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2nd July 2015, 07:44 PM
adaab doston..
mahfil e ishq me pesh hain kuch dil se nikle huye khyaal... Nayi ulfat ke rangoN se saja kissa sunana hai bahot seedha bahot sachcha muhabbat ka fasana hai. mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai bharose par bana ghar ye muhabbat se hai bas roshan nishaaN na hai kisi gam ke fakat manzar suhana hai. takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai. duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai.. madhu |
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2nd July 2015, 09:10 PM
bahut khoob peshkash hai madhu jee...... ummdah aashaaron se sajee laajawaab ghazal.... bahut sii daad aur mubaarakbaad....
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2nd July 2015, 09:39 PM
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wah Madhu jee bahut umda peshkash dil se daad kubul karen likhti rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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3rd July 2015, 08:09 AM
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Behad khoobsurat kalam pesh kiya aapne... Daad hazir hai Aapka apna Bhuhan Bhushan Joshi |
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3rd July 2015, 08:21 AM
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Muqarar Muqarar awaaz aa rahi hai takalluf ya anaa aaye kabhi na darmiyaaN apne jo ek dooje se ham roothe to pal bhar meiN manana hai Wah Wah yeh sirf ek sher nahi aapke dil ki sachaai bayaan kar raha hai...Bahut Bahut khoob likha Madhu aapne...aapne havaale se ek sher diye jaa raha hoon.. bharose par mere mujhko na tum ab chodh ke jaana hai iska hashr-o-nashr kaisa yeh qissa bhi puraana hai Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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6th July 2015, 01:18 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya shaad ji....aapki daad sar ankhon par...yoon hee hausla badhate rahiyega...taki ye kalam chalti rahe.... salamat rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th July 2015, 02:27 PM
Madhu jee
Namaste Dil ko khush kar dene waali aapki is umdaah koshish ke liye dil se mubaaraqbaad.. likhte rahiye Aapka Dhaval |
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7th July 2015, 01:52 PM
wah wah.......................mazaa aa gaya madhu.
bohut khoob................ bohut khoob........................ yunhi mehfil ko apne khoobsurat kalaamon se sajati raho. Sarika |
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8th July 2015, 01:11 PM
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mujhe khush dekhne ki gar tumhari bhi tamanna hai mujhe apna he kahna bas ye hak yoon hee jatana hai. duaaoN ka sila hai tum jo mujhko mil gaye jana sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai Apke is khoosboodaar gusdaste ke ye do phool bahut achche lage Aapki aur aapke kalam ki salamati ki duaon ke saath.....ijaajat Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab') |
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9th July 2015, 09:16 PM
sanam ek saath ho tera to kadmo meiN zamana hai..
Madhu ji , aap ki is aakhri line tau mera dil loot liya ...bahut hi pyara kalaam madhu ji , ek ek sher per ke luthf aa raha tha .. Aap ki lehni aise hi ujagar hoti rahe aage bhi , bas yehi dua aapke liye .. Dil se daad . Hamdam khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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15th July 2015, 09:26 AM
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Simply superb. Mohabbat se labrez iss kalaam pe aapko dheroN mubarakbaad. Likhte rahiye. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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20th August 2015, 04:53 PM
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Aate rahiye....... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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20th August 2015, 09:52 PM
Ghazab ki ghazal huii hai. Dher saari mubarakbad Madhuji. Pyaar ho to aesa ho.
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9th September 2015, 12:04 PM
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aate rahiye...... khush rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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16th October 2015, 06:17 PM
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pahle to daad qubool kijiyega kya khoob sher kaha hai.....waah.. aur mujh pe jo bharosa apka jawaab padhkar mahsoos hua... uske liye tah e dil se shukriya.... aap sab ke haseen alfaaz qalaam ko aur khoobsoorat bana dete hain... salamat rahein... aate rahein... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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22nd October 2015, 02:55 PM
waah boha,t khub madhu g  boha,t acha,a likha,a hai a,ap ne Quote:
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20th November 2015, 03:22 PM
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Aate rahiyega.. Takecare.. Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th December 2015, 11:13 PM
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Yun hee khush raho.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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30th December 2015, 11:52 AM
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Aapko kalaam pasand aaya achcha laga jaankar.. Yun vaqt nikal kar kahne aur sunne ka ye silsila barkarar rakhiyega.... Aate rahiyega... Take care. .. Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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30th December 2015, 02:01 PM
Bahut khoob likha hai madhu jee aapne......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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12th January 2016, 12:08 PM
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aapka sneh aur sath yun hee bana rahe yahi chahoongi main... aate rahiyega.. salamat rahein.. regards madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th January 2016, 02:13 PM
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tareef ka shukriya janaab.... aapka sath aage bhi milta rahega...yahi dua hai... apna khayaal rakhein.. madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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26th January 2016, 12:15 AM
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Aapke saadgi se bhare aashaar khoobsurati se bayaani kar rahe hain. Yun to poori ghazal hi khoobsurat hai, yeh sher khaas dil ko bhaya: mere hamraah mujhko ajnabi bankar mile ho tum magar lagta hai tumse rabita barson purana hai Meri dil se daad kubool karen aur likhti rahen. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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13th February 2016, 11:49 AM
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Aate rahiyega.. Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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24th February 2016, 01:39 PM
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shukriya nawazish mohtarma... lekin aap kahaan gayab hain....sdc pe intzaar hai aapka... khush rahiye... aate rahiye... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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aate rahiyega..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Achcha laga aapne kalaam ko pasand kiya.. Aate rahiyega.. Tkcr Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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