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Thumbs up Geet: Ey chaaNdanee... sun le zaraa...! - 2nd August 2015, 07:25 PM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

haaZir huuN pyaar bhare ehsaasoN ke saath aap sab ke beech.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko mere yeh ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge..!

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Ey chaaNdanee…Ey dillagee…Ey aaShiQee…Ey ziNdagee…

Ey chaaNdanee.. sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)

aaNkhoN meiN kaajal
kaanoN meiN Jhumkaa
baaloN kaa raNg haii
bahot hii sunehraa --- (2)

teree yeh naZreN
teree yeh ZulfeN
behkaaye mujh ko , uff !!
ti’ree yeh adaayeN

Ey dillagee .. sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu—(2)

maiN tujh ko chaahuuN
Khud se bhi zyaadaah
bin tere kuChh nah maiN
tu meeraa Khudaa haiii ---(2)

tujh ko hii maaNguu
rab se maiN har dam
tuu meree raat aor
tu meraa saveraa

Ey aaShiqee… sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)

ban ke maiN dhaDkan
ziNdaa huuN tujh meiN
har haal-e-dil mi’raa
tujhe haii sunaayaa – (2)

KhuSh huuN maiN teree
ban kar muHabbat
har Ghum mere ..ti’re
tu mujh meiN samaayaa

Ey ziNdagee… sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)


Ey chaaNdanee…Ey dillagee…Ey aaShiQee…Ey ziNdagee…(2)


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Dhaval ji,

Aapke yeh ehsaas padhkar bahaut achha laga...bahaut khoob likha hai aapne...specially second stanza....dil ko chu gaya aapka yeh geet.

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wahhhh Chottu....................kya khoobsurat geet likha hai....yu hi gaate rho muskurate rho.


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bahut khoob ehsaas piroye hain aapne Dhaval bhai is baar ke bas kyaa kahne...

kaafii aashiqaana aur roomaani khayaal saamne laaye hain aap....bs padhte hi bantaa hai...

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Bahut achche ehsason ko saja ek pyara geet pesh kiya hai aapne dhaval ji....khob sari daad meri taraf se likhte rahein..



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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namaskaar aur Aadaab!!

haaZir huuN pyaar bhare ehsaasoN ke saath aap sab ke beech.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko mere yeh ehsaas pasaNd aayeNge..!

************************

Ey chaaNdanee…Ey dillagee…Ey aaShiQee…Ey ziNdagee…

Ey chaaNdanee.. sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)

aaNkhoN meiN kaajal
kaanoN meiN Jhumkaa
baaloN kaa raNg haii
bahot hii sunehraa --- (2)

teree yeh naZreN
teree yeh ZulfeN
behkaaye mujh ko , uff !!
ti’ree yeh adaayeN

Ey dillagee .. sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu—(2)

maiN tujh ko chaahuuN
Khud se bhi zyaadaah
bin tere kuChh nah maiN
tu meeraa Khudaa haiii ---(2)

tujh ko hii maaNguu
rab se maiN har dam
tuu meree raat aor
tu meraa saveraa

Ey aaShiqee… sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)

ban ke maiN dhaDkan
ziNdaa huuN tujh meiN
har haal-e-dil mi’raa
tujhe haii sunaayaa – (2)

KhuSh huuN maiN teree
ban kar muHabbat
har Ghum mere ..ti’re
tu mujh meiN samaayaa

Ey ziNdagee… sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)


Ey chaaNdanee…Ey dillagee…Ey aaShiQee…Ey ziNdagee…(2)


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Dear Dhaval,

Kya kahoon tumhare s gset ke baare me... Seedha dil ke aar paar ho gaya... Ehsaas zabarsast, bayaani ke to kya hi kehne. Meri dil se dheron daad tumhaare liye.

aaShiqee… sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)

ban ke maiN dhaDkan
ziNdaa huuN tujh meiN
har haal-e-dil mi’raa
tujhe haii sunaayaa – (2)

KhuSh huuN maiN teree
ban kar muHabbat
har Ghum mere ..ti’re
tu mujh meiN samaayaa


Yeh bol khaas bahut pasand aaye. Padhne me itna maza aaya tumne isi feel se gaaya kitna accha hoga.

Likhte raho yunhi. Acche se khayal rakho apna.


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Dhaval ji,

Aapke yeh ehsaas padhkar bahaut achha laga...bahaut khoob likha hai aapne...specially second stanza....dil ko chu gaya aapka yeh geet.

Shukriya share karne ke liye.
Jiya
Jiyaa jee

Namaste

Ehsaason ko paDhne ke liye shukriyaah aapka...koshish pasand aayi jaan kar khushi huii..paDhte rahiye aage bhee

Khush rahen..apnaa khayaal rakhen

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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dhaval ji ye to mujhe geet sa maloom hua. kaash aapki aawaz mein isey sun bhi paate.

bohut romantic types.

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bahut khoob ehsaas piroye hain aapne Dhaval bhai is baar ke bas kyaa kahne...

kaafii aashiqaana aur roomaani khayaal saamne laaye hain aap....bs padhte hi bantaa hai...

likhte rahiye....
Shaad bhai

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Ghazal ki pasandgee ke liye maiN aapka ShukraGuzaar huuN bhaii...paDhte rahiye aage bhee...saath dete rahiye....Shukriyaah

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Kya kahoon tumhare s gset ke baare me... Seedha dil ke aar paar ho gaya... Ehsaas zabarsast, bayaani ke to kya hi kehne. Meri dil se dheron daad tumhaare liye.

aaShiqee… sun le zaraa feekee lage merii jaaN se tuu – (2)

ban ke maiN dhaDkan
ziNdaa huuN tujh meiN
har haal-e-dil mi’raa
tujhe haii sunaayaa – (2)

KhuSh huuN maiN teree
ban kar muHabbat
har Ghum mere ..ti’re
tu mujh meiN samaayaa


Yeh bol khaas bahut pasand aaye. Padhne me itna maza aaya tumne isi feel se gaaya kitna accha hoga.

Likhte raho yunhi. Acche se khayal rakho apna.
Pulkit bhaiya

Namaste

Kaise hain aap

Dil se nikle hue ehsaas aapko pasand aayen jaan kar behad khushii huii...shukriyaah aapka..aage bhee padhte rahiye ...

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Aapki daad sar aankhoN par...shukriyaah...padhte rahiye aage bhee ...aage aur mehnat zaaree rahegii


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bohut romantic types.

baaloN kaa raNg haii
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hmmm....ye jaan angrez hai kya.
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Aapko geet itnaa pasand aayaa bahot khushii hui yeh jaan kar..aur jaan angrez nahiiN bhabhi ...indian hi hai...sunehre baalon wali line iis ye add kee kyuNki baalon ko clr karwaaya thaa sunehraa to geet me shaamil bhee ho gayaa... chalo aapko yeh line pasand aayi khushi hui...aur geet gaa ke bhee sunaayaa use to pasand bhee kiaa ...matlab koshish kaamyaab hui


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