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Jhootay Khuwaab Sajaaye Bhudha Sa Aadmi..!! (Bhudhe Qulli Ki Aap-beeti)
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Exclamation Jhootay Khuwaab Sajaaye Bhudha Sa Aadmi..!! (Bhudhe Qulli Ki Aap-beeti) - 7th August 2014, 01:38 AM

Adaab! Hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard!
Aik puraani 'koshish', jo pehle pesh ki thi,
aik bhudhe 'QULLI' ki aap-beeti, ik kadwi haQeeqat,
lekin roman Urdu ki wajah se hazireen ko mushkil hui,
ab behtari ke saath pesh kar raha hooN:-

sir pe sandooQ rakhe bhudha sa aadmi
ghareebi ka bhoj uthaye bhudha sa aadmi

dikhnay meiN lagta hai naheef, lekin!
mano'N wazN le jaaye bhudha sa aadmi


naheef: kamzoor, vigourless

koi bhi taras nahi khaata phir bhi!!
zabt ka daman thaame bhudha sa aadmi

dhundh.li aankhon meiN halki si hai chamak
jhootay khuwaab sajaaye bhudha sa aadmi

kabhi us ke Qadam lad,kha,raate nahi, hSn!
jawano ko pechay chhoday bhudha sa aadmi


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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7th August 2014, 11:58 AM

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Adaab! Hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard!
Aik puraani 'koshish', jo pehle pesh ki thi,
aik bhudhe 'QULLI' ki aap-beeti, ik kadwi haQeeqat,
lekin roman Urdu ki wajah se hazireen ko mushkil hui,
ab behtari ke saath pesh kar raha hooN:-

sir pe sandooQ rakhe bhudha sa aadmi
ghareebi ka bhoj uthaye bhudha sa aadmi
dikhnay meiN lagta hai naheef, lekin!
mano'N wazN le jaaye bhudha sa aadmi


naheef: kamzoor, vigourless
koi bhi taras nahi khaata phir bhi!!
zabt ka daman thaame bhudha sa aadmi
dhundh.li aankhon meiN halki si hai chamak
jhootay khuwaab sajaaye bhudha sa aadmi
kabhi us ke Qadam lad,kha,raate nahi, hSn!
jawano ko pechay chhoday bhudha sa aadmi


Bohat khoob hassan sahab......dehron daad





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Jab tak tum hum mile na the

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Adaab! Hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard!
Aik puraani 'koshish', jo pehle pesh ki thi,
aik bhudhe 'QULLI' ki aap-beeti, ik kadwi haQeeqat,
lekin roman Urdu ki wajah se hazireen ko mushkil hui,
ab behtari ke saath pesh kar raha hooN:-

sir pe sandooQ rakhe bhudha sa aadmi
ghareebi ka bhoj uthaye bhudha sa aadmi

dikhnay meiN lagta hai naheef, lekin!
mano'N wazN le jaaye bhudha sa aadmi


naheef: kamzoor, vigourless

koi bhi taras nahi khaata phir bhi!!
zabt ka daman thaame bhudha sa aadmi

dhundh.li aankhon meiN halki si hai chamak
jhootay khuwaab sajaaye bhudha sa aadmi

kabhi us ke Qadam lad,kha,raate nahi, hSn!
jawano ko pechay chhoday bhudha sa aadmi
achchi ghazal bani hai Hassan. reality se bharpur...keep it up


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7th August 2014, 12:15 PM

Hassanbhai!!!!
waaah... kya laajawaab qalaam buna hai.... pur haqiqat aur pur zor ashaar se bhari hai ye tehriir....
dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad...



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Bohat khoob hassan sahab......dehron daad
Ananth jiii,,

Ehsasaat ko pasand karne k liye behad manooN hooN!

Milte rahiye ga,

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achchi ghazal bani hai Hassan. reality se bharpur...keep it up
Pari,

ManooN-o-mashkoor hooN is qadar pazeraayi ke liye!

Umeed hai aagay bhi aise hi saath milta rahe ga,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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moHteram janaab Hassan saHb !

appki yeh ghazal peRh to aisy laga jaisy zindagi ki talkhioN ka nochoR hoN , aisy bahut saary buRhy insaan haiN yahaN UAE mai jinki saari umar guzar jaati hai kamaany mai , or unki aulaad ko zara bhi sharm nahi aati ussy ujaaRny mai , jawaani mai kamaaty haiN apni aulaad ke liye takeh aulaad buRhaapy ka sahaara bany or buRhaapy mai kamaana peRta hai keh khud ko zinda rakh sakieN kiyoN keh wohi aulaad kehti hai , appne kiya kiya hai hamary liye

khair ...

apki yeh tehreer qabil e tareef hai , daad qabool fermaaiye

Allah hum sako apne waldaiN ka sahaara banany ki taufeeq ataa fermaae
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Hassanbhai!!!!
waaah... kya laajawaab qalaam buna hai.... pur haqiqat aur pur zor ashaar se bhari hai ye tehriir....
dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad...
Adil bhai,

Is qadar pazeraayi aur mohabbat ke liye manooN hooN bhai!

Aise hi milte rahiye ga,

DuaaoN ke saath,


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moHteram janaab Hassan saHb !

appki yeh ghazal peRh to aisy laga jaisy zindagi ki talkhioN ka nochoR hoN , aisy bahut saary buRhy insaan haiN yahaN UAE mai jinki saari umar guzar jaati hai kamaany mai , or unki aulaad ko zara bhi sharm nahi aati ussy ujaaRny mai , jawaani mai kamaaty haiN apni aulaad ke liye takeh aulaad buRhaapy ka sahaara bany or buRhaapy mai kamaana peRta hai keh khud ko zinda rakh sakieN kiyoN keh wohi aulaad kehti hai , appne kiya kiya hai hamary liye

khair ...

apki yeh tehreer qabil e tareef hai , daad qabool fermaaiye

Allah hum sako apne waldaiN ka sahaara banany ki taufeeq ataa fermaae
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Aap ki baat solaa aanay sach hai...

Allah hum sab ko apne waldaiN ka sahaara ban'ne ki taufeeQ atta farmaye (Ameen)..

Milte rahiye,,

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Adaab! Hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard!
Aik puraani 'koshish', jo pehle pesh ki thi,
aik bhudhe 'QULLI' ki aap-beeti, ik kadwi haQeeqat,
lekin roman Urdu ki wajah se hazireen ko mushkil hui,
ab behtari ke saath pesh kar raha hooN:-

sir pe sandooQ rakhe bhudha sa aadmi
ghareebi ka bhoj uthaye bhudha sa aadmi

dikhnay meiN lagta hai naheef, lekin!
mano'N wazN le jaaye bhudha sa aadmi


naheef: kamzoor, vigourless

koi bhi taras nahi khaata phir bhi!!
zabt ka daman thaame bhudha sa aadmi

dhundh.li aankhon meiN halki si hai chamak
jhootay khuwaab sajaaye bhudha sa aadmi

kabhi us ke Qadam lad,kha,raate nahi, hSn!
jawano ko pechay chhoday bhudha sa aadmi
bahot khoob hassan saahab.... kyaa baat hai......... bahot acchee manzarkashi hai..... aur zindgaee ki haqeeqat..... likhte rahen

Shaad...


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Adaab! Hazireen-e-meHfil-e-dard!
Aik puraani 'koshish', jo pehle pesh ki thi,
aik bhudhe 'QULLI' ki aap-beeti, ik kadwi haQeeqat,
lekin roman Urdu ki wajah se hazireen ko mushkil hui,
ab behtari ke saath pesh kar raha hooN:-

sir pe sandooQ rakhe bhudha sa aadmi
ghareebi ka bhoj uthaye bhudha sa aadmi

dikhnay meiN lagta hai naheef, lekin!
mano'N wazN le jaaye bhudha sa aadmi


naheef: kamzoor, vigourless

koi bhi taras nahi khaata phir bhi!!
zabt ka daman thaame bhudha sa aadmi

dhundh.li aankhon meiN halki si hai chamak
jhootay khuwaab sajaaye bhudha sa aadmi

kabhi us ke Qadam lad,kha,raate nahi, hSn!
jawano ko pechay chhoday bhudha sa aadmi
ek basnaseeb talkh haqeeqat ka jigardoz asardaar bayaan kiya Hassan bhai aap ne. behad umdah qalaam hai !!


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bahot khoob hassan saahab.... kyaa baat hai......... bahot acchee manzarkashi hai..... aur zindgaee ki haqeeqat..... likhte rahen

Shaad...
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MohabbatoN se nawaazne ka bohat shukriyaaH!

Milte rahiye,,

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ek basnaseeb talkh haqeeqat ka jigardoz asardaar bayaan kiya Hassan bhai aap ne. behad umdah qalaam hai !!
Zarraa saheb,

Khaak lafzoN ko iss qadar pazeeraayi dene ke liye behad mashkoor hooN!

Milte rahiye ga,

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