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kabhi eisa koi lamha ho... - 1st December 2009, 12:27 PM

Na khawab ho na khawishe, na ho jhooti farmaishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............ zindagi se na koi shikwa ho,

na rashq ha na ranjishe, na ho dilo me saazishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho........... apno se na koi ruswa ho,

na dard ho na numaishe, na ho ashqo ki barishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... palko pe na koi gam tahera ho,

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

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Na khawab ho na khawishe, na ho jhooti farmaishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............ zindagi se na koi shikwa ho,

na rashq ha na ranjishe, na ho dilo me saazishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho........... apno se na koi ruswa ho,

na dard ho na numaishe, na ho ashqo ki barishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... palko pe na koi gam tahera ho,

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

Shipra..
Shipra jii,

Bahut khoob ehsaas haiN, bahut achha laga padh ke....
Aise hi likhte rahiye....
Khush rahiye......

Aapka dost,
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Shipra Ji...aapki tehreer sabhi ashaar mujhe ache lage...

aakhiri sher khaas pasand aaya..

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....


likhte rahiye...
khush rahiye...
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Shipraa jee Aadaab..........

Aapki is koshish mein ek naya pan hai, aapki tehreer ke ahsaas bahut khoob lage, aur bayani bhi ek dum achchi lagi aur sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage,

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hello shipra ji..... kaisi hai aap..

wakai me aapne har sher ko bahut hi khubsurat shabdo me likha hai...........
likhte rahiye........


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Na khawab ho na khawishe, na ho jhooti farmaishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............ zindagi se na koi shikwa ho,

na rashq ha na ranjishe, na ho dilo me saazishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho........... apno se na koi ruswa ho,

na dard ho na numaishe, na ho ashqo ki barishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... palko pe na koi gam tahera ho,

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

Shipra..


khayaal bahut achcha hai aapka.... kaash aap jaisa sochti hai waisa hi ho.... bahut khoob ....daad kabul farmaye...khush rahiye...


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Shipra jii...

Kaise hai aap? aaj aapki ghazal padh kar behaad aacha laga ..

ehsaas bahut khoob suraat se pesh kiye hain aapne ....har sher ke pasand aaye ... bas itna ki kahugii ..kash kabhie esa koi lamha ho ...aur yeh bhi dua kartii hu aapki har ek khwaish purii ho

Kush rahye

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Bahut khoob ehsaas haiN, bahut achha laga padh ke....
Aise hi likhte rahiye....
Khush rahiye......

Aapka dost,
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BahuT KhoobSuRaT Likha hai aaPne! PaD kaR behaD SakooN Mila!

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Shipra Ji...aapki tehreer sabhi ashaar mujhe ache lage...

aakhiri sher khaas pasand aaya..

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

likhte rahiye...
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Shipraa jee Aadaab..........

Aapki is koshish mein ek naya pan hai, aapki tehreer ke ahsaas bahut khoob lage, aur bayani bhi ek dum achchi lagi aur sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage,

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Kaise hai aap? aaj aapki ghazal padh kar behaad aacha laga ..

ehsaas bahut khoob suraat se pesh kiye hain aapne ....har sher ke pasand aaye ... bas itna ki kahugii ..kash kabhie esa koi lamha ho ...aur yeh bhi dua kartii hu aapki har ek khwaish purii ho

Kush rahye

aur mehfil ko saajataye rahye

Take care

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shipra jee,

namaste:

aap ke khayaal behad achchhe hai.n aur behad maasuum bhii aur nek bhii aap ne kaafi soch samajh kar likhaa hai.... paDh kar achchha lagaa...

Na khawab ho na khawishe, na ho jhooti farmaishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............ zindagi se na koi shikwa ho,

na rashq ha na ranjishe, na ho dilo me saazishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho........... apno se na koi ruswa ho,

na dard ho na numaishe, na ho ashqo ki barishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... palko pe na koi gam tahera ho,

kaash! kaash ! kaash!......... par aisaa hotaa nahii.n...........

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

aray madam! yeh kyaa kah gayee aap? zaraa sochiye, jab na ishq hogaa, na Dhadkan me.n kisii ka pehraa hogaa... to aap ko nahii.n lagtaa ki duniyaa bejaan si ho jaayegiii........


aap ke ehsaas ko is tarah likhaa jaaye to kaisa rahegaa

na khawab ho na khawishe.n, na anginat farmaaishe.n
kaash aisaa bhii ek lamha ho, zindagii se na koii shikwa ho

na rashq ho na ranjishe.n na dilo.n me ho saazishe.n
kaash aisa bhii ek lamha ho, apno se na koii ruswa ho

na dard kii ho numaaishe.n, na ashqo.n ki ho baarishe.n
kaash aisaa bhii ek lamha ho, palko pe na Gham Thehera ho

na ishq pe ho aazmaishe.n, na rasmo ki ho bandishe.n
kaash aisaa bhii ek lamha ho, na daDhkano.n pe pehra ho

apna khayaal rakhiye..

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hello shipra ji..... kaisi hai aap..

wakai me aapne har sher ko bahut hi khubsurat shabdo me likha hai...........
likhte rahiye........


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shipra jee,

namaste:

aap ke khayaal behad achchhe hai.n aur behad maasuum bhii aur nek bhii aap ne kaafi soch samajh kar likhaa hai.... paDh kar achchha lagaa...

Na khawab ho na khawishe, na ho jhooti farmaishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............ zindagi se na koi shikwa ho,

na rashq ha na ranjishe, na ho dilo me saazishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho........... apno se na koi ruswa ho,

na dard ho na numaishe, na ho ashqo ki barishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... palko pe na koi gam tahera ho,

kaash! kaash ! kaash!......... par aisaa hotaa nahii.n...........

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

aray madam! yeh kyaa kah gayee aap? zaraa sochiye, jab na ishq hogaa, na Dhadkan me.n kisii ka pehraa hogaa... to aap ko nahii.n lagtaa ki duniyaa bejaan si ho jaayegiii........

Sahi kaha mayank ji aapne, par duniya me kisi baat ka sabse jyada gam h to wo bhi to isi ki wajah se na.. to kyu na wajah ko hi khatam kar diya jaye....... bus ek khayal h......

aap ke ehsaas ko is tarah likhaa jaaye to kaisa rahegaa

na khawab ho na khawishe.n, na anginat farmaaishe.n
kaash aisaa bhii ek lamha ho, zindagii se na koii shikwa ho

na rashq ho na ranjishe.n na dilo.n me ho saazishe.n
kaash aisa bhii ek lamha ho, apno se na koii ruswa ho

na dard kii ho numaaishe.n, na ashqo.n ki ho baarishe.n
kaash aisaa bhii ek lamha ho, palko pe na Gham Thehera ho

na ishq pe ho aazmaishe.n, na rasmo ki ho bandishe.n
kaash aisaa bhii ek lamha ho, na daDhkano.n pe pehra ho

apna khayaal rakhiye..

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8th December 2009, 11:15 AM

Shipra Jii,,,

Very nice work,,,

Likhte rahiye aur mehfil ki ronaq bharhaate rahiye,,,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,,

Faqat,


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Shipra Jii,,,

Very nice work,,,

Likhte rahiye aur mehfil ki ronaq bharhaate rahiye,,,

Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,,

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Na khawab ho na khawishe, na ho jhooti farmaishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............ zindagi se na koi shikwa ho,

na rashq ha na ranjishe, na ho dilo me saazishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho........... apno se na koi ruswa ho,

na dard ho na numaishe, na ho ashqo ki barishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... palko pe na koi gam tahera ho,

na ishq ho na aazmaishe, na ho rasmo ki bandishe...
kabhi eisa koi lamha ho............... dadhkan pe na koi pehra ho.....

Shipra..

Shipra jee khoobsurat soch ka andaaz, kisi bhi lamha dil se nikle huway jazbaato.n ko lafzi jaama pehnaana ek mushkil kaam hai, soch kar ya you.n kahiye ki phir unki nok palak sanwaar kar unko aur bhi ziyada khoobsurat banaya ja sakta hai jaisa ki Mayank sahab ne aapki is tehree ke liy.n kia hai aur bhi ziyada khoobsurat bana dia hai isko, magr mein ye bhi bakhoobi jaanta hu.n ki jo lagaawo aapko apni kahi baat se hoga chaahei.n wo thodi si ladkhaaii hui hi kyu.n na ho magr hogi dil ke bhut qareeb, likhye aur likhti rahiye, jo baat dil ko choo jaaye whi seehi hoti hai, daad hazir hai aapke is kalaam par qubool keejiye


aslam


you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
   
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