saxena saahab,
aadaab arz hai! janaab, aapki ghazaloN ki kamii mehsoos hone laggii thi, magar aaj aapne umda ghazal dikhaa kar dil ki haalat khush kar di.
meri aukaat nahiiN hai bhai, magar paDte paDte ek nUks dikhaa..
- Wo dasengey ye jaan kar bhi unheN
AastiinoN meiN paal ke nikley
> aapke lafzoN kya kehna?! kuch khaas kamii nahiiN, magar yeh sher
*unheN* ke bi'ghair paDne meiN mujhe thoDa achcha lagaa..
gustaakhi maaf ki jiye. sach meiN saxena saahab, aaj bahot dinoN ke baad gehr'ii ghazal paDne ka mauka mila hai!
taareef, ohr mubaarakbaad qabuul ki jiye..
aman