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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
 
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Woh hunar mera hee tha -
1st July 2015, 07:56 PM
Pankh tu dikha raha hai jo mujhe
Woh parinda laapata mera hee tha.. Jo dikhaaya tha kabhi tooney nishaan". Woh kalam ka daagh bhi mera hee tha.. Ab saleeqa woh sikhaaen hain mujhe Woh tareeka woh hunar mera hee tha.. Har andheri raat mein dartey the tum Humsafar saaya jo tha mera hee tha.. Tum bas kalaam sey mash-hoor ho , Matla makta Qaafiya mera hee tha.... (SR) #Shayaraina Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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1st July 2015, 09:56 PM
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wah sanjay bhai bahut khoob likha hai aapne likhte rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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2nd July 2015, 10:54 AM
Ab saleeqa woh sikhaaen hain mujhe
Woh tareeka woh hunar mera hee tha.... Waaahhh Kya baat hai raina ji....bahut khoob kalaam... Aate rahiye...likhte rahiye..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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2nd July 2015, 07:09 PM
Bahut bahut Shukriya..Glad you liked it.
Regards Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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2nd July 2015, 07:12 PM
Thanks Madhu Ji..
__________________________________________________ ___ Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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2nd July 2015, 09:14 PM
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waahh kyaa baat hai kyaa andaaz hai rainaa saahab...... likhte rahiye shaad,..... |
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3rd July 2015, 08:04 PM
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Pehli baari padaa apko aur apka likha har sher mujhe behad pasand aaya. Ummeed hai apko aur padne ka mauka milta rahega. Bohut khoob.........  Sarika |
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4th July 2015, 08:39 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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4th July 2015, 09:19 AM
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Raina ji..........khoobsurat kalaam par mubarakbaad kabool kijiye....hame last wala sher bahuttttttttttttt khaas lga. Tum bas kalaam sey mash-hoor ho , Matla makta Qaafiya mera hee tha.... kya baat hai...yu hi likhtey rhiye. bazm meiN aate rhiye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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