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2nd February 2008, 04:06 AM
tum mujhe bhul gaye main tumhe bhula na saka
tum dur chale gaye mujse aur main rok bhi na saka yu hi raste me mile mujhe par main tumhe kuch kahe na saka dekh ke tumhari khushi main bhi rahe na saka dil ko samja ke aaj phir se tumhare samne aaya par tum mujhe na mile ye main sahe na saka kuch likhne ke liye kalam uthaya par kuch bhi likh na saka kash tum bhi kabhi yaad karo mujhe ye fariyad bhi kar na saka bas yu hi chup rahe gaya apne dil ka haal kabhi aapko suna na saka tumhe jeevan sathi banane ka sapna adhura hi rahe gaya aur isiliye to main maut ko bhi mil na saka |
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2nd February 2008, 04:12 AM
bahut achcha likhkha hai aapne krenil ji,
do keep writing. regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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2nd February 2008, 06:57 PM
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aapka bahut bahut shukhriya aarya ji ki aapko ye pasand aaya bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena taki hum aur bhi likh sake aapka dost krenil |
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5th February 2008, 04:06 PM
very well written krenil
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thank u very much ki aapko ye pasand aaya aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena |
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