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Ek Sipahi Ke Kuch Ehsaas... (Mujhe Yaad Rakhna) - 28th July 2010, 01:51 PM

(Ek Sipaahi Jung Pe Jaate Jaate.. Chand Shabdo Se... Apne Pariwaar Ko Alwidaah Keh Raha Hai)


Wardi Nahi Hai Kafan Daala..
Haatho Mein Liye Shool Bhaala...
Aur Sab Kuch Maine Bhula Daala...
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Maa Tere Doodh Ka Karz...
Phir Ek Janm Leke Utaaroo.. Ga
Is Janam Maine Karn Karn Apna..
Maatra Bhoomi Ko Samapit Kar Dalaa..
Maa Mujhe Maaf Kar Denaa...
Sipaahi Ho Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Patni,... Tere Haatho Ki Chooriya..
Mujhe-se Sawaal Karti Hai..
Laut Wapas Aaoogaa Ya Nahi..
Yeh Soch Woh Darti Hai..
Naa Aaya to.. Yaad Kar
Aasoo Mat Bahana.
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Bitiyaa Raani Sojaa ...
Meethe Meethe Sapno Me Khoja..
Tujh Jaise Auro Ke Liye..
Aaj Mujhe Jaana Hoga...
Apne Mitti Ko ...
Gairo Se Bachaana Hoga..
Kal Jab Tu Badi Hogi..
Garv se Mera Naam Lenaa..
Sipaahi Hoon Apne Desh Kaa...
Sirf Itna Tum Yaad Rakhna

Sarhad Mera Ghar...
Mere Saathi Mera Pariwar Hai...
Aaj Nibhani Hai Mujhe
Mere Vachno Ki Maala
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Itna tum Yaad Rakhna...
Mujhe Tum Yaad Rakhna
Mujhe Tum Yaad Rakhna


   
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28th July 2010, 02:34 PM

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(Ek Sipaahi Jung Pe Jaate Jaate.. Chand Shabdo Se... Apne Pariwaar Ko Alwidaah Keh Raha Hai)


Wardi Nahi Hai Kafan Daala..
Haatho Mein Liye Shool Bhaala...
Aur Sab Kuch Maine Bhula Daala...
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Maa Tere Doodh Ka Karz...
Phir Ek Janm Leke Utaaroo.. Ga
Is Janam Maine Karn Karn Apna..
Maatra Bhoomi Ko Samapit Kar Dalaa..
Maa Mujhe Maaf Kar Denaa...
Sipaahi Ho Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Patni,... Tere Haatho Ki Chooriya..
Mujhe-se Sawaal Karti Hai..
Laut Wapas Aaoogaa Ya Nahi..
Yeh Soch Woh Darti Hai..
Naa Aaya to.. Yaad Kar
Aasoo Mat Bahana.
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Bitiyaa Raani Sojaa ...
Meethe Meethe Sapno Me Khoja..
Tujh Jaise Auro Ke Liye..
Aaj Mujhe Jaana Hoga...
Apne Mitti Ko ...
Gairo Se Bachaana Hoga..
Kal Jab Tu Badi Hogi..
Garv se Mera Naam Lenaa..
Sipaahi Hoon Apne Desh Kaa...
Sirf Itna Tum Yaad Rakhna

Sarhad Mera Ghar...
Mere Saathi Mera Pariwar Hai...
Aaj Nibhani Hai Mujhe
Mere Vachno Ki Maala
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Itna tum Yaad Rakhna...
Mujhe Tum Yaad Rakhna
Mujhe Tum Yaad Rakhna

Wah aashique jee bahut khoob, bahut accha laga padhkar, mujhe bhi garv hai ki mere pita bhi airforce ke sipahi hain.........


Aapka Santosh..........


Bahut tanhaiya.N hai.N mere hisse mei.N churalo tum
Tumhara saath meri tanhaiyo.N se kuch to behtar hai...
   
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28th July 2010, 03:08 PM

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Wah aashique jee bahut khoob, bahut accha laga padhkar, mujhe bhi garv hai ki mere pita bhi airforce ke sipahi hain.........

Santosh Ji..

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Aur Har Us Desh ke Sipaahi Ko Mera Salaam

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28th July 2010, 03:42 PM




dil ko chu gaye ahsaas, aur bahut kuch yaad dilla gaye, bahut apne se lage yeh ahsaas.

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dil ko chu gaye ahsaas, aur bahut kuch yaad dilla gaye, bahut apne se lage yeh ahsaas.

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shukriyaa Sunita..

Main to bas ek Koshish Ki.. Us Dard Ko Shabdo main Samatne Ki.. Jise Is Desh Ka har Sipaahi.. Jeeta Hai ...


akela sipaahi hi nahi.....................uska pariwaar bhi es dard ko jeeta hai, balki sipaahi se kahiN jayada es dard ko uska pariwaar jeeta hai, yeh dard hamara bahut kreebhi hai, har khushi meiN har gum meiN bahut tadpata hai yeh


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28th July 2010, 03:54 PM

Lagta Hai Kahin Maine Aapke Dard Ko Ched diyaa...

lagta Hai Jaise Aapka Koi Kareebi Bhi Is Desh Ka Sipaahi Ho..

haa Yeh Baat Bilkul Sahi Hai

Woh Ranjis Woh Chinta.. Woh Intzaar Jo Pariwaar Ke Aankhon Main Hota Hai.. Main To shayad Use Bayaan Bhi nahi Kar SAkta...

Is Sansaar Ke Har Sipaahi Ko Mera Salaam...


   
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Lagta Hai Kahin Maine Aapke Dard Ko Ched diyaa...

lagta Hai Jaise Aapka Koi Kareebi Bhi Is Desh Ka Sipaahi Ho..

haa Yeh Baat Bilkul Sahi Hai

Woh Ranjis Woh Chinta.. Woh Intzaar Jo Pariwaar Ke Aankhon Main Hota Hai.. Main To shayad Use Bayaan Bhi nahi Kar SAkta...

Is Sansaar Ke Har Sipaahi Ko Mera Salaam...
Ji aapne sahi pehchana hai...yeh dard hamara bahut kareebi hai...hamara apna desh ka Sipaahi tha...ab Shaheed lagta hai unke naam ke aage.


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Ji aapne sahi pehchana hai...yeh dard hamara bahut kareebi hai...hamara apna desh ka Sipaahi tha...ab Shaheed lagta hai unke naam ke aage.

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30th July 2010, 04:27 PM

Aashiqueji,

aapki rachna behad pasand ayi.
Kaash yeh dard aaj kal ke desh ke thekedaar bhi samajh sake aur desh ke sipahiyo ke sarhad pe desh bachane na jaana pade. Yeh sochne ki baat hai kya values aur principals sirf soldiers and kuch defence officials ke liye reh gaye hain. The main strings are in the hands of the people, who if they wish and work towards, these circumstances and situations may not be there in the first place.
the poem is very touching but sorry to say this , these days I wish our soilders should not have to pay the price with their lives for situations which if wanted and in right hands can be controlled.

thanks for the poem, sorry for the outburst.Its just my opinion.

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khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
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lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
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Aashiqueji,

aapki rachna behad pasand ayi.
Kaash yeh dard aaj kal ke desh ke thekedaar bhi samajh sake aur desh ke sipahiyo ke sarhad pe desh bachane na jaana pade. Yeh sochne ki baat hai kya values aur principals sirf soldiers and kuch defence officials ke liye reh gaye hain. The main strings are in the hands of the people, who if they wish and work towards, these circumstances and situations may not be there in the first place.
the poem is very touching but sorry to say this , these days I wish our soilders should not have to pay the price with their lives for situations which if wanted and in right hands can be controlled.

thanks for the poem, sorry for the outburst.Its just my opinion.

best regards
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Dont be Sorry for outburst... Its Natural...

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Wardi Nahi Hai Kafan Daala..
Haatho Mein Liye Shool Bhaala...
Aur Sab Kuch Maine Bhula Daala...
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Maa Tere Doodh Ka Karz...
Phir Ek Janm Leke Utaaroo.. Ga
Is Janam Maine Karn Karn Apna..
Maatra Bhoomi Ko Samapit Kar Dalaa..
Maa Mujhe Maaf Kar Denaa...
Sipaahi Ho Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Patni,... Tere Haatho Ki Chooriya..
Mujhe-se Sawaal Karti Hai..
Laut Wapas Aaoogaa Ya Nahi..
Yeh Soch Woh Darti Hai..
Naa Aaya to.. Yaad Kar
Aasoo Mat Bahana.
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Tum Itna Yaad Rakhna

Bitiyaa Raani Sojaa ...
Meethe Meethe Sapno Me Khoja..
Tujh Jaise Auro Ke Liye..
Aaj Mujhe Jaana Hoga...
Apne Mitti Ko ...
Gairo Se Bachaana Hoga..
Kal Jab Tu Badi Hogi..
Garv se Mera Naam Lenaa..
Sipaahi Hoon Apne Desh Kaa...
Sirf Itna Tum Yaad Rakhna

Sarhad Mera Ghar...
Mere Saathi Mera Pariwar Hai...
Aaj Nibhani Hai Mujhe
Mere Vachno Ki Maala
Sipaahi Hoo Apne Desh Kaa..
Sirf Itna tum Yaad Rakhna...
Mujhe Tum Yaad Rakhna
Mujhe Tum Yaad Rakhna
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