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Tere yaadoN se har aik saaNs saja li maine - 19th May 2009, 03:59 PM
Mujhse mat pooch ke kyuN aaNkh jhuka li maine,
Teri tasweer thi jo tujhse chupaa li maine,


Jispe likha tha ke tu mere muqaddar maiN nahi,
Apne maathe ki wo lakeer mita li maine,


Ghere rehti hai mujhe aik anookhi khushbu,
Tere yaadoN se har aik saaNs saja li maine,


Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi aik ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...


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Mujhse mat pooch ke kyuN aaNkh jhuka li maine,
Teri tasweer thi jo tujhse chupaa li maine,


Jispe likha tha ke tu mere muqaddar maiN nahi,
Apne maathe ki wo lakeer mita li maine,


Ghere rehti hai mujhe aik anookhi khushbu,
Tere yaadoN se har aik saaNs saja li maine,


Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi aik ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...


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24th May 2009, 02:17 PM
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Mujhse mat pooch ke kyuN aaNkh jhuka li maine,
Teri tasweer thi jo tujhse chupaa li maine,


Jispe likha tha ke tu mere muqaddar maiN nahi,
Apne maathe ki wo lakeer mita li maine,


Ghere rehti hai mujhe aik anookhi khushbu,
Tere yaadoN se har aik saaNs saja li maine,


Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi aik ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...


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very nice sharing zainy jee...
agar koi is ghazal ko aage baDhana chahe to....?

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26th May 2009, 10:05 AM
SHAN,KHANAK,RITU,LUCKY JEE...mujhe khushi hai ke aap sabko meri ye sharing pasand aayi....

agar kisi ko is ghazal ke shayer ka naam pata ho to zarur likhiye.........



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Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi EK ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...


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yeh to meri ghazal hai ................ dekhiye Takalluf .........

(Just kidding...)

bahot hee achhi ghazal hai... waise is ghazal ke aur do sher bhi hai jisko milakar ghazal kuch aisi hai.................

Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful ghazal.................


Mujse Mat Pooch Ki Kyun Aankh Jhuka Li Maine,
Teri Tasveer Thi Jo Tujhse Chupa Li Maine

Jis Pe Likha Tha Ki Tu Mere Muqaddar Mein Nahi ,
Apne Maathe Ki Woh Tehreer Mita Li Maine

Har Janam Sabko Yahaan Sachha Pyaar Kahaan Milta Hai,
Teri Chaahat Mein To Umr Bita Li Maine

Mujhko Jaane Kahaan Ehsaas Mere Le Jaayein,
Waqt Ke Haathon Se Ek Nazm Utha Li Maine

Ghere Rehti Hai Mujhe Ek Anokhi Khushboo,
Teri Yaadon Se Har Ek Saans Saja Li Maine

Jiske Sheron Ko Woh Sunke Bahut Royi Thi,
Bas Wohi Ek Ghazal Sabse Chupa Li Maine.

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26th May 2009, 10:29 AM
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yeh to meri ghazal hai ................ dekhiye Takalluf .........

(Just kidding...)

takalluf nahi purvi jee,takhallus........waise ye ghazal waqay hai bohat khoobsurat ,lagta hai likhne waale ne jaise mere hi dil ka haal bayaan kar diya ho..........



bahot hee achhi ghazal hai... waise is ghazal ke aur do sher bhi hai jisko milakar ghazal kuch aisi hai.................

arre!! aapko 2 aur sher mil gaye ,kahi sach me aap hi to nahi hai is ghazal ki shayera.............,..lijiye ab to ye ghazal aur bhi nikhar gayi .......haai!!.........kya kehne,qurbaan jaaon !

Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful ghazal.................


Mujse Mat Pooch Ki Kyun Aankh Jhuka Li Maine,
Teri Tasveer Thi Jo Tujhse Chupa Li Maine

Jis Pe Likha Tha Ki Tu Mere Muqaddar Mein Nahi ,
Apne Maathe Ki Woh Tehreer Mita Li Maine

Har Janam Sabko Yahaan Sachha Pyaar Kahaan Milta Hai,
Teri Chaahat Mein To Umr Bita Li Maine

Mujhko Jaane Kahaan Ehsaas Mere Le Jaayein,
Waqt Ke Haathon Se Ek Nazm Utha Li Maine

Ghere Rehti Hai Mujhe Ek Anokhi Khushboo,
Teri Yaadon Se Har Ek Saans Saja Li Maine

Jiske Sheron Ko Woh Sunke Bahut Royi Thi,
Bas Wohi Ek Ghazal Sabse Chupa Li Maine.
MASHALLAH................................



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MASHALLAH................................
Hahhahahaha...

ab aap yeh to andaaza laga hee sakti hai ke itni acchi ghazal aur mai.N

jise takalluf aur takhallus ke beech ka difference bhi pata nahi hai.......


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Mujhse mat pooch ke kyuN aaNkh jhuka li maine,
Teri tasweer thi jo tujhse chupaa li maine,


Jispe likha tha ke tu mere muqaddar maiN nahi,
Apne maathe ki wo lakeer mita li maine,


Ghere rehti hai mujhe aik anookhi khushbu,
Tere yaadoN se har aik saaNs saja li maine,


Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi aik ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...


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very nice...............
Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi aik ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...

bahut khobsurat rachna hai.....

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Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
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SHAN,KHANAK,RITU,LUCKY JEE...mujhe khushi hai ke aap sabko meri ye sharing pasand aayi....

agar kisi ko is ghazal ke shayer ka naam pata ho to zarur likhiye.........
Mujhse mat pooch ki kyun aankh jhuka li maine,
teri tasveer thi jo tujhse chupa li maine,

Jis pe likha tha ki tu mere muqaddar mein nahi,
apne maathe ki woh tehreer mita li meine,

Har janm sabko yahaan sachha pyaar kahaan milta hai,
teri chaahat mein to umr bita li meine,

Mujhko jaane kahaan ehsaas mere le jaayein,
waqt ke haathon se ek nazm utha li meine,

Ghere rehti hai mujhe ek anokhi khushbu,
teri yaadon se har ek saans saja li meine,

Jiske sheron ko woh sunke bahut roya tha,
bas wohi ek ghazal sabse chupa li meine ....

(Shayar tou nahi poori ghazal probably)

   
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Mujhse mat pooch ke kyuN aaNkh jhuka li maine,
Teri tasweer thi jo tujhse chupaa li maine,


Jispe likha tha ke tu mere muqaddar maiN nahi,
Apne maathe ki wo lakeer mita li maine,


Ghere rehti hai mujhe aik anookhi khushbu,
Tere yaadoN se har aik saaNs saja li maine,


Jiske sheroN ko wo sunke bohat roya tha,
Bus wohi aik ghazal sabse chupaa li maine...


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superb..................thanx for sharing......

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Tariq saheb,Baqtiar saheb, Lamha.....i am glad u all liked this ghazal......this ghazal is one of my favorites........



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Jis Pe Likha Tha Ki Tu Mere Muqaddar Mein Nahi ,
Apne Maathe Ki Woh Tehreer Mita Li Maine

Jiske Sheron Ko Woh Sunke Bahut Royi Thi,
Bas Wohi Ek Ghazal Sabse Chupa Li Maine.



Dear Zainy..........bahut bahut shukriya es khoobsurat gazal ko humse share karne ke liye.....yeh 2 sher bahut hi gehre aur dil ke kareeb lage.

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Pleasure is all mine Sunita Di....................

ONE OF MY FAVOURITE GHAZALS..........



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very nice sharing zainy jee...
agar koi is ghazal ko aage baDhana chahe to....?
Ritu ji ke liye ek sher ka izafa..

yeh alag baat na khoya tha na sheerini thi
kheer jo tune pakaii thi woh kha li maine..

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