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Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 21st December 2004, 11:12 PM

Pehle to maufi chahoonga itne dinon baad apki mehfil mein aane ke liye......

ye kuch din aise lage jaise arsa beet gaya ho.....

kuch likha tha....in dinon....jo aapki peshe khidmat hai.....



gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......



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gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......


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Dil se Daad Aur Shukriya Dost... Kaafi time baad tumhe dekha site par.. Tumhe padhna humesha hi accha lgta hai.. aage bhi aise hi likhte rehna!!

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Re: Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 22nd December 2004, 12:32 PM

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Pehle to maufi chahoonga itne dinon baad apki mehfil mein aane ke liye......

ye kuch din aise lage jaise arsa beet gaya ho.....

kuch likha tha....in dinon....jo aapki peshe khidmat hai.....



gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......
aman mere bhai ...

kya kahun aapke kalam pe ... sabke aaine rakh diye aapne .. jinse sach yun beh raha hai ... ki bas sab kuch aapke pas hi tha .. jao aaj diniya ki nazar main aa hi gaya ... bhai itne pyare alfazon main hum sabko bandhne ke liye shukriya ... aur itni badi hastiyon main mujhe shamil karne ke liye aapka teh dil se shukra gujar hun n.. aapke pyar aur jazbaton ko salam karta hua ...

aapka bhai

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22nd December 2004, 02:55 PM

Aman Bhai Adaab.

gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Bohot hi khoobsurat tasavvuraat ke malik hai aap. Behad accha laga yeh sher. Aap ki bayaangi aur aap ka takhayyul bohot pasand aaya...likhte rahiyega.... yunn hi.. apne aur hamare dard ki daastan.


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Aman Dost!

Bohot khoob Dost, Bahut khoobsyrati se apne jazbaat likhe hain tumne... Well. yeh sabhi shaks mere bhi dil ke bahut kareeb hain... To tumhare shabdon ka dil me utarna zaahir thha...

Dil se Daad Aur Shukriya Dost... Kaafi time baad tumhe dekha site par.. Tumhe padhna humesha hi accha lgta hai.. aage bhi aise hi likhte rehna!!




Pulkit......

thanks......aur kya kahoon bas jintna jaanta tha..... lafzon mein bayan karne ki koshish ki kai......

tumhara dost....



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aman mere bhai ...

kya kahun aapke kalam pe ... sabke aaine rakh diye aapne .. jinse sach yun beh raha hai ... ki bas sab kuch aapke pas hi tha .. jao aaj diniya ki nazar main aa hi gaya ... bhai itne pyare alfazon main hum sabko bandhne ke liye shukriya ... aur itni badi hastiyon main mujhe shamil karne ke liye aapka teh dil se shukra gujar hun n.. aapke pyar aur jazbaton ko salam karta hua ...

aapka bhai

kunal



Kunal.... mere bhai.....

shukriya ..... aur tumne sahi jaana ki yeh to bas aaina tha.....jisme kuch dinon se apni pehchaan dhoond raha hoon.....
aur badon ka pyar to hamesha choton ke saath rehta hai.....

khayal rakhna.....

tumhara bhai.....



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Aman Bhai Adaab.

gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Bohot hi khoobsurat tasavvuraat ke malik hai aap. Behad accha laga yeh sher. Aap ki bayaangi aur aap ka takhayyul bohot pasand aaya...likhte rahiyega.... yunn hi.. apne aur hamare dard ki daastan.


Talib ji..... Adaab......

sahi kahoon to jab likhne baitha to pehle sher mein aapka naam khud-b-khud hi aa gaya......

jaanta nahi lekin kyun aapka hi khayal aaya.... shayad aapka avtaar mere zehan mein tha.....


shukriya jo aapne is nacheez ko saraha......

likhta rahoonga jo aapki shaagirdi milti rahi.....

aapka apna.....



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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......

AMAN RAHI

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Re: Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 29th January 2005, 12:59 PM

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gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......


Aman bhai
sabse pehle to aapse muaafi chahta hoon ki aap ko post par itne dinon baad aa raha hoon.darsal mein bilkool anjaan tha is post se..aaj aap ke diye link ke jariye mein is umda kalaam se rubru hua.
dost jaisa ki talib bhai ne kaha bahoot hi khubsurat tasuwaraat ke aap maalik hai....bahoot bahoot mubaaraqbaad kubool karo bhai

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

wah kya sahi likha hai tumne mere dost...ek sher yaad aa gaya..

Gardishon mein bhatak raha mein wo sitara hoon
ghayal hoon dil ka halaat ka mara hoon.

take care..likhte rahiye..khush rahiye
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29th January 2005, 01:29 PM

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

so very sweet bade bhai...

beautiful dedication...aap pyaare bhai ho...issliey hamesha saath dete ho mera...aage bhi dete rehna...

pyaar ke dhaage se buna hota jo rishta
Aman se, bhai se pehle hota jo naata
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Re: Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 29th January 2005, 02:06 PM

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Pehle to maufi chahoonga itne dinon baad apki mehfil mein aane ke liye......

ye kuch din aise lage jaise arsa beet gaya ho.....

kuch likha tha....in dinon....jo aapki peshe khidmat hai.....



gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......
bahut hi acha laga sabka andaz pakad kar acha likha hai.
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Re: Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 29th January 2005, 06:30 PM

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Pehle to maufi chahoonga itne dinon baad apki mehfil mein aane ke liye......

ye kuch din aise lage jaise arsa beet gaya ho.....

kuch likha tha....in dinon....jo aapki peshe khidmat hai.....



gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......


aman,

lajawaab kar diya hai.... apne rishto ko mano dil khol kar bayaan kar diya hai.....

khush raho

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Re: Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 1st February 2005, 05:28 PM

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Pehle to maufi chahoonga itne dinon baad apki mehfil mein aane ke liye......

ye kuch din aise lage jaise arsa beet gaya ho.....

kuch likha tha....in dinon....jo aapki peshe khidmat hai.....



gar jo dard ki zubaan hoti......
^Talib^ ka har zakm ek kitaab hota.....

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

bayan hota jo ishq in aankhon se.....
^SacCha_pyar^ yun galion mein bikhra na hota.....

aagosh mein samet-ti jo tu pyar se.....
^Aman^ is kadar darindon mein bata na hota......
wow aman....
kya likha hai aapne....

sahi mein bahut acha likhte hai aap....

tahe dil se daad kabul kijiye

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2nd February 2005, 08:40 PM

Pehle to maafi der se aane ki aman veer ji....I will take all blames for it since I was slacking off big time..lol par aapke is kalaam ne phir mujhe woh apnaapan dikhaa kar mujhe apni aur keench hi liyaa....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

Wah Bahut khoob sach mein bekaabu sa hi hoon...

aapki is pyaar bhari rachnaa se dil bhar aaya hai....aage bhi aapka aur hamara pyaar yunhi bana rahe isi dua ki guzaarish parvar digaar se karte hue ijaazat leta hoon

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Aman bhai
sabse pehle to aapse muaafi chahta hoon ki aap ko post par itne dinon baad aa raha hoon.darsal mein bilkool anjaan tha is post se..aaj aap ke diye link ke jariye mein is umda kalaam se rubru hua.
dost jaisa ki talib bhai ne kaha bahoot hi khubsurat tasuwaraat ke aap maalik hai....bahoot bahoot mubaaraqbaad kubool karo bhai

Chandni jo deti saath chaand ka har-su.....
^Kureel^ yun raaton ko taare na ginta......

wah kya sahi likha hai tumne mere dost...ek sher yaad aa gaya..

Gardishon mein bhatak raha mein wo sitara hoon
ghayal hoon dil ka halaat ka mara hoon.

take care..likhte rahiye..khush rahiye
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shukriya jo ye rachna aapko pasand aayi..... aur bhai jaan aap ye aap aap na kaha karen... hum aapse choote hain aap hume tum kahen to lagega ki hum aapke kareeb hain.....


aur tabiyaat kaisi hai aapki abhi.....

khayal rakhiyega.....


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^Paras^ meri behna jo hoti pyar sabka......
har bhai ka haath khaali na hota.....

so very sweet bade bhai...

beautiful dedication...aap pyaare bhai ho...issliey hamesha saath dete ho mera...aage bhi dete rehna...

pyaar ke dhaage se buna hota jo rishta
Aman se, bhai se pehle hota jo naata
paras kee baaton mein yeh dard na hota...


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meri sweet behna......

pyaar ke dhaage se buna hota jo rishta
Aman se, bhai se pehle hota jo naata
paras kee baaton mein yeh dard na hota...



apne bhai ke liye itna aacha khayal...... dil bhar aaya meri behna....

apna khayal rakhna.....


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bahut hi acha laga sabka andaz pakad kar acha likha hai.
sakhi



Sakhi.....


aacha laga tumhe yahan pa ke...... Delhi mein mulakaat to na ho paayi.....lekin zindagi mein zaroor milenge.....


khayal rakhna....

tumhara dost......



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aman,

lajawaab kar diya hai.... apne rishto ko mano dil khol kar bayaan kar diya hai.....

khush raho

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Meena Maa.....


ye rishte yaise ban gaye hai ki dil ke kareeb hain....

Aap maa ka pyar....

Talib Sir.....ki izaat is dil mein itni hai ki bayan nahi kar sakta.....

Kureel bhai se pyar.....

Paras jaisi sweet behna.....

Anu aur Kunal jaise chote bhai.....


aur kya kahoon.....



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Re: nice one - 11th February 2005, 11:16 AM

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AMAN_RAHI JI


gar puri ho jaati is dil ki bus ek muraad
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shukriya ki yahan aa kar is nacheez ko apne sher se nawaza....

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Re: Re: Gar Jo Dard Ki Zubaan Hoti......dedicated To Talib,kureel,paras,anu & Kunal - 11th February 2005, 11:37 AM

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kya likha hai aapne....

sahi mein bahut acha likhte hai aap....

tahe dil se daad kabul kijiye

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shukirya priyanka.....



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Pehle to maafi der se aane ki aman veer ji....I will take all blames for it since I was slacking off big time..lol par aapke is kalaam ne phir mujhe woh apnaapan dikhaa kar mujhe apni aur keench hi liyaa....

Deti lehren saath ek pal ka bhi kabhi.....
^Mast^ jhonka hawa ka yun bekaabu na hota.....

Wah Bahut khoob sach mein bekaabu sa hi hoon...

aapki is pyaar bhari rachnaa se dil bhar aaya hai....aage bhi aapka aur hamara pyaar yunhi bana rahe isi dua ki guzaarish parvar digaar se karte hue ijaazat leta hoon

likhte rahiYeGaa

-aapka apnaa

Mast Veer.......

der ho gayi....jawab dein vich mainu......thuvadi aadat lag gi hai na.....

saada pyar taan ehdaan hi banya rahooga.....rabb to ehi dua mangda haan.....

vada veer.....



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aman ji namaskaar..............aaj arse baad aapki es poetry par nazar padi, sach aapne to ek ek line mein sabko bayaaN kar diya hai.....bahut khoob....accha laga aapke en ahsaaso.n ko padna.
aaj-kal mahfil mein aapki haziri nahi lag rahi
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aman ji namaskaar..............aaj arse baad aapki es poetry par nazar padi, sach aapne to ek ek line mein sabko bayaaN kar diya hai.....bahut khoob....accha laga aapke en ahsaaso.n ko padna.
aaj-kal mahfil mein aapki haziri nahi lag rahi
aate raha kijiye.......

god bless u
Sunita Ji...

Aaj aapke kaaran ye post phir nazar mein aayi.... shurkiya...phir se shayrana ehsaas ki ek lehar uthi hai...koshish karoonga aaa rahoon bazm mein..

Rabb raakha..........



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