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Post Teri Tasveer Ban Gai - 31st March 2005, 12:43 AM

Aankhon mein aasuon ki lakeer ban gai,
Kabhi na socha jo aise takdeer ban gai,
Humne to rait mein pheri thi ungliyan,
Gaur se dekha to teri tasveer ban gai..


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Hi Aryan - 31st March 2005, 10:26 AM

Hi Aryan,
Aapne bahot achcha likha hai but khud likhne ki koshish karte to kya baat thi....
Kyonki yeh aap ka sher nahin hai isliye aapki nahin haan is sher ki tareef kar raha hoonn....

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