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Unki aarzu dil dhukhati hai, unki yaad hame rulati hai,>> -
8th January 2003, 09:11 PM
Dosto! dil ki battain pesh hai kuch aapke nazraane...
Unki aarzu dil dhukhati hai, unki yaad hame rulati hai, Unke vaar kya pehley kam they, zindagi tu bhi mujhey tarpati hai !!!! Jo hasi sun ke khush huye they, ab Vohi hame aajmati hai, Jaan ki baazi bhi hum laga dete, par shayad khushiya humsey katrati hai !! Har mod pe huye tanha tanha se hum bhatke, Aise huye bebas is dil se, ki ab unki Dillagi hame har lamha staati hai!! Khushiyon se bhi daar hi lagta hai mujhe, gam hi mere saathi hai, Bas itna hi kehna hai aaj mujhe, baaki battain ye num aankhain hi Btaati hai!! Luv Priyaaaaaaa ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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9th January 2003, 02:51 AM
Priyaaaaaaaaa
 Acha likha hai aapne.. yeh line pasand aayi: Khushiyon se bhi daar hi lagta hai mujhe, gam hi mere saathi hai ..nice Likhte rahiye, Aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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9th January 2003, 04:06 AM
Priya,
Khushiyon se bhi daar hi lagta hai mujhe, gam hi mere saathi hai, Bas itna hi kehna hai aaj mujhe, baaki battain ye num aankhain hi Btaati hai!! Sach kahthe hai aap.. yeh sher aapki hume bahut achcha lagaa. Bijili Milna tha ittefaq bichadna naseeb tha Woh utnaa dur gaya jho jitna kareeb tha :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: |
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hi -
31st August 2003, 07:58 AM
dear aman thanks yaar glad to know that u liked something writeen by me...
 ----- dear bijili ji kahan gayab hai aaj kal? yaar aur kya chahiye is nachiz ko aapne pasand kar liya...bas......sab mil gaya ---- thanks Luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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31st August 2003, 09:08 AM
Priya
bohat khoob likha hai aap ne. aap ke kalam mein mein dekhta hoon khaasi gehraaee ki baatein aap bare achchay andaaz aur alfaaz ke saath bari saadgi se keh jaati hain. keep it up and wishing you all the best musharrafhusain |
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hi -
1st September 2003, 12:36 AM
dear mushharfhusaain ji
gehrayi ki baatain gehre dil wale samajh pate hai thanks dost for being here to read my feelings luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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1st September 2003, 12:45 AM
priya,
bahot hi saral ta se dil maie bas gayi..... khaas kar yah line ------- Har mod pe huye tanha tanha se hum bhatke, Aise huye bebas is dil se, ki ab unki Dillagi hame har lamha staati hai!! Khushiyon se bhi daar hi lagta hai mujhe, gam hi mere saathi hai, Bas itna hi kehna hai aaj mujhe, baaki battain ye num aankhain hi Btaati hai!! |
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1st September 2003, 12:55 AM
priya dost,
plz aap ke dar par mera pm khada hai andar aane ke liyae jaga denage??? lol in box khali nahi lol |
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NICE one -
1st September 2003, 01:12 AM
PRIYA JI,
Kai din baad yaha naaya aur aapke kalaam padha dil khush ho gaya kya kahen ke kitna khubsurat kalaam likha hai aapne Jo hasi sun ke khush huye they, ab Vohi hame aajmati hai, Jaan ki baazi bhi hum laga dete, par shayad khushiya humsey katrati hai !! jee bahot hi achha likha hai aise hi aate rahiyega aur mehfil sajaate rahiyega ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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1st September 2003, 02:28 AM
ye bhi bahut hi acha likha aapne.
Sach maniye dil ko likhne wale hamesha dilon pe likhte hein. Simple written by heart on hearts.... Unki aarzu dil dhukhati hai, unki yaad hame rulati hai, Unke vaar kya pehley kam they, zindagi tu bhi mujhey tarpati hai !!!! classic इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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2nd September 2003, 04:39 AM
dear meena ji, sowwie baba,,,,,inbox full hogaya tha...aapke liye khali kar diya hai..feel free t mail now
thanks forbeing here and replying....so glad u liked this one by me ---- dear pyaasa ji..ji haan kaafi samey baad aaye hai yaha par..aapka reply dekha behad khushi huyi...keep in touch likethis forever ------- dear dard e sush ji, aapke reply ne khoon badha diya yaar...khushi huyi.....thanks millions for nbeing here ..reading and also understanding ------ LUV PRIYA ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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3rd September 2003, 09:55 PM
Priya jiii
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha aap ne ... Padne ke BaaD Bahut hi Accha mahsoos kiya ... Qabile tareef likha hai Aap ne... Unki aarzu dil dhukhati hai, unki yaad hame rulati hai, Unke vaar kya pehley kam they, zindagi tu bhi mujhey tarpati hai !!!! Wahh kya baat hai sach MeiN bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai .. aap Daad Qabool karee ... Aap ka dost AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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hi -
4th September 2003, 05:03 AM
hi amrit ji,
hame behad khushi hai ki aapko hamare likhne se khushi huyi...ye baat hai to i willcontinue this writing process.. luv priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th September 2003, 05:36 AM
aslaamaaleikuum namaste sat sri akal and good evening
aap ke bateh jab bhi padhta hoon nah jaanhe woh yaadeh aah jatee hain acha leekhtee hooh aap hum kaishe ijhaar bhi kareh keh dard mein dardoh kah milan kaisha hota hain poochee jho unhoneh aansho kee haqqekat kahan chand khwaab thee woh machal gaye hain thanks and al veedaah leekhtee rahiyeh padhtee hain apkeh sab kallam hum allah hafiz rab rakhaa |
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6th September 2003, 12:26 AM
dear deewana shahab!
kaise kare aapka shukriya dost! behad khushi hai ki aap is kallam par aaye aur reply kiya...glad to kno wu like this a lot! plz keeo in touch like this forever luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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6th September 2003, 01:19 PM
kya kalaam hai Priya ji…
achcha laga padhker… khaas taur per ye… Khushiyon se bhi daar hi lagta hai mujhe, gam hi mere saathi hai, Bas itna hi kehna hai aaj mujhe, baaki battain ye num aankhain hi Btaati hai!! kya baat hai kya soch hai… pur-dard pur-asar… aapki sada lafzii to kisi ko bhi maat de de… daad qubool kijiye… likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye… |
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7th September 2003, 04:50 AM
HI BEDIL JI
meri khushnaseebi hai ki aap mera likha pasand kartey hai yaha aapki kami thi aur aapke aane se dekhiye vo bhi puri ho gayi hai ab thanks dearLuv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th September 2003, 08:31 PM
Priya Ji
Kafi acHHa LikHa BalKi YooN KaHe KaBil E TaReef LikHa Hai .. DeR se aaya HuN .. MuaFi CHaHTa HuN .. KucH MusHkiLaaT auR HaLaaT Ne BeBas kaR RakHa THa SHyaD is WaQT TaK BHi .. Aapka QaLaam ki kasisH kHeeCH Layi ShayaD .. TaReef kaBuL faRmaiye |
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12th September 2003, 12:37 AM
hikshtiz ji aap aaye bahut acha laga....aapki kami thi ab vo bhi puri ho gayi dost..keep m posted like this
luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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