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Aarzoo thee ki nibhate jaayen -
18th October 2005, 10:40 AM
Aarzoo thee ki sunaate jaayen
Aashiq ko sharaabon ka samander teri aankhen,Likhti hain mera roz muqaddar teri aankhen,andheron ke musafir ko roshini tera wajood,Maine do jahaan pa liye padhker Teri aankhen….Zindgi jeene ke mujhe gur sikha gayi,or jaane kya kya keh gayi hanskar teri aankhen,begaana banaata hai mujhko tera salook ,or mujhe apna banaati hain ladkar teri aankhen,duniya ne mujhse mera pataa pooch liya thaa, or main aa gayaa kaagaz per likhker teri aankhen, Aarzoo thee ki sunaate jaayen Hum tere ishq ko gaate jaayen Jo mujhe pyar dil se karte hain Wo mere naaz utthate jaayen Sun liya aapka kya rutba hai Meri aukaat bataate jaayen Dekhiye humko ek baar hanskar Aap humko bhi hansate jaayen Ruh se ruh gar mile na mile Jism se jism milaate jaayen Hum sar-e-aam peete jaayenge Aap aankhon se pilaate jaayen Roshini apne saath le jaayen Aap mere dil ko jalaate jaayen Aap gairon pe meharba.n hain bahut Pyas meri bhi bujhate jaayen Humko haqiqat bayaan kar jaayen Aaina humko dikhaate jaayen Jab tak ke saans ruk na jaaye karan Dard se rishta nibhate jaayen Karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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18th October 2005, 12:35 PM
karan jee.........
aap starting hi bahut badiya dete haiN.....to poori ghazal me ek alag ehsaas hota hai......aisa laga ki ek geet sun rahi thi maiN..... aur (aashiq ko samandar-----------------likhkar teri aankhen) ye aashaar to bahut hi shaandaar the......aap apne har kalaam ka aaghaaz kuch isi tarah se karte haiN...... sach kahooN to main apke kalaamo ka hameshaa intezaaar karti hooN.......is forum me aana kam hi hota hai lekin aajkal frequently aa rahi hooN....aap dard pe bhi kuch post kariyeega...... thanx, KasaK....... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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18th October 2005, 02:06 PM
hi karan ,
bohat hi khoobsurat kalam hai ise hum sab ke saath sher karne ka shukriya isi tarah likhte rahiye apna khyaal rakhiye bye. !**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!* aap ki yaad aaye to dil kiya kare, dil jo dil ko churaaye to dil kiya kare , shikve bhi aap se shikayat bhi aap se....... aap ke bin jiyaa na jaaye to dil kiya . !**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!**!*  ashiq awara mai kabhi kuch nahi likhta bas dusron ka likha post karta hoon kyonki mai shayar nahi hoon lekin mujhe shayri bohat pasand hai |
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23rd October 2005, 02:42 PM
aankhen
dard ke saath aur bhi bahot kuuch bayan karti hai par shart yeh hai ki aashiq tak unki zaroorat to pahonche... vaise ,accha likha hai aik mutthi main kaid kar loon, yeh aasman hai jitna!" |
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4th November 2005, 08:59 PM
bhaiya jaanta hoon aap jawab me reply nahi karenge.par kya karoon is baar rok na saka khud ko.gazab dhaye ho aap is baar.bahut pasand aayi mujhe aapki ye rachna.humare dil se nikli hui daad kabool farmayen aap.
aapka LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th November 2005, 09:47 AM
wow....bahaut badhiya likkha hai aapne karan....sach padhke alag hi ehsaas hua hai....tareef kubool karein....
 apna khyaal rakhiyega.byeSubha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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