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7th August 2012, 12:16 PM
Bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Aap ki rai ka muntazir,
Naadaan.
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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7th August 2012, 12:53 PM
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
bht khoooooooooooooooob badaa achaa laga aap ko purdh kar , keep writting
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Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh.
Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa.
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7th August 2012, 05:01 PM
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Originally Posted by Nazish
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
bht khoooooooooooooooob badaa achaa laga aap ko purdh kar , keep writting
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Nazish Saheb Aadaab,
Aapki nawaazish ka teh-e-dil se mamnoon thehra janaab. Meri bazm meiN shirqat aur hausla afzaai ke liye bahot bahot shukriya. AaiNdaa bhi aap ke saath ki ummiid rahegi.
Apnaa khayaal rakhiye aur Khush rahiye.
Allah Hafez
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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7th August 2012, 08:28 PM
bahut hi khoob Naadaan ji
dhero daad kabool farmaye
apna khyal rakhe
Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
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7th August 2012, 10:22 PM
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Originally Posted by naadaan
Bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Aap ki rai ka muntazir,
Naadaan.
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naadaan ji bahut hi badhia likha aapne likhte rahain kush rahain
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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9th August 2012, 04:56 AM
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Originally Posted by naadaan
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Naadaan.
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WaaH ! Nihayat Khoob .. NaadaaN JI !
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad ..................................
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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9th August 2012, 01:05 PM
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bahut hi khoob Naadaan ji
dhero daad kabool farmaye
apna khyal rakhe
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Chanderp Ji Aadaab,
Aapki dheroN daad ke liye dheroN shukriya Bhai. Bazm meiN aate raheN aur hausla badhate raheN.
Khush rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiye.
Aadaab
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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12th August 2012, 06:29 AM
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Bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Aap ki rai ka muntazir,
Naadaan.
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bhut bhadiya dil se daad kabool karye.....................
kafiir
na jane kon kon hume duaaon mai yaad rakhta hai
mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai
Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye
tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye
...nm
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13th August 2012, 03:59 PM
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naadaan ji bahut hi badhia likha aapne likhte rahain kush rahain
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Rashmi Ji Namaskar,
Aapko hamaari koshish pasand aai ye hamaari khushnasiibi hai. Protsahan ke liye bahot dhanyavaad. Bhawishya mein bhi aap ke saath ki aasha rahegi.
Apnaa khayaal rakhiye, Khush rahiye.
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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14th August 2012, 02:07 PM
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Originally Posted by naadaan
Bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Aap ki rai ka muntazir,
Naadaan.
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Waahhh kyaa baat hai Nadaan bhai... Dil ko chooo liyaa aapke kalaam ne...
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Kyaa baat hai... waaahhhhhh
Shaad...
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15th August 2012, 12:46 AM
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Bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Aap ki rai ka muntazir,
Naadaan.
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wwwaaaahhh naadaan ji .... apke qalaam ki jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hai. iska bepanaah husn, khayaalon ki beintehaa raanaayee ... ghazab ki fiqr hai aapkee ....aapko dillee mubarakbaad aur lakhon karodon daad !!
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17th August 2012, 06:18 PM
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WaaH ! Nihayat Khoob .. NaadaaN JI !
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad ..................................
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Naresh Bhai Namaskar,
Dili khushi hui aapko apni mehfil meiN dekh kar. Puraane dostoN ki aamad pe dil bag bag ho jaata hai. Aapki mubaraqbaad sar aaNkhoN pe. AaiNdaa bhi aate rahiyega.
Apnaa khayaal rakhiye. Khush rahiye,
Aapka dost
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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23rd August 2012, 12:57 PM
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bhut bhadiya dil se daad kabool karye.....................
kafiir
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Janaab Kafiir Saheb Aadaab,
Aap ki dili daad dil se qubool bhaijaan. AaiNda bhi hausla afzaai ki ummiid rahegi.
Apna Khayal rakhiye, Khush rahiye.
Allah Hafez
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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30th August 2012, 01:09 PM
hello naadaan ji
very nice...keep writing
If you have it [love],
you don't need to have anything else.
If you don't have it,
it doesn't matter much what else you do have.
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4th September 2012, 05:25 PM
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Waahhh kyaa baat hai Nadaan bhai... Dil ko chooo liyaa aapke kalaam ne...
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Kyaa baat hai... waaahhhhhh
Shaad...
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Sameer MiyaN Aadaab,
Ba.De diniN baad aamad hui aapki is naachiiz ki bazm meiN. ChaleN der aaye durust aaye . Hausla afzaai ke liye mamnoon huuN aapka. Aate rahiyegaa, bhalaa lagta hai puraane dostoN se mil kar.
Khush rahiye,
Allah Hafez
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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5th September 2012, 03:05 PM
Wah! Kya baat hai! Har lafz dil me ghar kar jata hai! Dili Daad kubul kijiye....!
SamandaroN mieN muaafiq havaa chalaata hai...
Jahaaz khud nahiiN chalte Khudaa chalaataa ha...
Tausif I. Shaikh
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26th December 2012, 07:02 PM
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bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huun. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinon,
meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinon.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humen,
mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinon.
Chalakte pyaalon mein unki khanakti hansi,
yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinon.
Kehten hain wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinon!
Humein barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinon
uski aziiyaten kyun aziiz hain is ‘naadaan’ ko,
bewafaa nahi samajhte hain ye raaz in dinon.
aap ki rai ka muntazir,
naadaan.
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wah!!...bohat khoob........................................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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26th December 2012, 07:06 PM
bahuthee umdaa ghazal rahi naadaan jeee....har sher khoob laga lekin ye khaas lage........
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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29th December 2012, 09:18 PM
Agar mohbat unse n mile
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to mohbat unko jarur dena
jo tumko pyar karte hai.....
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31st December 2012, 04:48 PM
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wah!!...bohat khoob........................................
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Zainy Ji Aadaab,
Muafi ka talabgaar huuN, kalaam kahiN dab gaya tha aur aap ki daad par nazar na pa.Di Beherhaal, aapki daad sar aaNkhoN pe. Hausla afzai ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya.
Khush rahiye, muskurate rahiye.
Aaadaab
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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1st January 2013, 07:36 PM
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Bazm-e-dard ki mehfil ko nacheez ka salaam.
Ek adna koshish aap ko supurd kar raha huuN. Ummiid hai ke pasand aayegi.
Humse zindagii kuch naraaz hai in dinoN,
Meri khamoshi hi meri awaaz hai in dinoN.
Kuch is qadar dar kinaar kiaa usne humeN,
Mera raqiib hi hai mera humraaz in dinoN.
Chalakte pyaaloN meiN unki khanakti haNsi,
Yehi hai mera gham-e-dil-e-saaz in dinoN.
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Uski aziiyateN kyuN aziiz haiN is ‘naadaan’ ko,
Bewafaa nahi samajhte haiN ye raaz in dinoN.
Aap ki rai ka muntazir,
Naadaan.
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Adaab Naadaan Sahab!
Aaala buhat aalatareen ghazal rahee! Lutf aaya kehna kaafi hargiz nahee hoga! In do ashaaraon nay dil par khaasaa asar chchoda haye...
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Bas ayk hee ilteja haye aapsay... aysay lutf uthaanay kay mawqay aap aur ataa keejaygaa! Dhayron daad qabool karayn!
Duagoh
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7th January 2013, 01:03 PM
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Adaab Naadaan Sahab!
Aaala buhat aalatareen ghazal rahee! Lutf aaya kehna kaafi hargiz nahee hoga! In do ashaaraon nay dil par khaasaa asar chchoda haye...
KehteN haiN wo ke marta bhi nahi behayaa,
Lillah maut ko bhi hai is se aitraaz in dinoN!
HumeiN barbaad kar ke bhi usay chain nahi,
Duaa karti hai ho meri umra-daraaz in dinoN
Bas ayk hee ilteja haye aapsay... aysay lutf uthaanay kay mawqay aap aur ataa keejaygaa! Dhayron daad qabool karayn!
Duagoh
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Ahmad Bhai ASW,
Aapki daad sar aaNkoN pe. Zarra nawaazi aapki ke aap ne meri mehfil meiN shirkat ki, aur apnaa kiimati waqt diya. Inshallah koshish karuNgaa ki apni masroofiyat se kuch waqt nikal kar aapki iltejaa pe gaur karooN.
Apna khayaal rakhiye,
Khush rahiye,
Aadaab
Naadaan
"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.
वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
-आनंद नारायण मुल्ला
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