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Arman - 24th July 2009, 05:58 PM
Hello frnds, pesh hain meri ek choti si koshish



Hote kuch arman, hote kuch sapne bhi,
main bhi raah dekhta gar hota koi mera bhi,
ruth mujh se jate wo to unko manata bhi,
lekar ke baahon me fir unko satata bhi,
aankho me unki bas jata kabhi
to yaad ban ke aankho se barsta bhi,
kabhi kai main gum ho jata to jiyarat ko tarsta bhi,
zindagi se chura ke kuch shokh lamhe
aanchal me unke bhar deta kabhi,
rota gar koi mere liye... to has ke main mar jata bhi.....



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Hote kuch arman, hote kuch sapne bhi,
main bhi raah dekhta gar hota koi mera bhi,
ruth mujh se jate wo to unko manata bhi,
lekar ke baahon me fir unko satata bhi,
aankho me unki bas jata kabhi
to yaad ban ke aankho se barsta bhi,
kabhi kai main gum ho jata to jiyarat ko tarsta bhi,
zindagi se chura ke kuch shokh lamhe
aanchal me unke bhar deta kabhi,
rota gar koi mere liye... to has ke main mar jata bhi.....



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Shipra ji..........aapki poem ke ehsaas bahut ache lage......kahi dil ko bhi chhute hai..........aise hi likhte rahiye........khush rahiye......



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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behad khubsurat jazbaat hain shipra ji................ bahut hi umda likha hai aapne, yunhi likhte rahiye..... aur mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye....

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Hello frnds, pesh hain meri ek choti si koshish



Hote kuch arman, hote kuch sapne bhi,
main bhi raah dekhta gar hota koi mera bhi,
ruth mujh se jate wo to unko manata bhi,
lekar ke baahon me fir unko satata bhi,
aankho me unki bas jata kabhi
to yaad ban ke aankho se barsta bhi,
kabhi kai main gum ho jata to jiyarat ko tarsta bhi,
zindagi se chura ke kuch shokh lamhe
aanchal me unke bhar deta kabhi,
rota gar koi mere liye... to has ke main mar jata bhi.....



Shipra


Nalin

Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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shipra jii..............nazuk se ahsaas acche lage

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Hello frnds, pesh hain meri ek choti si koshish



Hote kuch arman, hote kuch sapne bhi,
main bhi raah dekhta gar hota koi mera bhi,
ruth mujh se jate wo to unko manata bhi,
lekar ke baahon me fir unko satata bhi,
aankho me unki bas jata kabhi
to yaad ban ke aankho se barsta bhi,
kabhi kai main gum ho jata to jiyarat ko tarsta bhi,
zindagi se chura ke kuch shokh lamhe
aanchal me unke bhar deta kabhi,
rota gar koi mere liye... to has ke main mar jata bhi.....



Shipra

very good..ehsaas mukammal hai..ek achchhi koshish hai..aur achchhha likhne ki koshish kijiyein...aap bahut achchha likh sakti hai..yeh ehsaas is waqt yahi keh rahe hai.

shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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shipra jii..............nazuk se ahsaas acche lage

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very good..ehsaas mukammal hai..ek achchhi koshish hai..aur achchhha likhne ki koshish kijiyein...aap bahut achchha likh sakti hai..yeh ehsaas is waqt yahi keh rahe hai.

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Aapne achcha likha hai...
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur hame kuchh achchi shayri padhne ka mauka dijiye...

Mohabbat ki raahon mein chalna sambhal ke
Yahan jo bhi aaya...gaya haath mal ke..!

Log kehte hain Sher kehta hun .
Apne Zhakhmon se khelta hoon main!!!

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