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Love vo ek baat. ... - 10th September 2014, 09:28 PM
Vo ek baat jise kahne ki tamnna zamane se thi..
jise tumse kah paana Ek khwaab tha hansi

jo kah deti to poori ho jati kai khwahishein...
Vo baat jo khud se bhi kabhi kahi hi nahi...

aur use yoon dil me sambhaal kar rakha tha..
Keemti tohfa jaise sambhaal kar rakhta hai koi...

vahi ik baat us pal kaise fisal gayi mere hothon se...
Kabhi pahle itna majboor dil ko paaya hi nahi...

hawa me ghul gayi thi vo khusboo bankar..
aur main usi nashe me gum huyi thi kanhi...

ye vo baat thi jisne badal diya mujhko....
Aur Aaj Lagta hai Main vo madhu kabhi thi hi nahi..


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11th September 2014, 12:25 PM
bahut acche se man ke haalaat kea chitran kiya hai aapne madhu jee......very nice..


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11th September 2014, 12:38 PM
Vo ek baat, use yoon dil me sambhaal kar rakha tha..
Keemti tohfa jaise sambhaal kar rakhta hai koi...

Vo ek baat us pal fisal gayi thi mere hothon se...
Kabhi pahle itna majboor dil ko paaya hi nahi...

Vo ek baat hawa me ghul gayi thi khusboo bankar..
Aur main usi nashe me gum huyi thi kanhi..

wahh! waahh! waaah! Madhu jee,

Bohat pur-asar andaaz se aap ne nazm ko tarteeb diya hai,
alfaazoN ka chunao bhi khoob raha... aur ishQ ke ehsaas bhi
saaf nazar aa rahe haiN kalaam meiN... bohat bohat acchi lagi
aap ki yeH nazm.. in khoobsorat alfaazoN ki jitni tareef ki jaye..
shayed kam paD jaye.... dherooN daad iss behatreen kaawish ke liye..

Likhte rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,

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12th September 2014, 03:26 PM
bohut khoob madhuji..
vo ek baat...vo ek baat keh keh ke aap ne ek khoobsurat Nazm puri kardi.
Mubarak ho.
Likhte rahiye.
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Boht Umda! - 14th September 2014, 09:53 PM
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vo ek baat jise kahne ki tamnna zamane se thi..
Jise tumse kah paana ek khwaab tha hansi..

Vo ek baat jo kah deti to poori ho jati kai khwahishein...
Vo khud se bhi kabhi kahi hi nahi...

Vo ek baat, use yoon dil me sambhaal kar rakha tha..
Keemti tohfa jaise sambhaal kar rakhta hai koi...

Vo ek baat us pal fisal gayi thi mere hothon se...
Kabhi pahle itna majboor dil ko paaya hi nahi...

Vo ek baat hawa me ghul gayi thi khusboo bankar..
Aur main usi nashe me gum huyi thi kanhi...

Vo ek baat jisne badal diya mujhko....
Aaj lagta hai main vo madhu kabhi thi hi nahi..
umda khyalat ka izhaar kia aapne, likhte raheeay
   
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16th September 2014, 05:38 PM
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bahut acche se man ke haalaat kea chitran kiya hai aapne madhu jee......very nice..
Bahut abhaar aapka arvind ji...ki aapne meri kavita ko pafa aur pasand kiya....yoon hi aate rahiye..


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17th September 2014, 12:16 AM
bht sweet hai aapki ye pyari si kavita... madhu ji.... loved it...

Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
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23rd September 2014, 11:13 PM
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Vo ek baat jise kahne ki tamnna zamane se thi..
jise tumse kah paana Ek khwaab tha hansi..

Vo Ek baat jo kah deti to poori ho jati kai khwahishein...
Vo khud se bhi kabhi kahi hi nahi...

Vo ek baat, use yoon dil me sambhaal kar rakha tha..
Keemti tohfa jaise sambhaal kar rakhta hai koi...

Vo ek baat us pal fisal gayi thi mere hothon se...
Kabhi pahle itna majboor dil ko paaya hi nahi...

Vo ek baat hawa me ghul gayi thi khusboo bankar..
Aur main usi nashe me gum huyi thi kanhi...

Vo ek baat jisne badal diya mujhko....
Aaj Lagta hai Main vo madhu kabhi thi hi nahi..



jis baat meiN etni khoobsurti hai...wo baat agar aap keh deti to...kya manjar hota Madhu ji...aapki wo ek baat....masha-allah



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25th September 2014, 08:57 AM
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Vo ek baat, use yoon dil me sambhaal kar rakha tha..
Keemti tohfa jaise sambhaal kar rakhta hai koi...

Vo ek baat us pal fisal gayi thi mere hothon se...
Kabhi pahle itna majboor dil ko paaya hi nahi...

Vo ek baat hawa me ghul gayi thi khusboo bankar..
Aur main usi nashe me gum huyi thi kanhi..

wahh! waahh! waaah! Madhu jee,

Bohat pur-asar andaaz se aap ne nazm ko tarteeb diya hai,
alfaazoN ka chunao bhi khoob raha... aur ishQ ke ehsaas bhi
saaf nazar aa rahe haiN kalaam meiN... bohat bohat acchi lagi
aap ki yeH nazm.. in khoobsorat alfaazoN ki jitni tareef ki jaye..
shayed kam paD jaye.... dherooN daad iss behatreen kaawish ke liye..

Likhte rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,
Bahut bahut shukriya...hassan ji ..mamooli si koshish ki itni tareef k liye...aapko mere ehsaas pasand aaye...shukriya.
Yoon hi aate rahein..
Sath dete rahein..


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25th September 2014, 12:36 PM
bahot acchii peshkash hai Madhu saahibaa.......... dil se daad aapko wo bhi dher saarii..

likhtii rahiye

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bohut khoob madhuji..
vo ek baat...vo ek baat keh keh ke aap ne ek khoobsurat Nazm puri kardi.
Mubarak ho.
Likhte rahiye.
Mujeeb Parwaaz
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11th December 2014, 06:52 AM
Madhu ji ,
Aap ki yeh nazam padne se kaise maiN chook gaya pehle .

Bahut pyare ehsaas aur ek hulchal si guddgudti aapke dil ko ,
tatolti hui ki vo ek baat ka safar kaisa raha aur anjame mohabaat
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Bahut achcha likha aapne .

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