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Aaj Phir Dil Hai Kuch Udaas Udaas -
26th April 2003, 09:02 AM
Aaj Phir Dil Hai Kuch Udaas Udaas, Jaane Kyun Ek Mayusi Si Chayi Hai, Aaj Phir Palkoon Pai Pani Hai, Bheerd Mein Hoon, Phir Kyun Ye Tanhaayi Hai.
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nice poem |
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nice poem -
26th April 2003, 11:30 AM
hi dear
in chhar lines mai dil ki haalat byaan kar di aapne shayad kuchh aap pe bhi waise hi biti hai jaisi hum pe par no chinta no fikar hum jaison ke liye hi to hai shayri.com nahi such aapne bhut achha likha hai keep it up ek sher bhej raha hun humne socha tha ke haakim se karenge fariyaad .. wo bhi kambakht tera chaahne waala nikla ! anish tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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hi gudiya!!! |
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hi gudiya!!! -
27th April 2003, 01:58 AM
hi. gudiya,
aap ne bohot aachi tarah se apne gam ka izhaar kiya hai. Umeed hai aap isi tarah or isse or behtar likh ne ki koshis karogi.. aap likhte rehna hum aapke likha hua padne ka intezaar karenge! Bye gudiya!! Apni marzi se kaha apne safar ke hum hai, Rukh hawaoo ka jidhar ka hai,udhar ke ham hai. |
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8th June 2003, 11:57 PM
bohat khoob Gudia ji...
achcha likha hai... dard aur kashish dono hi haiN isme... likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye... |
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