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kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi - 27th May 2006, 12:56 PM
"Pani ka ek katra aankh se gira abhi abhi,
kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi,
appse bichdey jamana hua magar,
yu lagga koi mujse mil kar gaya abhi abhi"

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Re: kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi - 17th September 2006, 02:40 PM
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"Pani ka ek katra aankh se gira abhi abhi,
kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi,
appse bichdey jamana hua magar,
yu lagga koi mujse mil kar gaya abhi abhi"
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badut accha likha hai aapne ye sher dil ko choo gaya

koi din esa nahi beeta jab tum yaad na aaye
jab teri yado.n ke badal jehan main na chaye
milne bichadna to baad ki baat hai magar..
hum to khwabo main bhi tumhe choo aaye....


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18th September 2006, 06:03 AM
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namaste aur SSA

aapke ye misre achche lage.....

maiN apni taraf se zaraa si tabdiilii karne ki gustaakhi kar raha huuN....aapko bura lage to mazratkhwaa huuN

agar aap isey yuuN kaheN to shayad ye baNdh behar meiN aa jayega


palokoN se ek ashk giraa hai abhi abhi
kya tumne mujko yaad kiya hai abhi abhi

barsoN guzar gaye haiN judaa aapse hue
lagta hai koi mil ke gayaa hai abhi abhi


aakhiri donoN misroN meiN rabt zaraa kamzor hai , baat wajeeh nahiiN ho paa rahi meri tajviiz hai ke aap dobara gaur farmaa leN


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18th September 2006, 09:27 AM
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sunita jee

namaste aur SSA

aapke ye misre achche lage.....

maiN apni taraf se zaraa si tabdiilii karne ki gustaakhi kar raha huuN....aapko bura lage to mazratkhwaa huuN

agar aap isey yuuN kaheN to shayad ye baNdh behar meiN aa jayega


palokoN se ek ashk giraa hai abhi abhi
kya tumne mujko yaad kiya hai abhi abhi

barsoN guzar gaye haiN judaa aapse hue
lagta hai koi mil ke gayaa hai abhi abhi


aakhiri donoN misroN meiN rabt zaraa kamzor hai , baat wajeeh nahiiN ho paa rahi meri tajviiz hai ke aap dobara gaur farmaa leN


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maikash ji namaskar...!

aji app hamari post par aaye to vaise hi char chand lag gaye aur uuper se aapne apni shayri ka kamaal dikhaya kaya kahney. bahut accha lag raha hai. yu aakar suggest kartey rahna aur hum koshish kartey raheygey appke nakshey-kadam par chalney ki.

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appki dost

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Re: Re: kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi - 18th September 2006, 09:29 AM
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badut accha likha hai aapne ye sher dil ko choo gaya

koi din esa nahi beeta jab tum yaad na aaye
jab teri yado.n ke badal jehan main na chaye
milne bichadna to baad ki baat hai magar..
hum to khwabo main bhi tumhe choo aaye....


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thanks dilip, yeh mere starting ka share hai, aur tumne aaj esko phir se jaha lakar eski keemat badda di, aaj tumhari vajhe se es post par maikash ji ka reply hai.

thanks again

tumhari didi

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18th September 2006, 10:28 AM
sister aapka starting ka share padha maine aaj

ab pata chala aap itni achhi peshkas kaise likh eti hai jab aapki staring hi itni achhi thi

bahot achhi tarah se aap kalam ko pesh karti hai

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Re: kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi - 18th September 2006, 02:44 PM
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"Pani ka ek katra aankh se gira abhi abhi,
kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi,
appse bichdey jamana hua magar,
yu lagga koi mujse mil kar gaya abhi abhi"
hello di how r u....

meine yaad kiya na apko abhi abhi lekin ye chaha ki aapki palke bheeg jaye.

aapne achha likha hai aur maikash ji ne jo sher me tabdili ki hai vo bhi achhi lagi. likhti rahiye unhi bahot achha likhti hai aap

meri daad kabool farmaiye

gratse

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sister aapka starting ka share padha maine aaj

ab pata chala aap itni achhi peshkas kaise likh eti hai jab aapki staring hi itni achhi thi

bahot achhi tarah se aap kalam ko pesh karti hai

aur main bhi sikha hu aap se hi

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dear dhaval dekha meri starting ki post ko. kaya gul khiley huey hai maine. woh to mailkash ji ne usko sudhara hai to ab mujhe bhi thik lag rahja hai.

aur tumhey yeh bhi thik lagga, good bhai ho to aisa.

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Re: Re: kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi - 19th September 2006, 02:18 PM
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hello di how r u....

meine yaad kiya na apko abhi abhi lekin ye chaha ki aapki palke bheeg jaye.

aapne achha likha hai aur maikash ji ne jo sher me tabdili ki hai vo bhi achhi lagi. likhti rahiye unhi bahot achha likhti hai aap

meri daad kabool farmaiye

gratse

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my dear pooja, tumhari daad sar ankho par. apne purani post padkar accha lag raha hai. yeh to dilip ne phir se highlight kar di meri post. unko lagta hai unki didi bahut accha likhti hai :-)

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hi - 9th October 2006, 11:37 AM
"Pani ka ek katra aankh se gira abhi abhi,
kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi,
appse bichdey jamana hua magar,
yu lagga koi mujse mil kar gaya abhi abhi"

sunita ji appko raj ka namaskaar.....abhi abhiu appke yeh ashaar parhe......patta nahi main inko kaise miss kar gaya.....bhut ache ehsaas hai or lafzon ko bakhubi istemaal kiya hai.....meri daad kabool karna.....take care,,..raj......

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"Pani ka ek katra aankh se gira abhi abhi,
kaya tumne mujko yaad kiya abhi abhi,
appse bichdey jamana hua magar,
yu lagga koi mujse mil kar gaya abhi abhi"

sunita ji appko raj ka namaskaar.....abhi abhiu appke yeh ashaar parhe......patta nahi main inko kaise miss kar gaya.....bhut ache ehsaas hai or lafzon ko bakhubi istemaal kiya hai.....meri daad kabool karna.....take care,,..raj......

raj ji namaskar.....!

aapki daad humey dil se kabool hai. aapne es post ko padda aur pasand kiya tahe-dil se shukargujar hu. yu hi saath detey rahiyega.

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12th October 2006, 08:43 PM
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aapne mujhe padda ur pasand kiya bahut accha lagga. meri post par aane ke liye mai aapki tahe-dil se shukargujar hu. aur ha maine suna hai ki app bahut acchey shayer hai.n

abhi tak maine aapko padda nahi hai, samey nikal kar jaroor padugi.

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