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27th September 2007, 09:33 AM
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Hello Jasdeep Ji ...aaj aapki kaafi puraani post padhi ...aur iaska dard jaise dil ko chhu gaya ....
Jo mitta kar bhi mittaaya na jaaye .....jise tod kar bhi toda na jaaye .....aur bhool kar bhi jise bhulaaya na jaaye ..wohi rishta to sachcha rishta hota hai na ??? ....isi ko to pyaar kahete hai .....chaahe kisi bhi rishte ke liye ho.
par ummid karti hoon ki jo bhi rishta hai wo thik ho jaaye....aur fir se ek baar uan rishton mai pyaar ki khushbu mahek ne lage.....aur rishte har dum aapki zindagi mai pyaar ke rang bikhaire.
Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,
Aapki Dost: Gudia
Jay Ambe.
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Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani......
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Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai,
Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai,
Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi,
Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi.
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DIL KI BAAT DIL TAK
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wah -
27th September 2007, 11:51 AM
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Jasdeep Bhai Adaab..............................................
Aaj kal kya baat bhai aap kanha hai kya zyada masroof hain...............ab apke kalaam ki baat bahut pyara laga apka likha dil ko chulene wale ehsaas rahe ek umda kalaam per apke liye dilki gheraiyoun se nikli daad kubool ho khush rahiye........aap ka bhai
"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif''
Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.
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27th September 2007, 01:50 PM
Gudia G Namaskar and Kaashif G ko aadab.........
Aapne logo ne isse padha aur tareef ki iske liye bahut bahut shukriya....
Lekin main iske saath NOT MINE likhna bhool gaya tha......
Waise maine isse post karne se pehle yeh likha tha ke maine isse kahi se padha hai....
Par aap logo ki daad ke liye shukriya.......
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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27th September 2007, 03:27 PM
jasdeep kaise ho.....bahut dino se koi msg nahi...koi pm nahi...kaya jayada busy ho gaye ho ????
aapne bahut acchey ahsaas hamarey saath share kiye haiN.....sach meiN dil ko chu gaye...yu hi likhtey rahe...kush rahiye
keep in touch
god bless u
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2007, 02:17 PM
Hello Jasdeep ji,
jisne likha uske liye
is dard ka ek hee jawab nazar aata hei mujhe..ki jo log dil se pyar karte hei unke dil par kisi aur ka raaj ho jata hei..yani koi aakar unke dil ko rent par le leta hei
par jo log aatma ki gehraai se pyar karte hei wo hamaesha tadapte rehte hei..
wo pyar to kisi ko bhi kar sakte hei ..par pyar ki chahat sirf ek se karte hei.
aur ye banda unn logo mei se hei jo..........ruh ki gehraai se pyar karte hei.
words uss dard ko kam nahi kar sakte na hee kuch tarif us dard ko kam kar sakti hei...
but itna zaroor hei ki
dard ka hadh se guzarna to abhi baaki hei..
tune to bewafai karli ...mera bewafa hona abhi baki hei..
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28th September 2007, 05:39 PM
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jasdeep ji sat sri akaal.....aapki koshish behad achi laggi har khyaal dil ke kareeb raha....bhut dil se likha gyaa ye kalaam dil ko chhu gyaa......yunhi likhte rahiyega......raj.....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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30th September 2007, 03:32 PM
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Aadab jasdeep ji,
kaise hain aap?
wah wah kya baat hai jasdeep ji,
kya kahe hum aapse?
sach yakin maniye is nazam ne hamare dilko chhu liya,
bohot hi pyarisi koshish aapne post ki hai,
jise padh kar ye mehsus hua,ke nazmo me b jaan hoti hain,
thnx
apna khayal rakhiye,
khush rahiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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30th September 2007, 05:29 PM
vaise to mai shayri.com ke liye bahut naya hun par aapki shayri padkar laga ki mera dil aavaj de raha hai likhte rahiye
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30th September 2007, 11:17 PM
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Bahut khoob Jasdeep ji...
Dard se bhare aapke yeh ehsaas dil ko choo gaye..
Dua humesha yehi rahegi, ki aap humesha khush rahein!
Take Care..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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