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Tujhe Paana Ek Adaa ... ! - 31st December 2010, 04:30 PM
Tujhe Paana Ek Adaa Ban Jaye
Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"
Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye


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Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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Tujhe Paana Ek Adaa Ban Jaye

Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"

Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye
wah Radhika ji.......bahot hi khub
waise toh puri ghazal ki behadh khubsurat hai par meri sab se favourite lines enlarge kiya hai maine
thnx a lot 4 sharing dost
bahot sukun pahuchi dil ko ye padh kar
daad qabul kare

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Bahut accha likha hai aapne... Ek chota sa Jawab hamari or se bhi kubul kijiye........

Paane ki chahat hi uski rja ban jaaye.
Patthar bhi Mohbbat se Khuda ban jaaye..

Chupti nahi Chupane se kabhi Dile Mohbbat
Ho jaye jise uske jeene ki wajah ban jaaye..

Be-Parda jo nikloge Ghar se tum.
Husn tumhara hi hamari Khataa Ban Jaaye..

Keh rahe hain aaj aapse 'AMIT'
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Wah wah praneeta ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne...... humne bhi kuch likha hai aapke liye....

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Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

Bahut Khoob ... Radhika Ji !

BaDhiyaa koshish ke liye ... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

Aati rahen aur likhti rahen ... Khush rahen ... !

Duaaon ke saath ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"
Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye

bahut khoob............................................. ...

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Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"
Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye


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waise toh puri ghazal ki behadh khubsurat hai par meri sab se favourite lines enlarge kiya hai maine
thnx a lot 4 sharing dost
bahot sukun pahuchi dil ko ye padh kar
daad qabul kare

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Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"
Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye
radhika ji,

bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne...aapke likhne meiN ek gehraayee hai, ehsaasoN ko ba-khubi byaaN kiya hai aapne apne is qalaam meiN...
meri taraf se daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...

'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
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Bahut Khoob ... Radhika Ji !

BaDhiyaa koshish ke liye ... dil se daad hazir hai ... !

Aati rahen aur likhti rahen ... Khush rahen ... !

Duaaon ke saath ... !
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Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"

Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye
radhika ji ...aapkaa kalaam n sirf khoobsurat tha par iske ehsaas kaafee naazuk, soch kaafee gehree aur andaz e bayaan bahaut sateek tha. daad aur duaon ke saath .... zarraa
   
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Tujhe Paana Ek Adaa Ban Jaye
Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"
Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye

Rab jhoot na bulaay Radhika ji...........................
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Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"

Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye
bahut khoob radhika ji,is behtreen peshkas par dil se daad hazir hai----waaaah
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Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

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KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"

Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye

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waah waaaaaaaaah waaaaaah
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aadaab
dekho kab patthar hodaa ban jaaye
waah waaaaaaaaah waaaaaah
qurbaan jaaun is adaa pe is me zindagee hai aas hai peyaas hai aarzoo hai tarap hai
sach baat yahee hai ki ek aorat jitnee sensitive hotee hai mard kabhi nahi hosaktaa hai yahee wajah hai ki baar baar mujhe fmale kalaam apnee taraf kheenchtaa hai kiun ki meraa mannaa hai ki soch ki gahraayi ek aorat me mard ke moqaabele me kaheen zeyaadah hotee hai jis kaa coboot aap ki ya ghazal hai laa jawaab hai khoobsoorat hai
daad hi daad haazir hai
aap ka dost
masood
ji shukriya...............

ji aise koi baat nahi hai..mard bhi bhaut sensitive hote hai...jaha tak shayri ki baat hai to ab tak ke saare aala shayar mard hi rahe hai...sensitive hona aacchi baat hai magar saath meN saamne wale ki parakh hona jaruri hai, ...or mujhe to aap bhi ek sensitive insaan lage.


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Tujhe Paana Ek Adaa Ban Jaye

Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"

Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye
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beautiful lines radhika ji.....
ji shukriya........................


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bahaut khooooooooooooooooooooob Radika dear nice written, daad hazir hai

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Tujhe Paana Ek Adaa Ban Jaye

Dekho Kab Patthar Khudaa Ban Jaye

Chhupate Rahe Jise Apne Aap Se
Woh Rishta Ek Sadaa Ban Jaye

Be-Parda Na Nikla Karo Ghar Se
KahiN Tera Husn Teri Khataa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

RaaheN Ishq Ki Juda Na Karna "Radhika"

Naa Jaane Kab Uski Rajaa Ban Jaye

Ek Ummeed Jagti Hai Har Subha
Gar Tute To Zindagi Sajaa Ban Jaye

Bahut Khoob Radhika jee....!!! Aise hi likhtee rahiyee....!!! Khush rahiyee....!!!

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