bhi
*ekhlaas jo tha darmiyaan

*baalish ki baat kya kahun
uthtaa hai aab bhi woh dhua
dhiima sa dikhtaa hai wahi
jo humne banaya *aashiyaan

kadam do kadam ke faasle
nazuk labon ki duriyaan
dhiima sa dikhtaa hai wahi
jo humne banaya *aashiyaan

aatish=fire
taakiid=remembrance
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baalish=pillow
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Mast ji..

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Aapki ye rachna bohat hi pyaari hai.. ek behad khubsoorat lamhe ko.. ehsaas ko.. khwaab ko.. aapne baRi khoobi se pesh kiya hai.. saral lafzon me.. chhoti si nazm me.. gehri si baat.. bohot khoob!

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31st August 2004, 09:06 PM

Aapka likha kalaam padha aur bahut pasand aaya..aapko yeh kuch mere likhe lafz pasand aaye uska shukriyaa....bas baat choti saral hi kyon na ho baat ki gehraayi padhne waale ki aankhon mein hoti hai.....

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